MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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CONTINUED:53.DADIt’s okay, son. If you knowsomething, you need to tell thepolice.SNOWYou can start by telling us why youpanicked when we showed up at theparty last night.Tom, anguished, looks up at his parents.TOMIs it okay to tell the truth if ithurts a friend?MOMOh, Tommy. You have to tell thetruth.Tom reluctantly turns to the detectives.TOMWillie was in Mr. Martin’s housethe night he was murdered. He wasCreeping.SNOWWhat’s Creeping?TOMIt’s like a game. Willie inventedit. He breaks into houses whilepeople are home. He tried to get meto try it, but I wouldn’t...( overcome byemotion)I think Willie killed Mr. Martin.Tom breaks down in tears. Whether real or not, we can’t besure, but it doesn’t matter. The tears feel real enough toeveryone in the room. Off Snow and Vega, closing in on thewrong guy --SMASH TO BLACK.END OF ACT FOUR
54.ACT FIVEFADE IN:EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTSnow’s Camaro parked in the driveway.INT. VALLEY HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHTSnow sits on plastic lawn furniture, reading over a YMCAbrochure. Manny plays Grand Theft Auto on PlayStation 2.SNOWI have some time tomorrow to swingyou by the Y. Listen to what theyoffer... soccer, tennis, swimming,aromatherapy -- ooh, I could makethat class.MANNYI’m not doing that crap. It’sboring.SNOWWell you need to find somethingthat’s not boring, Manny. Somethingthat doesn’t involve sex orsubstances. Or Creeping.MANNYWhat’s Creeping?The phone RINGS. Snow answers.Hello?SNOWINTERCUT:INT. POLICE STATION - NIGHTBoyd sits at his desk, talking on the phone.BOYDIt’s Boyd. SID matched the printsfrom the kid’s cup to the partialsat the murder scene and the Creeperbreak-ins.(CONTINUED)
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Page 3 and 4: 2.EXT. HIGH SCHOOL FOOTBALL FIELD -
Page 5 and 6: CONTINUED:VEGA (cont'd)the Gospel b
Page 7 and 8: CONTINUED:6.VEGAHardest Fruit of th
Page 9 and 10: CONTINUED:8.REDHEAD(sloppy drunk)We
Page 11 and 12: CONTINUED:10.WILLIENothing like the
Page 13 and 14: 12.INT. APARTMENT - TOM’S BEDROOM
Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
Page 17 and 18: CONTINUED:16.VEGAWho was your husba
Page 19 and 20: CONTINUED:18.ARMANTi lyubeesh papee
Page 21 and 22: CONTINUED:20.They stop to talk. At
Page 23 and 24: CONTINUED:22.Tom disappears into a
Page 25 and 26: CONTINUED:24.VEGAOr so she says.(to
Page 27 and 28: 26.INT. MARTIN HOUSE - MASTER BEDRO
Page 29 and 30: 28.INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT (CON
Page 31 and 32: CONTINUED:30.VEGANot in the house,
Page 33 and 34: 32.EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTWe LAND
Page 35 and 36: CONTINUED:34.SNOW(stern)Well, you n
Page 37 and 38: 36.INT. POLICE STATION - INTERVIEW
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Page 41 and 42: CONTINUED:TOM (cont'd)cheerleader d
Page 43 and 44: CONTINUED:42.TOMI just want it all
Page 45 and 46: CONTINUED:44.She removes abdominal
Page 47 and 48: CONTINUED:46.WILLIEThen she’ll st
Page 49 and 50: 48.MOMENTS LATEREveryone splits apa
Page 51 and 52: CONTINUED:50.VEGAHave you ever hear
Page 53: CONTINUED:52.beat, Tom comes up wit
Page 57 and 58: 56.INT. TOWNHOUSE - WILLIE’S BEDR
Page 59 and 60: CONTINUED:58.Off Snow, with no opti
Page 61 and 62: CONTINUED:60.up. The Tree counts do
Page 63 and 64: CONTINUED:62.SNOW (cont'd)So you wa
Page 65 and 66: CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has
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