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Thesis Writing in Business Education – from a Student Perspective

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2and demonstrate acquired academicqualifications. It is also very important<strong>from</strong> the perspective of the <strong>in</strong>stitution,s<strong>in</strong>ce the quality of f<strong>in</strong>ished theses canbe seen as an <strong>in</strong>dicator of the quality ofits education and teach<strong>in</strong>g practices. InSweden, f<strong>in</strong>ished theses are for examplelooked upon when the National Agencyfor Higher <strong>Education</strong> evaluates thequality of <strong>in</strong>stitutions and programmes.It also seems as if this k<strong>in</strong>d of degreeprojects will be of even moreimportance <strong>in</strong> the future, as an <strong>in</strong>dicatorof educational quality. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to theNational Agency, a suggested newquality-based resource allocationsystem will <strong>in</strong>volve changes withrespect to its quality evaluationprocedures. More emphasis will be paidon the results of educationalprogrammes, e.g. the quality of thesisprojects, <strong>in</strong>stead of ma<strong>in</strong>ly evaluat<strong>in</strong>gcircumstantial and <strong>in</strong>stitutional factors,such as teach<strong>in</strong>g resources and<strong>in</strong>frastructure (see Swedish NationalAgency for Higher <strong>Education</strong>,www.hsv.se).<strong>Thesis</strong> writ<strong>in</strong>g is thus important <strong>in</strong>several respects. However, it is also asource of severe problems; for students,for university teachers, and fordepartments. This is the background formany pieces of research on the subject<strong>in</strong> question (see e.g. Ylijoki, 2001;Emsheimer, 2005; Hagström, 2005);also the one presented here.In this article, thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g isexplored with<strong>in</strong> a bus<strong>in</strong>ess educationcontext. The aim is to approach it <strong>from</strong>the students’ perspectives <strong>in</strong> order tolearn more about their expectations,experiences and understand<strong>in</strong>gs ofthesis writ<strong>in</strong>g and related researchproject. As Ramden says (2003, p. 6):“...we can improve our teach<strong>in</strong>g bystudy<strong>in</strong>g our students’ learn<strong>in</strong>g <strong>–</strong> bylisten<strong>in</strong>g to and learn<strong>in</strong>g <strong>from</strong> ourstudents.”In next, I describe thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong>the context where it is studied, that is aSwedish bachelor’s programme <strong>in</strong>bus<strong>in</strong>ess and economics. Here I alsotouch upon the problems that we <strong>–</strong> asteachers and as an educational<strong>in</strong>stitution <strong>–</strong> experience. Thereafter, Ielaborate on earlier research projectsand f<strong>in</strong>d<strong>in</strong>gs. I also position my study <strong>in</strong>relation to previous ones. In section IV,the method used is described beforereview<strong>in</strong>g the results of the study <strong>in</strong>section V. The article ends with adiscussion on the results and theirimplications for teach<strong>in</strong>g practices.II.<strong>Thesis</strong> <strong>Writ<strong>in</strong>g</strong> <strong>in</strong> a Bus<strong>in</strong>ess<strong>Education</strong> ProgrammeIn Sweden, it is common to endprogrammes <strong>in</strong> bus<strong>in</strong>ess and economicswith a thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g project. At abachelor’s level, this project is normallyorganised as a 15 credits course andscheduled to take about 10 weeks ofstudy. This is also the case with<strong>in</strong> theprogramme <strong>in</strong> bus<strong>in</strong>ess and economicswhich are offered at Blek<strong>in</strong>ge Instituteof Technology (BTH), and which are atfocus here. Dur<strong>in</strong>g the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gcourse at BTH, a number of lectures andsem<strong>in</strong>ars are officially scheduled. Thelectures normally deal with issues suchas formulat<strong>in</strong>g the research topic,methods for collect<strong>in</strong>g and analys<strong>in</strong>gdata and thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g. Dur<strong>in</strong>g thesem<strong>in</strong>ars, the suggested research topicsas well as thesis drafts are presented anddiscussed, by student colleagues andteachers. Most thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g projectsare conducted <strong>in</strong> groups of two or threestudents. Each group gets a supervisorwhich more cont<strong>in</strong>ually helps thestudents <strong>in</strong> the process of conduct<strong>in</strong>g aresearch project and writ<strong>in</strong>g a thesis.There are no general guidel<strong>in</strong>es forsupervision, at least no formally andexplicitly expressed ones. Howsupervision is performed depends muchon the supervisor’s ideas and ideals aswell as the capacity of and agreementswith the student group.


