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ReadFin Literary Journal (Winter 2018)

In the compilation of the 'Readfin' Literary Journal the editors and designers have worked closely together. The final outcome is a journal that incorporates fiction, poetry and prose, illustration, and creative fiction – a melting pot, something for everyone. Journals such as this have wide ranging appeal, not only for those who have submitted stories, but great as gifts, for book clubs, and an illustration of what can be achieved for students of writing and publishing. 'Readfin' is a published book with their writing.

In the compilation of the 'Readfin' Literary Journal the editors and designers have worked closely together. The final outcome is a journal that incorporates fiction, poetry and prose, illustration, and creative fiction – a melting pot, something for everyone. Journals such as this have wide ranging appeal, not only for those who have submitted stories, but great as gifts, for book clubs, and an illustration of what can be achieved for students of writing and publishing. 'Readfin' is a published book with their writing.

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Poetry in Prose

Michael Freundt

In the musical play Carousel, a spruiker called Bill, and Julie, who

works in a mill, try to tell each other how they feel. They don’t

have the words to be true to such feelings so they sing it to make

it real: what “if I loved you?” The scene needs the music to supply

the emotion and for the would-be lovers to be who they are, not for

writers to give them words they would never use. Songs in musicals

happen when words are not enough. Poetry happens when prose in

not enough. To describe a spectacular tree, you can try to write it

realistically as best you can but if it is truly spectacular you will get

to a stage where you have to forget what you see and write what you

feel; what it reminds you of; what the words are for: sense, surprise,

and metaphor. When Auden wrote “As I walked out one evening,

walking down Bristol Street” he described what he did, and then

what he saw, but what he saw was so such more and he had no words

that did justice to the scenery “The crowds upon the pavement” so

he slipped into poetry, “were fields of harvest wheat.” And this adds

meaning and insight; yes, and there’s rhyme and rhythm of course, a

tune if you like. What confuses poetics for the readers of verse is that

so often with the text, it’s so personal, perverse, and has no meaning,

no revelation; but like masturbation, it may satisfy the writer, and,

well, that’s it! I’m going to stop beating up on myself, for being a fool

since it isn’t a test, so I’ll read more poetry, treasure those words that

light something up, and dismiss those that maybe a gas for the poet,

but hot air for the rest.

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