UNTraditional Pitch Package

UNTraditional #1 — Foster R. Kupbens — v2 3
PAGE TWO [5 panels]
2.1 - EXT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Establishing Shot of the Hawthorne Theater in Portland [R7]. You can fill the Outdoor
concert board [R8] with whatever punk bands you like, but the last one should be ALL
TIME LOW. There’s a bouncer standing by the door, and there are a couple of punk
looking concert goers outside smoking. Maybe someone puking in the corner. It’s a punk
show at a very punk venue. The boys are already inside but we should see Drew’s scream
as an Onomatopoeia floating through the open door.
ZAAC
(From the door)
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
CAP
HAWTHORNE THEATER
PORTLAND OR
2.2 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
Medium shot of Drew and Zaac standing next to each other by the back of the crowd.
We’re seeing their faces as they look up at the stage. Drew looks devastated, and Zaac
has an “I told you so” look.
DREW
WE MISSED THEM!
ZAAC
DREW
ZAAC
YUP.
WE SHOULD HAVE LEFT EARLIER…
YUP.
2.3 - INT. Hawthorne Theater–Night
View of the stage as the opening band packs up. We can see a couple of heads in the
foreground as the guys look over the crowd. The panel is focussing on the bassist who is
handing his guitar to a stage hand. The Bassist is thin with mid length black hair and
black eyeliner. He’s wearing a short sleeve button up and black jeans.
ZAAC
(From off panel)
MAYBE HE’LL COME DOWN TO WATCH THE NEXT SET.
DREW
(From off panel)
MAYBE...