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Tasmanian devil<br />

Lesson focus<br />

Teachers notes<br />

Punctuation<br />

• Capital letters for proper nouns<br />

• Capital letters for sentence beginnings<br />

• Full stops<br />

• Grammatical commas<br />

• Commas in lists<br />

• Exclamation marks<br />

Grammar<br />

• Pronouns<br />

Spelling<br />

• Misspelt words<br />

Vocabulary<br />

• Enrichment – Australian animals<br />

Teacher information<br />

A description describes the characteristics, components or functions of specific living or non-living<br />

things.<br />

Answers<br />

Tasmanian devils are nocturnal marsupials about<br />

the size of a small dog. They are found only in Tasmania.<br />

Devils have black fur, often with white patches on<br />

their chest <strong>and</strong> rump. They have large heads <strong>and</strong><br />

short, thick tails. Devils can make different spinechilling<br />

noises, ranging from growls to screeches. Devils are<br />

carnivorous animals. They generally eat whatever<br />

meat they can find, including dead animals. They<br />

have been known to eat a range of reptiles, birds,<br />

mammals <strong>and</strong> insects. A devil will use its strong jaws<br />

<strong>and</strong> teeth to eat almost all the parts of an<br />

animal—even its bones <strong>and</strong> fur!<br />

1. Missing punctuation is in bold type.<br />

marsupials<br />

They<br />

often<br />

They<br />

spinechilling<br />

noises<br />

generally<br />

They<br />

known<br />

mammals<br />

almost<br />

animal<br />

2. (a) my class – we, Tasmanian devils – They, Joshua – he, Tasmanian devils – them<br />

(b) Pronouns are underlined.<br />

Viewing Sample<br />

They (line 2), They (line 4), They (line 8)<br />

(c) Teacher check<br />

3. Spelling errors are in italic type.<br />

marsupials, often, spinechilling, noises, generally, known, mammals, almost, animal<br />

4. (a) Teacher check. Answers may include: Tasmanian devil, kangaroo, koala, wombat, bilby,<br />

echidna, b<strong>and</strong>icoot, dingo, possum, numbat, platypus, quokka <strong>and</strong> wallaby.<br />

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