MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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7.ACT ONEFADE IN:EXT. MARTIN HOUSE - NIGHTAn ANIMAL CONTROL OFFICER leads the muzzled Presa Canariodown the front walk. The scene has expanded to include acoroner’s truck, two more patrol cars, and a larger crowd ofneighbors. None of them stand on the grass. PUSH INTO theupstairs bedroom window until we are --INT. MARTIN HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT (CONTINUOUS)Snow takes photos of the body with her digital camera. Vegaand the First Officer stand by the door drinking Starbucks.FIRST OFFICERWhat’re we waiting for?VEGADetective Snow likes to record thecrime scene in its virgin state.SNOW(takes last photo)Okay. Start the parade.As Vega enters, followed by the First Officer, a crime scenePHOTOGRAPHER, and the CORONER, we FLOAT over to the beduntil we’re looking straight down on the battered Mr.Martin. PUSH INTO his face. Suddenly, Mr. Martin’s injuriesDISAPPEAR, he comes to life, and the bedsheets around himSWIRL INTO --INT. THE LAMPLIGHTER - NIGHT (FLASHBACK)Mr. Martin sits at the bar holding a beer. The Redhead whowas go-go dancing on stage hangs all over him. HOUSE MUSICplays in the background. A CHYRON appears on screen thatsays: Four Hours Earlier.MR. MARTIN...I try to turn all my lessonplans into songs. The kids seem tolike it.(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:8.REDHEAD(sloppy drunk)We need way more high schoolteachers like you. You’re so...innovated.MR. MARTINDid you, uh, go to high school?REDHEADOh yeah, for like... four years. Iwish I had a teacher like you. Ifyou got in shape, you’d be verysexy.MR. MARTINI am in shape. Round’s a shape.REDHEADI mean, if you dieted.MR. MARTINOh, I couldn’t do that. I’d have tostop eating.REDHEADYou are so funny. Creating joy inother people’s heart... wow. It’ssuch a gift. Will you take me hometonight?He holds up his ring finger, which has a gold band.Off his tired smile --MR. MARTINSorry, I’m a happily married man.INT. MARTIN HOUSE - KITCHEN - NIGHT (FLASHBACK)BARB MARTIN, Mr. Martin’s wife, folds laundry on the kitchentable. She’s a plain woman, bored with life.MRS. MARTINFor God’s sake, Glenn. How long’sit take to walk a dog?Mr. Martin unleashes the Presa Canario, which trots off.MR. MARTINI stopped by The Lamplighter. Canwe talk?(CONTINUED)
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Page 5 and 6: CONTINUED:VEGA (cont'd)the Gospel b
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Page 11 and 12: CONTINUED:10.WILLIENothing like the
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Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
Page 17 and 18: CONTINUED:16.VEGAWho was your husba
Page 19 and 20: CONTINUED:18.ARMANTi lyubeesh papee
Page 21 and 22: CONTINUED:20.They stop to talk. At
Page 23 and 24: CONTINUED:22.Tom disappears into a
Page 25 and 26: CONTINUED:24.VEGAOr so she says.(to
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Page 51 and 52: CONTINUED:50.VEGAHave you ever hear
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CONTINUED:58.Off Snow, with no opti
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CONTINUED:62.SNOW (cont'd)So you wa
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CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has
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