UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 13
PAGE ELEVEN [5 panels]
11.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Zaac is now kneeling over the subject and is checking his pulse to make sure he’s ok.
Drew is standing behind him, and his arm is changing back to a regular arm. The ink
that makes up his tattoo is now extremely faded.
DREW
IS HE GOOD?
ZAAC
DREW
HE’S BREATHING. DON’T THINK MORPHING INTO A
GORILLA THEN GETTING BEAT UP LEAVES YOU
FEELING TOO ‘GOOD’.
FAIR.
11.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Medium shot of Drew and Zaac now standing. Zaac is examining Drew’s tattoo which is
now fading away fully and Drew is kinda looking off at the mess. The police are coming
from off screen but there will be the sound of a siren coming in as an onomatopoeia. The
word itself should be red and blue as if it were a police siren.
ZAAC
THE INK LASTED PRETTY LONG THIS TIME. I’M GLAD
DAD IS SUCH A GOOD CHEMIST.
DREW
ZAAC
SFX
YEA, THOUGH IT LOOKS LIKE THE CHOSEN’S
CHEMISTS ARE GETTING CLOSER. MAYBE WE SHOULD
HAVE DESTROYED THE LAB BEFORE WE LEFT THE
CULT.
MAYBE WE SHOULD HA–
WOOOOOOOOOWWWWOOOOOOOO
11.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Full body shot of the boys as they turn to run for the emergency exit. Drew has a head
start and is about to pull the door open. Zaac is looking back over his shoulder in the
direction of the siren.
SFX
ZAAC
DREW
OOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWOOOOOO
SHIT. IT’S THE CHEESE.
I SWEAR. NEW ZEALAND HAS SOME WEIRD ASS SLANG.