MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

More documents

Recommendations

Info

CONTINUED:33.Blow.SNOW (cont'd)MANNYWe weren’t drinking, Mom.Blow.SNOWMANNYWhat’re you doing home?Unfazed, he takes the Breathalyzer and blows into it.SNOWI stopped by to make sure you hadbreakfast for the morning. Here.She hands him the 7-11 bag. Manny gives the Breathalyzerback to Snow, who checks his blood-alcohol level. Mannypulls a box of powdered donuts from the bag.SNOW (cont'd)(satisfied)What are you two doing outside?You’re going to catch cold.MANNYThe couch is outside. If you wantus to make out inside, then put thecouch in the house like normalpeople.SNOWThis couch is ready for the dump.It’s embarrassing.MANNYNot as embarrassing as the plasticlawn furniture in the living room.SNOWThat’s only temporary. I’m savingfor a new sectional. Now let’s goinside. You got practice in themorning.MANNYNo I don’t. I quit football.(off her look)It’s not my thing, Mom.(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:34.SNOW(stern)Well, you need to find your thing,baby. And I’m not talking aboutthat girl. I don’t care what it is,long as it keeps you out oftrouble.Manny gets up off the couch. Snow puts her arm around him.SNOW (cont'd)Are you and Crystal having sex?No.MANNYSNOWYou better not be lying, becauseI’ll polygraph your ass.And she means it. As they disappear into the house --EXT. LOS ANGELES - MORNINGThe sun rises over downtown.INT. APARTMENT - TOM’S BEDROOM - MORNINGCLOSE on the blood-encrusted bowling trophy and bloodygloves inside the pillowcase. Tom checks them, ties off thetop of the pillowcase, and shoves it into his backpack.INT. APARTMENT - LIVING ROOM - MORNINGLulu practices piano with her Mom.MOMWatch your tempo, sweetie... you’rerushing.Nearby, Dad sits with a PARTY PLANNER, a 40-year-old womanwith fading beauty, who’s showing photos of herself dressedshamelessly in various fairy and princess costumes.PARTY PLANNERAt Magic Princess Parties, weprovide everything you’ll need tomake your little princess feel likea queen.(CONTINUED)
Page 1 and 2: MOTIVEPILOT"Creeping Tom"written by
Page 3 and 4: 2.EXT. HIGH SCHOOL FOOTBALL FIELD -
Page 5 and 6: CONTINUED:VEGA (cont'd)the Gospel b
Page 7 and 8: CONTINUED:6.VEGAHardest Fruit of th
Page 9 and 10: CONTINUED:8.REDHEAD(sloppy drunk)We
Page 11 and 12: CONTINUED:10.WILLIENothing like the
Page 13 and 14: 12.INT. APARTMENT - TOM’S BEDROOM
Page 15 and 16: CONTINUED:14.SNOWI have to stay in
Page 17 and 18: CONTINUED:16.VEGAWho was your husba
Page 19 and 20: CONTINUED:18.ARMANTi lyubeesh papee
Page 21 and 22: CONTINUED:20.They stop to talk. At
Page 23 and 24: CONTINUED:22.Tom disappears into a
Page 25 and 26: CONTINUED:24.VEGAOr so she says.(to
Page 27 and 28: 26.INT. MARTIN HOUSE - MASTER BEDRO
Page 29 and 30: 28.INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT (CON
Page 31 and 32: CONTINUED:30.VEGANot in the house,
Page 33: 32.EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTWe LAND
Page 37 and 38: 36.INT. POLICE STATION - INTERVIEW
Page 39 and 40: CONTINUED:LUCAS (cont'd)healthy ind
Page 41 and 42: CONTINUED:TOM (cont'd)cheerleader d
Page 43 and 44: CONTINUED:42.TOMI just want it all
Page 45 and 46: CONTINUED:44.She removes abdominal
Page 47 and 48: CONTINUED:46.WILLIEThen she’ll st
Page 49 and 50: 48.MOMENTS LATEREveryone splits apa
Page 51 and 52: CONTINUED:50.VEGAHave you ever hear
Page 53 and 54: CONTINUED:52.beat, Tom comes up wit
Page 55 and 56: 54.ACT FIVEFADE IN:EXT. VALLEY HOUS
Page 57 and 58: 56.INT. TOWNHOUSE - WILLIE’S BEDR
Page 59 and 60: CONTINUED:58.Off Snow, with no opti
Page 61 and 62: CONTINUED:60.up. The Tree counts do
Page 63 and 64: CONTINUED:62.SNOW (cont'd)So you wa
Page 65 and 66: CONTINUED:64.MR. MARTINNo! This has

MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

You also want an ePaper? Increase the reach of your titles

Delete template?

Save as template?