UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 9
PAGE EIGHT [5 panels]
8.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Shot of Zaac just watching what's going on. He’s not doing all that much, maybe
checking his phone. Unfortunately this is a normal night out for him.
ZAAC
(Half Heartedly)
WHOO. GO DREW. YOU GOT THAT… GORILLA… GUY…
8.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Shot of the two cloaked cultists from earlier (3.1) sneaking out of the emergency exit.
Neither of their faces are visible, but one has a clipboard in their hand. One is holding
the door open for the other.
ZAAC
HANG ON…
8.3 - EXT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Outside the emergency exit as Zaac follows the cultists. He’s trying to sneak but not that
well.
8.4 - EXT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Medium shot of the Cultists talking outside of a white van. Zaac is in the background
listening but out of sight.
CULTIST 1
WRITE DOWN THAT SUBJECT 327 WAS A FAILURE. I
THINK IT WAS AN ISSUE WITH BLOWOUT AGAIN.
CULTIST 2
CULTIST 1
YUP, YUP. GOT THAT ALL DOWN. SHOULD I WRITE
ANYTHING DOWN ABOUT ISABELLE’S KID?
NAH. WE CAN JUST MENTION HIM WHEN WE GIVE
OUR REPORT.
8.5 - EXT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Shot from behind the van. Zaac is now crouching behind the van as a cultist gets in the
passenger side.
CULTIST 2
HE’S GONNA HAVE HIS HANDS FULL FOR A MINUTE
THERE. WAS THIS ONE A FULL INK OR A TEMPORARY?
I FORGOT TO CHECK THE BOX.
CULTIST 1
(from the van)
ZAAC
(to himself)
TEMPORARY. GLAD THE SPRINKLERS DIDN’T GO OFF.
THE SPRINKLERS…