3Even if the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g projectofficially should take about 10 weeks, itusually takes much longer. In somecases, the students struggle for years tof<strong>in</strong>ish their theses. Obstacles whichoccur dur<strong>in</strong>g the process are oftenrelated to the activity of formulat<strong>in</strong>g theresearch problem, collect<strong>in</strong>g empiricalmaterial and analys<strong>in</strong>g/<strong>in</strong>terpret<strong>in</strong>g thematerial. Correspond<strong>in</strong>g parts with<strong>in</strong> thewritten thesis frequently po<strong>in</strong>t atdeficient quality with respect to thescientific research problem, thereason<strong>in</strong>g regard<strong>in</strong>g methods, thequality and quantity of empiricalmaterial, as well as the level of analysis.These problems with respect to time andquality create frustration among bothstudents and teachers. They also meanthat supervis<strong>in</strong>g activities require moreresources than planned and allocatedfor. Besides that, these problems reducethe number of degrees produced andlengthen the time of study for thestudents. In order to overcome some ofmentioned problems we have plannedand organized the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g course<strong>in</strong> different ways, e.g. with respect tocourse length, number of meet<strong>in</strong>gs,written <strong>in</strong>structions and prescribedbooks. The underly<strong>in</strong>g idea has beenthat the ways we plan and organize thethesis course have an impact on thestudents’ possibilities to complete theirtheses; similar to one of the mean<strong>in</strong>gsthat Hagström presents (2005, pp. 113-119). However, these attempts do notseem to have resulted <strong>in</strong> any majorimprovements with respect to time andquality deficiencies. The underly<strong>in</strong>gproblem seems to go deeper than theplann<strong>in</strong>g and organis<strong>in</strong>g of the thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g course. Besides that, thesedifferent attempts have not really beenbased upon any research f<strong>in</strong>d<strong>in</strong>gsregard<strong>in</strong>g such aspects and studentresults.III.Studies on <strong>Thesis</strong> <strong>Writ<strong>in</strong>g</strong>Consider<strong>in</strong>g the importance as well asthe challenge of thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g, it hasattracted attention <strong>from</strong> a number ofresearchers. One <strong>in</strong>terest<strong>in</strong>g piece ofresearch is presented <strong>in</strong> Hagström(2005). In her work, Hagström analysestexts on thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g, both handbooksand research texts. Based on heranalysis, she concludes that differentmean<strong>in</strong>gs of thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g emerge. Inmany handbooks for example, thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g seems to be much aboutfollow<strong>in</strong>g rules. This k<strong>in</strong>d of text dealswith such issues such as grammar,referenc<strong>in</strong>g, academic style anddisposition. She also states that thesetexts are <strong>–</strong> paradoxically <strong>–</strong> seldom veryacademic <strong>in</strong> their character, <strong>in</strong> the senseof present<strong>in</strong>g a critical andproblematis<strong>in</strong>g view of thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gand thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g projects.Even if Hagström does not reallyapproach the subject <strong>from</strong> a studentperspective, her analysis of handbooksstill contributes to an <strong>in</strong>creasedunderstand<strong>in</strong>g of it. By be<strong>in</strong>g aware ofthose mean<strong>in</strong>gs that handbooks <strong>–</strong> andprobably also related teach<strong>in</strong>g <strong>–</strong> present,we can better understand students’ ideasand pre-understand<strong>in</strong>gs of such projectsand writ<strong>in</strong>gs.As mentioned, Hagström alsoanalyses research texts and constructmean<strong>in</strong>gs <strong>in</strong> a similar way as withhandbooks. She identifies one type ofstudy which addresses <strong>in</strong>stitutionalfactors <strong>in</strong> relation to thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g. Theidea beh<strong>in</strong>d this k<strong>in</strong>d of research is thata determ<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g factor with respect to thestudents’ possibility to complete theirtheses is the universities’ plann<strong>in</strong>g andorganis<strong>in</strong>g of the course and the thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g process. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to Hagström(ibid.), these studies suggest that factorssuch as an early <strong>in</strong>troduction of the task,organised meet<strong>in</strong>gs between studentsand teachers and clarity <strong>in</strong> requirementshave positive effects on the thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g process.


