UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 5
PAGE THREE [5 panels]
3.1 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Aerial view of the crowd as the boys push their way closer to the front of the crowd.
Don’t focus on it, but there should be 2 cultists in cloaks staked out by the emergency
exit. Drew is bumping into people as he’s dragged by Zaac.
DREW
SORRY.
3.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
From behind we see the boys push past a shirtless man (SUBJECT) who has a tattoo of a
gorilla on his arm.
DREW
OOPS. SORRY MAN.
3.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Full body shot of subject as he stares blankly at Drew. He should be almost blank eyed,
like he's looking at nothing. Nothing is going on behind the eyes vibe. His tattoo now
seems to be glowing a little in the same way that Drew’s did at home.
DREW
UUUUUHHHH…
3.4 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Drew is still looking back at the man, but Zaac is pulling him into a mosh pit between a
few people. Drew looks confused and a little concerned.
DREW
ZAAC?
ZAAC
YEA MAN?
3.5 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
The boys are now standing on the edge of a mosh, there are people dressed in black
band t-shirts and other punk show clothing flailing and running behind them. Zaac is
looking excitedly at the pit, but Drew is still looking back to where the man just
disappeared into the crowd. There should be a smaller inset panel that shows Zaac with
a “You’ve gotta be kidding me” look on his face, and his face half lit by red light.
DREW
I THINK I SAW A CHOSEN…
ZAAC
(From inset panel)
SHIT. NOT THE KIND OF MOSH I WANTED.