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The Wallace Walking Club<br />

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<strong>Editing</strong> skills<br />

the Wallace Walking Club is a recent addishun to the<br />

Wallace Primary School healthy lifestile campaign<br />

the club promotes walking as a ideal way two exercise<br />

<strong>and</strong> enjoy the benifits of regular activity both staff <strong>and</strong><br />

pupils our regular participants<br />

the club meats each day after lunch on the school field<br />

a variety of routes each lasting 20 minites are enjoyed by<br />

the regular warkers<br />

the too major benefits to members are improved health<br />

<strong>and</strong> the development of new relationships betwean<br />

pupils <strong>and</strong> staff <strong>and</strong> pupils off different year groups<br />

the popularity of the club has developed threwout the<br />

term <strong>and</strong> is expected to continue for meny more years<br />

1 Punctuation<br />

(a) The report needs 7 capital letters, 7 full<br />

stops <strong>and</strong> 3 commas.<br />

2 Grammar<br />

(a) Find the present tense verbs used to<br />

complete these sentences <strong>and</strong> change<br />

them to the past tense.<br />

(i) The club p walking for<br />

exercise.<br />

(ii) The club m daily.<br />

(b) Use suitable conjunctions to join these<br />

sentences.<br />

(i) I had to walk to school<br />

Mum’s car wouldn’t start.<br />

(ii)<br />

the shop opened I<br />

bought some milk.<br />

(iii) The train slowed down<br />

I watched it approaching the station.<br />

3 Spelling<br />

(a) Underline the spelling mistake on each<br />

line of text <strong>and</strong> write the correction at the<br />

end of the line.<br />

Viewing Sample<br />

The letters ‘tion’ give the sound ‘shun’ as in<br />

the word ‘communication’.<br />

(b) Complete the following words by<br />

adding ‘tion’.<br />

(i) promo<br />

(ii) vaca<br />

(iii) na<br />

(iv) educa<br />

(v) separa<br />

(vi) sta<br />

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