4Another type of research texts whichHagström identifies represent aperspective which this article and studyis <strong>in</strong>spired by. This perspective is basedupon <strong>–</strong> what Hagström calls <strong>–</strong> aphenomenographic research traditionwith e.g. Marton, Hounsell andEntwistle (1986), Biggs (2003) andRamsden (2003) as importantadvocates. With<strong>in</strong> this genre ofresearch, the students’ own learn<strong>in</strong>g isat focus. What students believe that theyshould learn, what they learn, how theylearn, and how they experience teach<strong>in</strong>gmethods and assessment procedures aresome central questions which are dealtwith <strong>in</strong> this k<strong>in</strong>d of research. Anunderly<strong>in</strong>g idea is that we can improveour teach<strong>in</strong>g by better understand<strong>in</strong>glearn<strong>in</strong>g <strong>–</strong> as well as teach<strong>in</strong>g <strong>–</strong> <strong>from</strong> thestudents’ perspective. Another centralidea, expressed by these researchers, isthat higher education should encouragewhat they call ‘deep learn<strong>in</strong>g”. Theythus make a dist<strong>in</strong>ction made betweensurface and deep learn<strong>in</strong>g. Somewhatsimply put, surface learn<strong>in</strong>g relates tomemoris<strong>in</strong>g facts whereas deep learn<strong>in</strong>g<strong>in</strong>volves a deeper understand<strong>in</strong>g ofmean<strong>in</strong>g. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to previousresearch, many students seem to aim atsurface learn<strong>in</strong>g. However, and moresevere, is that a lot of teach<strong>in</strong>g andexam<strong>in</strong>ation methods seem toencourage surface learn<strong>in</strong>g; often <strong>in</strong>contrary to teachers’ <strong>in</strong>tentions (see e.g.Entwistle, 1986). Another commonalityamong mentioned researchers is thatthey suggest a holistic approach toteach<strong>in</strong>g. This is for example reflected<strong>in</strong> Bigg’s model of constructivealignment (2003), which <strong>in</strong>cludesaspects such as students’ expectationsand prerequisites, stated learn<strong>in</strong>goutcomes, and teach<strong>in</strong>g and learn<strong>in</strong>gmethods. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to Hagström, thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> these texts is much aboutunderstand<strong>in</strong>g the content. In order toaccomplish a good thesis, the studentshave to understand thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> adeep and holistic sense. Still anotherperspective that is dealt with byHagström <strong>in</strong> relation to research texts isthe mean<strong>in</strong>g of thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g aslearn<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> context. The study by Blåsjö(2004) can be mentioned as an exampleof this last perspective. In her study,Blåsjö conducts fieldwork <strong>in</strong> twodifferent departments; a department ofhistory and one of economics.Observations <strong>from</strong> her study show thatthe educational sett<strong>in</strong>g has a major<strong>in</strong>fluence on students’ writ<strong>in</strong>g. The twodiscipl<strong>in</strong>es are very different withrespect to epistemology, scientificideals and research discourse;differences that are reflected <strong>in</strong> f<strong>in</strong>ishedtheses and the process of writ<strong>in</strong>g them.Accord<strong>in</strong>gly, <strong>in</strong> the work of Hagström(2005) exist<strong>in</strong>g texts and studies onthesis writ<strong>in</strong>g are analysed anddiscussed. A different k<strong>in</strong>d of textanalysis is presented by Emsheimer(2005; see also 2004). In his study,Emsheimer analyses student theses withrespect to e.g. research questions,methods, theory and the <strong>in</strong>terpretationof empirical data. Emsheimer concludesthat <strong>in</strong>vestigated theses have many goodqualities. The literature review and theamount of empirical data are oftenimpressive <strong>in</strong> the students’ work, as twoexamples. However, several theses haveshortcom<strong>in</strong>gs, particularly with respectto method and the analyses of empiricaldata. In order to better understandobserved shortcom<strong>in</strong>gs, Eimsheimer<strong>in</strong>terviews a handful of students. One<strong>in</strong>terpretation that Eimsheimer does hasconnections to Hagström’s mean<strong>in</strong>gs ofthesis writ<strong>in</strong>g. Accord<strong>in</strong>g toEimsheimer, few students seem to reallyreflect upon the mean<strong>in</strong>g of e.g. methodand theory, and their role <strong>in</strong> the thesiswork. The students have <strong>in</strong> other wordsnot developed a deep understand<strong>in</strong>g ofthese concepts and phenomenon. Tothem thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g <strong>–</strong> for example thewrit<strong>in</strong>g of a method section <strong>–</strong> is much


