Lesson 1 How Others See Me

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Task 4. Watch Out!
Study the paragraphs below. On a one-half sheet of paper crosswise, rewrite
each paragraph in order to make it more cohesive.
A. Forty kilometers south of Peshawar, deep inside Pakistan‘s tribal belt, lies
the village of Darra Adam Khel. It‘s an area few foreigners will ever visit.
They are surreptitiously waging the U.S.-led war on terror or trying to
elude it. Anyone else who manages to pass through the roadblocks to
enter Darra, it‘s the perfect place to release pent-up stress. The village
has one industry of note: ordnance. Darra is the arms factory of the tribal
areas. It pumps out everything from pistols to anti-aircraft weaponry.
Wander into any of the mom-and-pop workshops. Choose your weapon.
Haggle over the price of bullets or shells. Troll out with your equipment
into the bush. Being rather nice to look at, the surrounding rocks and trees
make for excellent target practice. You‘ve finished debarking a tree with
an AK-47. You can head back to civilization a better, calmer person for
this cathartic experience. Think of it as a harmless outlet for the warrior
that lurks within you.
(Adapted from Discharging Firearms-
Darra Adam Khel, Pakistan by Jaimie
Miyazaki from Time Magazine: The Best
of Asia, July 4, 2005)
B. After five hours of uphill struggle on the second day of the classic
Himalayan trek from Paro, site of Bhutan‘s international airport, to
Thimphu, the country‘s capital, your muscles will burn. The blood will
pound in your ears. Your breathing will approximate that of someone with
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