The Canadian-American Review of Hungarian Studies - Vol. 4 ... - EPA
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fact that he was able to produce such a large body of work, both originalpoetry and translations, in a short lifetime of appalling hardship anddifficulty makes him already a legendary figure in an age rather short onliterary heroes. George summarizes his appeal quite succinctly when hesays, "He is seen, like no one else of his generation, to have the power ofsynthesizing such polar extremes as tradition and innovation, the localand the cosmopolitan, the Christian and the classical, most importantlythe perennial antagonism, in poetry, between engagement andart."George notes that critics generally agree that important influences onRadnoti the poet "are found in the enthusiasms of Radnoti the translator."Radnoti studied the Greek and Latin poets, and translatedHorace and Vergil. He knew French literature well, and translatedRonsard, La Fontaine and Apollinaire. His French was not limited toacademic knowledge, for he and his wife made a number of trips toFrance, and several poems are prompted by places there, such asChartres, Versailles and Paris. Radnoti also knew German, and translatedGoethe and the German romantics. But Radnoti's native heritagewas an equally important influence on him. His university education(culminating in a doctorate) provided a thorough knowledge of theHungarian literary tradition, and the great nineteenth century Hungarianromantics — Petofi, Vorosmarty and Arany — stand outparticularly as having contributed to his work. The folk song is also astrong influence, and it is not surprising that Bartok was Radnoti'sfavorite composer.The introduction concludes with comments on translation problems.George began this project because of "an almost personal feeling thatRadnoti deserves an English-speaking audience." Previous translationswere found to be "unsatisfactory at best," and he is quite correct incalling the only other volume of Radnoti in English (Harper and Row,1972) "an extremely slip-shod piece of work." In his own translations,George has aimed at "fidelity in form, pattern, diction, tone, mood,prosody down to sound repetition," a gargantuan task when dealingwith languages as unlike as Hungarian and English. All of these thingsare of course important considerations, but fidelity to meaning (whichGeorge does not single out) is also important. For the most part, Georgeis closer to Radnoti's meaning than any previous translator. But problemsin meaning do occur, and the principal weaknesses of the translationsresult from a tendency to sacrifice precise meaning to formalconsiderations.George tends to shift Hungarian active verb constructions into the
passive, or into noun phrases in English, thereby weakening the Englishversions. In "Elegy, or Icon, Nailless," the Hungarian verb phrasedvlgozni nem tud (he cannot work) is changed into the noun phrase"work is out of the question," which is in fact a cliche (line 13). In"Friday," the verb elfutottak (they ran away, or fled) becomes "havetaken flight" (line 11). Also in "Friday," the verb kiontott (they overflowed)is changed to the passive "are flooded" (line 22). For the verbalszik (it sleeps), which occurs three times in the first two lines of thepoem "Night," George gives "are asleep" twice and "is asleep" once. In"Picture Postcards," the verb torlodik (to become congested) is changedto the noun phrase "a traffic jam" (line 3). One would guess that Georgemakes verb shifts such as these in an attempt to get more syllables.Although his concern for rhythms is laudable, whatever he may gain inmetrical balance is taken from the power of Radnoti's language whenactive verbs are lost.Sometimes George sacrifices meaning in his zeal to give a rhymescheme to his translations. For example, in "Cartes Postales," theHungarian ikra (roe) is given as "roes of eggs" in order to create a rhymefor the word "legs" (lines 4 and 6). The phrase "roes of eggs" is bothredundant and not idiomatic. In "Friday," George gives "shiver" torhyme with "river," thereby inventing the impossible construction "it(April) whips you with ... shiver"(line 6). To cite another example from"Friday," one might examine the line vad zdpor hullt idonkent (sometimesa wild sudden shower fell). In an effort to give this line consonantrhyme with the word "place," which concludes the stanza, Georgecreates the phrase "erratic dose," something that does not make clearsense in English and bears only a suggestive resemblance to the Hungarianoriginal (lines 18 and 20). In "Letter to My Wife," we find thephrase "the silence in my ears is strident" created to fit with "silent," thelast word of the previous line (lines 1 and 2). In Hungarian, the actionverb phrase is iivolt a csond fulemben, which translates literally assimply "silence howls in my ears." Faced with a choice between rhymeand meaning, the translator should favor meaning. Contemporaryreaders instinctively mistrust translations which are too-neatly rhymed,and rightly so, for it is unusual that this can be accomplished withoutsacrifice.Though the English of the translations reads smoothly for the mostpart, a few poems do show, on occasion, insensitivity to connotationand usage in English. The aforementioned "roes of eggs" and "whipsyou with . . . shiver" illustrate this, and other instances of the problemoccur sporadically. In "Cartes Postales," the verb phrase tiikrepattern is
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fact that he was able to produce such a large body <strong>of</strong> work, both originalpoetry and translations, in a short lifetime <strong>of</strong> appalling hardship anddifficulty makes him already a legendary figure in an age rather short onliterary heroes. George summarizes his appeal quite succinctly when hesays, "He is seen, like no one else <strong>of</strong> his generation, to have the power <strong>of</strong>synthesizing such polar extremes as tradition and innovation, the localand the cosmopolitan, the Christian and the classical, most importantlythe perennial antagonism, in poetry, between engagement andart."George notes that critics generally agree that important influences onRadnoti the poet "are found in the enthusiasms <strong>of</strong> Radnoti the translator."Radnoti studied the Greek and Latin poets, and translatedHorace and Vergil. He knew French literature well, and translatedRonsard, La Fontaine and Apollinaire. His French was not limited toacademic knowledge, for he and his wife made a number <strong>of</strong> trips toFrance, and several poems are prompted by places there, such asChartres, Versailles and Paris. Radnoti also knew German, and translatedGoethe and the German romantics. But Radnoti's native heritagewas an equally important influence on him. His university education(culminating in a doctorate) provided a thorough knowledge <strong>of</strong> the<strong>Hungarian</strong> literary tradition, and the great nineteenth century <strong>Hungarian</strong>romantics — Pet<strong>of</strong>i, Vorosmarty and Arany — stand outparticularly as having contributed to his work. <strong>The</strong> folk song is also astrong influence, and it is not surprising that Bartok was Radnoti'sfavorite composer.<strong>The</strong> introduction concludes with comments on translation problems.George began this project because <strong>of</strong> "an almost personal feeling thatRadnoti deserves an English-speaking audience." Previous translationswere found to be "unsatisfactory at best," and he is quite correct incalling the only other volume <strong>of</strong> Radnoti in English (Harper and Row,1972) "an extremely slip-shod piece <strong>of</strong> work." In his own translations,George has aimed at "fidelity in form, pattern, diction, tone, mood,prosody down to sound repetition," a gargantuan task when dealingwith languages as unlike as <strong>Hungarian</strong> and English. All <strong>of</strong> these thingsare <strong>of</strong> course important considerations, but fidelity to meaning (whichGeorge does not single out) is also important. For the most part, Georgeis closer to Radnoti's meaning than any previous translator. But problemsin meaning do occur, and the principal weaknesses <strong>of</strong> the translationsresult from a tendency to sacrifice precise meaning to formalconsiderations.George tends to shift <strong>Hungarian</strong> active verb constructions into the