MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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CONTINUED:35.DAD(flirting)Let’s say we go for this partypackage, would you be the princessthey send?Tom enters the chaos, backpack over his shoulder. If anyonelooked up, they’d see his exhaustion, but they’re all busy.TOMI’m going skating with Willie.His Dad acknowledges his son again with a hand wave butkeeps his focus on the princess, who smiles and winks.PARTY PLANNERWhen you call our castlecoordinators, tell ‘em you wantLittle Bo Peep. That’s my mostpopular character.Tom heads out, past his Mom and sister on the piano.Bye.TOMMOMBye, dear.(to Lulu)Wrists up, honey. Keep ‘em up.Tom disappears without ever being seen.EXT. ALLEY - DAYTom skateboards down a grungy alley, lined with trash cansand dumpsters. Seeing what he’s looking for, Tom hops offhis board and picks it up.Checking to make sure no one is watching, Tom steps behind adumpster, unzips his backpack, and pulls out the pillowcasecontaining the murder weapon. He drops the bundle into theempty dumpster and closes the lid.EXT. NORTH HOLLYWOOD POLICE STATION - DAYEstablish the modern cinder-block and steel building.
36.INT. POLICE STATION - INTERVIEW ROOM - DAYA white room with a metal desk and a video camera high inthe corner. Snow and Vega sit across from a tired Mrs.Martin.SNOWThanks for dropping by, Barb. Weneed your help filling out a fewdetails. Who’s Arman Pozner?MRS. MARTINHow do you know about Arman?VEGAWe checked your bank records. Youwrote him a check two days ago for$3,000.MRS. MARTINI work with Arman at the 99 CentStore. He needed a down payment fora van. He just moved here fromChechnya.SNOWA lot of money to give a co-worker.I’m guessing he’s more than that.MRS. MARTIN(beat; reluctantly)I sleep with him.VEGAI suppose that accounts for thephone call to his house last night.MRS. MARTINI invited Arman over when Glennpassed out, but he had nothing todo with this. He was long gonebefore I went to bed.SNOWYou two had sex with your husbandhome?(to Vega)Don’t guys have some kind of fairplay rule?Not really.VEGA(CONTINUED)
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Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
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Page 21 and 22: CONTINUED:20.They stop to talk. At
Page 23 and 24: CONTINUED:22.Tom disappears into a
Page 25 and 26: CONTINUED:24.VEGAOr so she says.(to
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Page 47 and 48: CONTINUED:46.WILLIEThen she’ll st
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Page 51 and 52: CONTINUED:50.VEGAHave you ever hear
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Page 63 and 64: CONTINUED:62.SNOW (cont'd)So you wa
Page 65 and 66: CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has

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