Goodar ka La'l (A Jewel Among Rags) - the Annual of Urdu Studies

Goodar ka La'l (A Jewel Among Rags) - the Annual of Urdu Studies Goodar ka La'l (A Jewel Among Rags) - the Annual of Urdu Studies

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420 • THE ANNUAL OF URDU STUDIESwith pink cuffs that are embroidered with a wavy border. She’s wearingan amulet around her neck, tiny hoops in her ears, and anklets with smallround bells. Her anklets tinkling, she came in with the jar.Ameerunnisa: (seeing the jar) Why this is just like the one Kher Alibrought. He said Imamuddin had given it to him.Qamarunnisa: Imamuddin had gone to get it and it was he whobrought it for us as well. Now what you must do is separate Kher Ali’sshare, put it in the bukhari and lock it, then give the children the rest.Ameerunnisa: What children? Hasan Raza and Iqbal don’t touch itand Maqbool doesn’t eat it all the time. But this Shakir of yours is a realdevil.Qamarunnisa: (laughing) Bhabi, he’s just a boy.At her sister-in-law’s insistence she saves a portion for Kher Ali, storesit in the bukhari and puts a lock on the lid. Then she sends Maqbool alittle of the gur. Qamarunnisa and Kherunnisa return home. Soon afterward,Najeeb Khan Changi’s daughter, Najaf, arrives in a doli andMaqbool greets her warmly and takes her to her room. Why don’t we alsonow have a look at this room. Oho, we’re feeling very uncomfortable nowthat we’re here. There’s one bed in the room and it has a broken leg supportedby bricks. Because the foot section is in tatters, the center of thebed is sagging. A soiled durrie covers part of the bed. There are playingcards scattered about in one corner. The floor is red from paan spittle andthere are splatters of the same on the walls as well. Under the bed, in onecorner, there’s a pile of betel nuts that have been chewed and spit out. Onthe other side, the floor is wet and muddy. Cobwebs hang from the ceilingand walls. Flies and mosquitoes abound because of the dankness andthe filth. Dirty clothes lie off to one side. Maqbool takes her friend and,sweeping aside the things on the bed with her hand, she sits down therewith her. For a while the two chat and laugh and giggle, then they playwith dolls and, when they get bored with that too, Najaf Khanum suggeststhey play cards.At twelve o’clock Hasan Raza returns from school.Hasan Raza: Amma, did you send Suraiya Jabeen [Iqbal] lunch yet?Ameerunnisa: No, not yet.Hasan Raza: Send it then, this is her hour for a break.After this conversation about his sister’s lunch, he unlocks his doorand goes into his room. When he has changed his clothes he comes outand finds four chapatis along with a small bowl of kuddoo gosht set out ona soiled tablecloth.

VAALIDA AFZAAL ALI • 421Hasan Raza: Ammajaan, does lunch go out wrapped in this tableclothevery day?Ameerunnisa: No, she leaves a white towel, a bowl and a plate.Hasan Raza: She didn’t leave all that with you today?Ameerunnisa: No, she did, but Maqbool sent for the dahi bare in thebowl, and the plate went to Phopho’s for sevaiyan which Maqbool took toher friend along with rotis wrapped in the white towel.Hasan Raza: (with some irritation) Ammajaan, it’s degrading thatfood be sent to someone’s house in this fashion.Ameerunnisa; Well, it’s your doing, isn’t it? Does she have to work?We’re poor and whatever there is in the house we eat. Taking food overto someone else’s house is difficult.Hasan Raza: She’s not asking for pulao or korma for someone else’shouse. All she’s asking for is cleanliness. She’s bought some copper utensilsfor herself but those are never where they should be and you end upsending her food in such a disgraceful manner.Ameerunnisa: Well, we had a guest in the house. Should the girl havetaken her food in the unpolished utensils? What’s this mine and yoursbusiness—whoever needs something should be able to use it.Hasan Raza: I agree, but don’t place the blame for all this on SuraiyaJabeen’s studying. If you had asked me I would have given you anothertowel and plate.Hasan Raza brought her a white towel, a plate and a bowl. Placingthe rotis on the plate with the bowl of salan on top, Ghasiti wrapped everythingin the towel and carried it to Suraiya Jabeen.*Lightning and rain are my taleSome of it truths about my tears, some mydistressLife’s experiences attest to the fact that there is no country or nationwhere marriage deserves to be called marriage in the true sense of theword. For example, even a husband and wife who share something as rareand precious as harmony and love, eventually become tangled in differentkinds of anxiety and distress and are forced to reminisce longingly aboutthe peaceful, carefree lives they once enjoyed before marriage. But marriagesin Hindustan, especially the marriages of Hindustani Muslims, arenot really marriages, they are ruination. In some households the concept

