UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 7
PAGE FIVE [X panels]
5.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
People are scattering and running for the exits, but the Gorilla Subject is smashing
things, and throwing people around.
SPECTATOR
AAAAHHHHH
5.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Medium shot of the boys watching the chaos. They are concerned, but not as much as
you’d expect if a giant gorilla appeared in front of you. Drew is reaching down to pull his
sweatshirt off.
ZAAC
BRO, EVERY TIME WE GO OUT!?
DREW
I KNOW RIGHT? LOOKS LIKE THEY CAN’T GET THE
FORMULA RIGHT. THEIR TEST SUBJECTS KEEP
MORPHING.
5.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Same shot as the last panel, but now Drew has his sweatshirt off, and his right arm is
glowing blue around his tattoos. They’re Biomechanical tattoos [R4].
ZAAC
DON’T GO TOO HARD. MUM’LL BE PISSED IF YOU CARK
IT.
DREW
I KNOW, I KNOW.
5.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Wide panel showing Drew’s arm extended out to his right, it is now fully metal with
gears and pistons, as if his tattoos came to life and took over his arm. He looks ready to
throw down. Zaac is standing behind him looking unphased.
DREW
I DON’T WANT TO ACCIDENTALLY KILL HIM EITHER.