MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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CONTINUED:37.MRS. MARTINYou gotta understand something, Iloved my husband. He just... wasn’tdoing it for me. No ambition, nofantasies.VEGAWhat about a life insurance policy?MRS. MARTINYeah. It came with his credit card.Guess what? I get a whoppingthousand dollars. Now I gotta finda full-time job and probably sellthe house, too. Some motive formurder, huh?Snow and Vega exchange a look. So much for the wife.INT. POLICE STATION - DAYDetective BOYD BLOOM, 50s, looks over the Murder Book,filled with photos and reports. He sits behind a cluttereddesk in a station that looks like an accountant’s office --metal desks, overflowing file cabinets, unflattering light.Boyd, a paper pusher with an ass to match, supervises lowergradedetectives. His desk is his domain, plus the snackroom, the only places he goes. He looks up at Snow and Vega.BOYDWhere are my leads?VEGAWe’re working on that, Boyd.BOYDWhat about the Russian boyfriend?SNOWWe’re still checking into him, butit’s looking like a dead end.BOYDLucas! You get the analyzedevidence from SID?Detective Trainee Lucas joins them with a forensics report.LUCASYesiree. No luck with a DNA profilefrom the urine. Did you know(MORE)(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:LUCAS (cont'd)healthy individuals don’t emitepithelials in their urine? Now, ifthere were semen traces --BOYDMove on, Lucas.LUCASRight. That’s the bad news. Thegood news is --BOYDNo good news and bad news inhomicide, Lucas. Just news.LUCASOkay. The “news” is that thepartials we found on the beerbottle at the crime scene matchprints from a recent series of hotprowls in the larger valley area.The intruder looks for unlockeddoors, windows. And... he leaves asignature.38.Lucas proudly hands a folder to Boyd. He opens it to seePHOTOS of “The Creeper” written on walls in black ink.VEGAYou talk to the guys in robbery?LUCASThey don’t have any leads. Theybelieve this “Creeper” is breakinginto houses for the thrill.Stealing tchotchkes.SNOW(suddenly)We’re looking for a teenager.Clarify.BOYDSNOWTeenagers are bored. Messy. Theytest authority. And the victim wasa high school teacher.Vega takes the folder and looks over the photos.(CONTINUED)
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Page 3 and 4: 2.EXT. HIGH SCHOOL FOOTBALL FIELD -
Page 5 and 6: CONTINUED:VEGA (cont'd)the Gospel b
Page 7 and 8: CONTINUED:6.VEGAHardest Fruit of th
Page 9 and 10: CONTINUED:8.REDHEAD(sloppy drunk)We
Page 11 and 12: CONTINUED:10.WILLIENothing like the
Page 13 and 14: 12.INT. APARTMENT - TOM’S BEDROOM
Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
Page 17 and 18: CONTINUED:16.VEGAWho was your husba
Page 19 and 20: CONTINUED:18.ARMANTi lyubeesh papee
Page 21 and 22: CONTINUED:20.They stop to talk. At
Page 23 and 24: CONTINUED:22.Tom disappears into a
Page 25 and 26: CONTINUED:24.VEGAOr so she says.(to
Page 27 and 28: 26.INT. MARTIN HOUSE - MASTER BEDRO
Page 29 and 30: 28.INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT (CON
Page 31 and 32: CONTINUED:30.VEGANot in the house,
Page 33 and 34: 32.EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTWe LAND
Page 35 and 36: CONTINUED:34.SNOW(stern)Well, you n
Page 37: 36.INT. POLICE STATION - INTERVIEW
Page 41 and 42: CONTINUED:TOM (cont'd)cheerleader d
Page 43 and 44: CONTINUED:42.TOMI just want it all
Page 45 and 46: CONTINUED:44.She removes abdominal
Page 47 and 48: CONTINUED:46.WILLIEThen she’ll st
Page 49 and 50: 48.MOMENTS LATEREveryone splits apa
Page 51 and 52: CONTINUED:50.VEGAHave you ever hear
Page 53 and 54: CONTINUED:52.beat, Tom comes up wit
Page 55 and 56: 54.ACT FIVEFADE IN:EXT. VALLEY HOUS
Page 57 and 58: 56.INT. TOWNHOUSE - WILLIE’S BEDR
Page 59 and 60: CONTINUED:58.Off Snow, with no opti
Page 61 and 62: CONTINUED:60.up. The Tree counts do
Page 63 and 64: CONTINUED:62.SNOW (cont'd)So you wa
Page 65 and 66: CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has

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