420 • THE ANNUAL OF URDU STUDIESwith pink cuffs that are embroidered with a wavy border. She’s wearingan amulet around her neck, tiny hoops in her ears, and anklets with smallround bells. Her anklets tinkling, she came in with <strong>the</strong> jar.Ameerunnisa: (seeing <strong>the</strong> jar) Why this is just like <strong>the</strong> one Kher Alibrought. He said Imamuddin had given it to him.Qamarunnisa: Imamuddin had gone to get it and it was he whobrought it for us as well. Now what you must do is separate Kher Ali’sshare, put it in <strong>the</strong> bukhari and lock it, <strong>the</strong>n give <strong>the</strong> children <strong>the</strong> rest.Ameerunnisa: What children? Hasan Raza and Iqbal don’t touch itand Maqbool doesn’t eat it all <strong>the</strong> time. But this Shakir <strong>of</strong> yours is a realdevil.Qamarunnisa: (laughing) Bhabi, he’s just a boy.At her sister-in-law’s insistence she saves a portion for Kher Ali, storesit in <strong>the</strong> bukhari and puts a lock on <strong>the</strong> lid. Then she sends Maqbool alittle <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> gur. Qamarunnisa and Kherunnisa return home. Soon afterward,Najeeb Khan Changi’s daughter, Najaf, arrives in a doli andMaqbool greets her warmly and takes her to her room. Why don’t we alsonow have a look at this room. Oho, we’re feeling very uncomfortable nowthat we’re here. There’s one bed in <strong>the</strong> room and it has a broken leg supportedby bricks. Because <strong>the</strong> foot section is in tatters, <strong>the</strong> center <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>bed is sagging. A soiled durrie covers part <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> bed. There are playingcards scattered about in one corner. The floor is red from paan spittle and<strong>the</strong>re are splatters <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> same on <strong>the</strong> walls as well. Under <strong>the</strong> bed, in onecorner, <strong>the</strong>re’s a pile <strong>of</strong> betel nuts that have been chewed and spit out. On<strong>the</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r side, <strong>the</strong> floor is wet and muddy. Cobwebs hang from <strong>the</strong> ceilingand walls. Flies and mosquitoes abound because <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> dankness and<strong>the</strong> filth. Dirty clo<strong>the</strong>s lie <strong>of</strong>f to one side. Maqbool takes her friend and,sweeping aside <strong>the</strong> things on <strong>the</strong> bed with her hand, she sits down <strong>the</strong>rewith her. For a while <strong>the</strong> two chat and laugh and giggle, <strong>the</strong>n <strong>the</strong>y playwith dolls and, when <strong>the</strong>y get bored with that too, Najaf Khanum suggests<strong>the</strong>y play cards.At twelve o’clock Hasan Raza returns from school.Hasan Raza: Amma, did you send Suraiya Jabeen [Iqbal] lunch yet?Ameerunnisa: No, not yet.Hasan Raza: Send it <strong>the</strong>n, this is her hour for a break.After this conversation about his sister’s lunch, he unlocks his doorand goes into his room. When he has changed his clo<strong>the</strong>s he comes outand finds four chapatis along with a small bowl <strong>of</strong> kuddoo gosht set out ona soiled tablecloth.

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