7presented. Be<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong>spired by Bigg’s 3Pmodel(2003), I have structured theresults <strong>in</strong> three sections which eachreflect one P <strong>in</strong> his model. The first P <strong>–</strong>presage <strong>–</strong> relates to factors, whichconstitute the conditions for teach<strong>in</strong>gand learn<strong>in</strong>g. It addresses both studentfactors and <strong>in</strong>stitutional ones, such asstudent expectations, prerequisites,teach<strong>in</strong>g capacity and availableliterature. S<strong>in</strong>ce this study approachesthesis writ<strong>in</strong>g <strong>from</strong> a studentperspective, the article covers ma<strong>in</strong>lystudent-related factors. Naturally,students are not aware of <strong>in</strong>stitutionalfactors and may not consider them. Thenext P <strong>–</strong> process <strong>–</strong> focuses on learn<strong>in</strong>gactivities. In this section, I addressteach<strong>in</strong>g methods, supervision, studentactivities among other th<strong>in</strong>gs. The last P<strong>in</strong> Bigg’s model relates to the productof a course or an assignment; <strong>in</strong> otherwords learn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes.i. Expectations/Preunderstand<strong>in</strong>gsIn this section, I will cover three aspectswhich can be argued to be presagefactors;a) expectations, b) goals andambitions, and c) perceivedpreparedness.To start with expectations, thestudents that I talk to which are <strong>in</strong> thevery beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g of their thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gproject express both positive andnegative attitudes towards theapproach<strong>in</strong>g task. All five expect thetask to be time-consum<strong>in</strong>g and hard toaccomplish <strong>in</strong> time; someth<strong>in</strong>g theyhave heard <strong>from</strong> other students as wellas <strong>from</strong> teachers. Some do also expectthe work to cause some frustration. Onestudent expresses her expectations ofthe thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g task <strong>in</strong> the follow<strong>in</strong>gway:“It will be irritat<strong>in</strong>g and tough.”Another student put it <strong>in</strong> a similarway, when say<strong>in</strong>g:“It will be hard work, time-consum<strong>in</strong>g.And if we have to rewrite and rewrite, itmay also be frustrat<strong>in</strong>g.”The students’ accounts also reveal aportion of anxiety among the<strong>in</strong>terviewees, primarily related to the<strong>in</strong>troductory work of determ<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g thetopic and specify<strong>in</strong>g the purpose of theproject. One student expla<strong>in</strong>s that shefeels some anguish s<strong>in</strong>ce she does notknow yet what she and her group matesshould write about. Another femalestudent <strong>–</strong> who is very positive to thethesis writ<strong>in</strong>g task and look forward toit <strong>–</strong> adds:“But sure, I am a little bit worried. Tostart the work, to get it right <strong>from</strong> thebeg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g. I know it is hard to f<strong>in</strong>d agood problem area.”A third student expresses his anxiety<strong>in</strong> the follow<strong>in</strong>g way:“I am worried, if I should manage it ornot. I have respect for the task, you couldsay.”In the <strong>in</strong>terviews, it becomes evidentthat all five students are well aware ofthe fact that many students do not f<strong>in</strong>ishthe thesis work <strong>in</strong> time, and that somedo not manage to f<strong>in</strong>ish it at all. Theyalso know that many failures go back tothe <strong>in</strong>troductory work of determ<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>gthe topic and formulat<strong>in</strong>g a researchproblem. This awareness expla<strong>in</strong>s someof the students’ anxiety.Despite anxiety and some negativeexpectations, they seem to have ma<strong>in</strong>lypositive feel<strong>in</strong>gs regard<strong>in</strong>g the task andthey are eager to start the work.Especially one student expresses a verypositive attitude towards the thesiswork. She says:“It will be so much fun! [...] We [me andmy group mates] want to start now.”


