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Task 6• Compare the three different versions of a student’sthesis writing. Which version is easier to comprehend?Why?

Version 1Hard magnetic materials have a number of advantages.For MEMS applications, the thickness of magnetic layerscan range from submicron to nanometer. CoNi andCoPtP alloys are the samples used as micro-actuator [1].The bulk NdFeB alloys are used in micromachining [2].Moreover, NiFe alloys are used in microsensors. Theother applications are widely used in MEMS such asmiromotors, speakers and sensors. However, theapplication of hard magnetic materials depends on themagnetic properties of materials.

Version 1Hard magnetic materials have a number <strong>of</strong> advantages.For MEMS applications, the thickness <strong>of</strong> magnetic layerscan range from submicron to nanometer. CoNi andCoPtP alloys are the samples used as micro-actuator [1].The bulk NdFeB alloys are used in micromachining [2].Moreover, NiFe alloys are used in microsensors. Theother applications are widely used in MEMS such asmiromotors, speakers and sensors. However, theapplication <strong>of</strong> hard magnetic materials depends on themagnetic properties <strong>of</strong> materials.

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