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SEAFORTH MACKENZIE ISSUEIn this issue it was the concern of ourselves and Evan Jones to publish a faithful textof the Hospital poems. We even thought this had been achieved—but with Mackenzienothing is simple, and the textual difficulties of the poems were underhned. Evan Joneswishes to draw attention to the following mistakes in the text as printed:In '/ ought to write to Bill today . . .', 1.21—stop for comma (comparable errors inpunctuation elsewhere, however, are Mackenzie's).In 'Belladonna—Beautiful Lady—', 1.5—'O* for 'o'.In 'Down on the river levels', 1.19—'disdaine' for 'disdain'.In 'Grey sky, grey water . . .', 1.12—'of for 'or'.In 'An Old Inmate', 1.10—'strange' for 'straight'; 1.39—'grand'ma' for 'gran'-ma'.(There should, too, be a normal stanza break after 1.42.)In the prefatory note, 1963 should be 1953.The textual problems of the poems were formidable enough in themselves. It wasunfortunate that publication had to be pushed through just at the time Evan Joneswas in the middle of last minute arrangements for going overseas. <strong>Westerly</strong> was at thetime attempting to catch up a serious publishing lag, and final proofing offered difficultiesfor all concerned.The Navigators-This poem was first performed over ABC TV, Adelaide, a draft of thecomplete text was later published in Meanjin: a revival of interestcaused by a reading of the Meanjin text at the Strines Gallery, Melbourne,recently, led to a long-delayed revision in which the latter partwas almost entirely re-written: this, then (so far as I am capable), isthe final and definitive draft.—J. G.WESTERLY, No. 1, MARCH, 1968 63

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