MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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CONTINUED:45.LUCASI don’t know. I can’t reach him.His parents said he’s at a marchingband party right now.SNOWYou didn’t happen to get anaddress?As Lucas hands Snow a Post It with the address --EXT. MULHOLLAND PATO - NIGHTA miserable Willie sits near the keg with a beer in hishand, cornered by a PLAIN GIRL, who’s all smiles andgiggles.PLAIN GIRLYou new in the band?WILLIEI’m not in the band.PLAIN GIRLOh, you should join! It’s so muchfun. You play any instruments?WILLIE(pointedly)Electric guitar.PLAIN GIRLOmigod. Can you play “Mr. Roboto”?We totally jam on that song. I canplay it on clarinet and Frenchhorn. You wanna know what thatmakes me? Bisectional.She laughs like there’s nothing funnier. Willie spots Tomfilling two beers at the keg and hurries over to him.WILLIEPlease rescue me from the seventhcircle of hell.TOMNot now. I’m talking to Kristi. Didyou know she’s liked me sincefreshman year?(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:46.WILLIEThen she’ll still like youtomorrow. Can we go <strong>Creeping</strong> now?TOMI can’t believe it took me thislong to talk to her. We’re goingout next weekend.Tom eagerly walks off with two beers, leaving Williehanging.ACROSS THE PATIOSnow and Lucas enter from the house and look around. Theparty is rocking now that alcohol is flowing. They pass twoDRUNK GIRLS singing to the tune of “My Sharona” by TheKnack, while the big-bellied tuba player accompanies them --DRUNK GIRLSOoh my little filaments, filaments.Actin and myosin form myofibrils!Proteins that are long and dense,long and dense. Making up thestructure of the myofibrils!SNOW (TO LUCAS)Mr. Martin tribute band?LUCASSinging can be very cathartic.( turns to a BANDMEMBER)Whose party is this?The band member points to Kristi sitting alone in a corner.Snow and Lucas watch Tom sit down and hand her a beer. Thedetectives walk over to the couple, who are talking quietly.SNOWExcuse me, is this your party?KRISTIThat’s right.Snow shows her LAPD badge. HOLD on Tom’s horrified reaction.SNOWDetective Snow, LAPD. This isDetective Lucas. We’reinvestigating the death of Mr.Martin. We’re looking for someone.(CONTINUED)
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Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
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Page 65 and 66: CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has

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