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Letter to the editor<br />

Lesson focus<br />

Teachers notes<br />

Punctuation<br />

• Apostrophes to show possession<br />

• Capital letters for proper nouns<br />

• Question marks<br />

• Quotation marks for direct speech<br />

Spelling<br />

• Confused words: not/knot<br />

• Misspelt words<br />

Grammar<br />

• Subject-verb agreement<br />

• Pronouns<br />

Teacher information<br />

A discussion text can analyse, interpret <strong>and</strong> evaluate. Its purpose is to persuade by presenting one side<br />

of an argument.<br />

Answers<br />

12 March 2006<br />

Dear Sir<br />

I am concerned about the Lillydale Council’s proposal<br />

to chop down 20 trees in Baker Park to make way for<br />

an outdoor cinema. Baker Park’s trees are precious.<br />

Some of them are more than 50 years old <strong>and</strong> they<br />

provide many animals <strong>and</strong> birds with a home.<br />

Councillor C<strong>and</strong>ace Quigley said yesterday ‘Baker Park<br />

is the only possible site for the cinema’.<br />

She is not correct. There are three other parks in the local<br />

area, all of which have plenty of treeless space for the<br />

cinema. Why not use one of these?<br />

An outdoor cinema would be a wonderful addition to<br />

our community’s facilities, but not at the cost of our<br />

environment. What are other people’s opinions?<br />

Yours faithfully<br />

Charlotte Johnson<br />

Viewing Sample<br />

proposal<br />

chop<br />

are<br />

them<br />

provide<br />

yesterday<br />

cinema<br />

She<br />

have<br />

not<br />

wonderful<br />

facilities<br />

are<br />

Answers<br />

1. (a) Missing punctuation is in bold type.<br />

(b) Teacher check<br />

2. (a) Verbs are underlined.<br />

are, provide, have, are<br />

(b) Pronouns are underlined in bold.<br />

them (it), She (Her)<br />

3. (a) Spelling errors are in italic type.<br />

proposal, chop, yesterday, cinema, not, wonderful, facilities<br />

60 <strong>Proofreading</strong> <strong>and</strong> editing skills Prim-Ed Publishing www.prim-ed.com

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