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The frilled lizard Lesson focus Teachers notes Punctuation • Capital letters for sentence beginnings • Capital letters for proper nouns • Full stops • Grammatical commas Spelling • Misspelt words Grammar • Pronouns – possessive • Adjectives • Nouns Teacher information A report is usually written in the present tense and gives facts clearly without unnecessary information or opinions. Answers The frilled lizard is famous for its ferocious appearance. It is spectacular to watch as it raises the frills that surround its neck. These famous frills are normally folded away. When the frilled lizard is surprised or frightened, it raises its frills in an aggressive display to scare off predators. As the frills are raised, the lizard also opens its mouth very wide and emits a hissing sound, adding to the threatening and dramatic display. The frilled lizard, which grows up to one metre long, is found in the northern parts of Australia and drier regions of New Guinea. It is classed as an ‘arboreal’ animal because it is capable of climbing trees, from where it can spot its food, which is mainly grasshoppers and other small insects. 1. Missing punctuation is in bold type. Viewing Sample 2. (a) (i) yours (ii) his (iii) hers (iv) its (v) ours (vi) theirs appearance surround normally surprised aggressive raised emits display metre drier classed climbing grasshoppers (b) The word ‘its’ has been underlined. (c) (i) aggressive (ii) dramatic (iii) spectacular (iv) threatening (v) ferocious (vi) arboreal 3. (a) Spelling errors are in italic type. appearance, surround, normally, surprised, aggressive, raised, emits, display, metre, drier, classed, climbing, grasshoppers 74 Proofreading and editing skills Prim-Ed Publishing www.prim-ed.com

The frilled lizard Read this report. Editing skills the frilled lizard is famous for its ferocious apearance it is spectacular to watch as it raises the frills that suround its neck these famous frills are normaly folded away when the frilled lizard is suprised or frightened it raises its frills in an agresive display to scare off predators as the frills are razed the lizard also opens its mouth very wide and emmitts a hissing sound adding to the threatening and dramatic dissplay the frilled lizard which grows up to one meter long is found in the northern parts of australia and dryer regions of new guinea it is clased as an ‘arboreal’ animal because it is capable of climming trees, from where it can spot its food, which is mainly grashopers and other small insects 1 Punctuation (a) Find the 10 missing capital letters, 7 full stops and 5 commas. 2 Grammar While apostrophes are normally used to show possession, there are some words which mean ‘belonging to’ that may cause confusion. There is no need to use an apostrophe in these words; for example, ‘his’, ‘theirs’. (a) Write the possessive pronouns for: (i) belonging to you (ii) belonging to him (iii) belonging to her (iv) belonging to it (v) belonging to us (vi) belonging to them Viewing Sample (b) Which possessive pronoun has been used 5 times in the text? (c) Write an adjective from the text to match each noun below. noun adjective Prim-Ed Publishing www.prim-ed.com Proofreading and editing skills 75 (i) (ii) (iii) (iv) (v) (vi) aggression drama spectacle threat ferocity arbor 3 Spelling (a) There is a spelling mistake in each line of the text. Underline the error and write the correction in the space at the end of the line.

The frilled lizard<br />

Read this report.<br />

<strong>Editing</strong> skills<br />

the frilled lizard is famous for its ferocious apearance it is<br />

spectacular to watch as it raises the frills that suround its<br />

neck these famous frills are normaly folded away<br />

when the frilled lizard is suprised or frightened it raises its<br />

frills in an agresive display to scare off predators as the<br />

frills are razed the lizard also opens its mouth very wide<br />

<strong>and</strong> emmitts a hissing sound adding to the threatening<br />

<strong>and</strong> dramatic dissplay<br />

the frilled lizard which grows up to one meter long is<br />

found in the northern parts of australia <strong>and</strong> dryer regions<br />

of new guinea it is clased as an ‘arboreal’ animal because<br />

it is capable of climming trees, from where it can spot its food,<br />

which is mainly grashopers <strong>and</strong> other small insects<br />

1 Punctuation<br />

(a) Find the 10 missing capital<br />

letters, 7 full stops <strong>and</strong> 5<br />

commas.<br />

2 Grammar<br />

While apostrophes are normally used<br />

to show possession, there are some<br />

words which mean ‘belonging to’ that<br />

may cause confusion. There is no need<br />

to use an apostrophe in these words; for<br />

example, ‘his’, ‘theirs’.<br />

(a) Write the possessive pronouns for:<br />

(i) belonging to you<br />

(ii) belonging to him<br />

(iii) belonging to her<br />

(iv) belonging to it<br />

(v) belonging to us<br />

(vi) belonging to them<br />

Viewing Sample<br />

(b) Which possessive pronoun has<br />

been used 5 times in the text?<br />

(c) Write an adjective from the text<br />

to match each noun below.<br />

noun<br />

adjective<br />

Prim-Ed Publishing www.prim-ed.com <strong>Proofreading</strong> <strong>and</strong> editing skills 75<br />

(i)<br />

(ii)<br />

(iii)<br />

(iv)<br />

(v)<br />

(vi)<br />

aggression<br />

drama<br />

spectacle<br />

threat<br />

ferocity<br />

arbor<br />

3 Spelling<br />

(a) There is a spelling mistake in each line of<br />

the text. Underline the error <strong>and</strong> write the<br />

correction in the space at the end of the line.

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