MOTIVE PILOT "Creeping Tom" - Zen 134237

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CONTINUED:31.LULUWhat’d you win?TOMNone of your business, Lulu. Goback to sleep.But Lulu keeps staring at the trophy. The terrier slips intothe room through the open door and jumps on Tom’s bed.LULUWhat’s all over it?Tom shoves the trophy and gloves into a pillowcase.TOMJust dirt. Go to bed.LULUIf I’m tired for my piano lesson inthe morning, I’m telling Mom andDad you woke me up.TOMYou tell Mom and Dad anything,you’re dead.It’s an ominous threat from Tom. Lulu makes a face at herbig brother and shuts the door. Tom, riddled with anxiety,takes the trophy bundle and hides it on the top shelf of hiscloset.IN BED - LATERTom lies in bed, staring at the ceiling, sweating andscared. He can’t sleep. Tom gets up, startling the terriersleeping at his feet, goes to the closet, and takes down thetrophy.Tom climbs back into bed and hugs the murder weapon close tohis chest as his mind races, trying to figure out what todo.EXT. SAN FERNANDO VALLEY - NIGHTCITY IMAGES establish the Valley at night. An aerial shot ofthe 101 freeway. The period neon sign over Chris’ & Pitt’sBar-B-Q on Victory Blvd. The giant Muffler Man towering overExpert Tune on Sherman Way. The colorful bail bond offices,vintage car lots, and Mexican shops lining Van Nuys Blvd.
32.EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTWe LAND on a two-bedroom starter house in Panorama City. Thepoor part. Snow pulls into the driveway in her Camaro.INT. VALLEY HOUSE - NIGHTSnow enters the house carrying a bag from 7-11 and quietlymoves through a dark house, filled with mostly secondhandfurniture.She hears a noise in the backyard.Putting her hand on her gun, she yanks open the slidingglass door and turns on the porch light.EXT. VALLEY HOUSE - BACK PORCH - NIGHT (CONTINUOUS)Her son MANNY, 16, reclines on a tattered couch, feeling upa shirtless girl named CRYSTAL. He reacts with mildsurprise.MANNYHey Mom. Thought you were working.SNOWClearly( ṫo Crystal)Crystal, put on your top.As Crystal, who’s wearing a bra, reaches for her top, Snowcan’t help but notice her rather ample breasts.SNOW (cont'd)Are those real?CRYSTAL(proudly)Nope. Got ‘em for my birthday. Youwanna see?SNOWNo. Maybe. How much did they cost?( before she cananswer)Never mind. Go inside and getdressed.Crystal heads into the house. Snow pulls a LAPD-issuebreathalyzer from her purse and hands it to Manny.(CONTINUED)
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Page 37 and 38: 36.INT. POLICE STATION - INTERVIEW
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