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Art thief arrest<br />

Read the newspaper report.<br />

<strong>Editing</strong> skills<br />

Art theif Winston Rose has finaly been arrested after having been chased<br />

by the worlds police for more than 10 years. The details of him<br />

amazing excapes can be found in william Greens book, artful dodging.<br />

The infamous criminal has stolen priceles paintings from musuems <strong>and</strong><br />

art galleries in 12 countries. Roses method was to cut a painting out of<br />

their frame <strong>and</strong> replace it with a picture of a red rose.<br />

rose is nown as an expert at avoiding security alarms, but yesterday<br />

he set won off as she entered the Franklin Gallery in london.<br />

I think Rose is as suprised as we are about the alarm,<br />

said a pollice spokesperson yesterday. ‘Him is now in custody but is<br />

not saying nothing about what he has done with all the stollen art.<br />

1 Punctuation<br />

(a) Write the 4 missing capital letters <strong>and</strong> 3<br />

apostrophes to show possession.<br />

Quotation marks show what a person<br />

is saying.<br />

(b) Add the quotation marks missing from<br />

the text.<br />

2 Grammar<br />

Verbs written in the past tense show what has<br />

already happened; for example, ‘He went<br />

to the shops’, ‘Michael wrote a story’, ‘She<br />

washed the dishes’.<br />

(a) Write four past tense verbs from the text.<br />

Pronouns are words that replace nouns; for<br />

example, ‘I’, ‘he’, ‘she’, ‘him’, ‘it’, ‘her’,<br />

‘them’, ‘my’.<br />

(b) Circle the incorrect pronouns used in the<br />

text. Above each, write the pronoun that<br />

should have been used.<br />

3 Spelling<br />

(a) Write the correct spelling of the 10<br />

misspelt words.<br />

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4 Writing<br />

A double negative statement incorrectly uses<br />

two negative words; for example, ‘I haven’t<br />

got no more,’ should be ‘I haven’t any more’<br />

or ‘I have no more’.<br />

(a) Underline the line in the text containing a<br />

double negative. Write it correctly.<br />

Prim-Ed Publishing www.prim-ed.com <strong>Proofreading</strong> <strong>and</strong> editing skills 33

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