8She expla<strong>in</strong>s that she likes the k<strong>in</strong>d ofwork that a thesis project <strong>in</strong>volves andthat she th<strong>in</strong>ks that she is prepared forthis challeng<strong>in</strong>g assignment. She likeswrit<strong>in</strong>g and to do <strong>in</strong>dependent projects.She cont<strong>in</strong>ues:“Th<strong>in</strong>k of traditional written exams. It ismuch about memoriz<strong>in</strong>g facts. [...] Idon’t like that and this task is different.”Here then, she <strong>in</strong>dicates that she doesnot aim at the k<strong>in</strong>d of surface learn<strong>in</strong>g,that she believes traditional writtenexams encourages. Still another studentuses the word “fun” when describ<strong>in</strong>ghis ideas about the thesis work. When Iask him what he th<strong>in</strong>ks about the task,he answers:“Fun. Interest<strong>in</strong>g. It will be fun to dealwith a problem and to try to solve it.”Thereafter, he touches upon anotheraspect which some of the others alsomention; an aspect which make themfeel positive about the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gproject. It is the last assignment beforetak<strong>in</strong>g a degree!Statements also <strong>in</strong>dicate that theyhave great expectations regard<strong>in</strong>g thework. It is now that they should showus <strong>–</strong> and themselves <strong>–</strong> that they can useall knowledge that they have learneddur<strong>in</strong>g the programme. It is now that allpieces should be put together. And it isnow that they f<strong>in</strong>ally will get anopportunity to learn a subject moredeeply.Several of the students also clarifythat they are look<strong>in</strong>g forward to the daywhen the thesis is f<strong>in</strong>ished. They haveall seen how happy, relieved andsatisfied students are, the day whenthey present the f<strong>in</strong>al version of thethesis.Regard<strong>in</strong>g the students’ goals andambitions, they all mention the sameones. Their ma<strong>in</strong> goals seem to be toproduce a good thesis, <strong>in</strong> time. Thesegoals and ambitions are for exampleexpressed <strong>in</strong> the follow<strong>in</strong>g statements:“My goal is to do accomplish a goodpiece of work, as good as possible.”“I want it to be the best that I have done;someth<strong>in</strong>g to be proud of.”“We aim at June [which is the officiallydeadl<strong>in</strong>e]; then we want the thesis to bef<strong>in</strong>ished.”They also declare that they areprepared and are will<strong>in</strong>g to work veryhard to accomplish this. One studentexclaims:“We will work as hell.”One student also emphasises that theyhave to work efficiently. It means thatthey have to set the alarm clock, start towork at eight o’clock <strong>in</strong> the morn<strong>in</strong>gand then work the whole day. He thenadds with a smile:“Someth<strong>in</strong>g that we [as students] maynot be used to.”In general, they also feel that they areprepared for the task and that they havethe prerequisites that are required <strong>in</strong>order to accomplish it. None of thestudents that I talk to expresses anypuzzlement regard<strong>in</strong>g the project. Theyfeel that they have a clear idea of whatthey should do and what is required ofthem. They particularly mention oneprevious course <strong>–</strong> called Sem<strong>in</strong>ars andscientific research projects <strong>–</strong> as onewhich has made them well prepared forthe assignment. Regard<strong>in</strong>g this course,one student says:“It has made me realize how a thesisshould look like. And what parts thatshould be <strong>in</strong>cluded.”S<strong>in</strong>ce the students seem to expect it tobe especially tricky to formulate a


9research problem, I also ask about this.I ask them if they <strong>–</strong> by now <strong>–</strong>understand the mean<strong>in</strong>g of a researchproblem. All answer yes on thatquestion. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to themselves, theyknow quite well the requirements andcharacteristics of a research problem.Three of the students also mention acourse <strong>in</strong> organisation as a useful one.In that course they practiced to analyseempirical data with the help of theory;someth<strong>in</strong>g that they th<strong>in</strong>k will be useful<strong>in</strong> the thesis work.Also assignments <strong>in</strong>cluded <strong>in</strong>specialisation courses, which precedethe thesis work, are mentioned as goodpreparations for the thesis project.However, here the answers differsomewhat s<strong>in</strong>ce the students have takendifferent courses. One student says thatshe had to read many scientific articles<strong>in</strong> her course, which she th<strong>in</strong>ks willhelp her. Another student mentions thatthey had to do <strong>in</strong>terviews and writepapers <strong>in</strong> her specialisation course;good exercises which have made hermore prepared.In general then, the students are quiteconv<strong>in</strong>ced that they have neededknowledge and capabilities <strong>in</strong> order tosuccessfully f<strong>in</strong>ish the project.However, the time is a problem.Therefore, a couple of students say thatthey would have appreciated if they <strong>–</strong>already <strong>in</strong> the specialisation course <strong>–</strong>had started to work on the thesisproject. These students argue that itwould have felt even better if they <strong>–</strong>when the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g course starts <strong>–</strong>already had a relevant and <strong>in</strong>terest<strong>in</strong>gtopic to dig <strong>in</strong>to.It can further be added that also thestudents, that recently have f<strong>in</strong>ishedtheir projects, th<strong>in</strong>k that they were wellprepared for the task. However, whentalk<strong>in</strong>g to these students, some th<strong>in</strong>gsare brought up which they <strong>–</strong> afterwards<strong>–</strong> realise that they lacked knowledgeabout and experiences <strong>in</strong>. One of theseis knowledge about different methods.In previous courses, they have learnedlittle about methods. They have furtherdone very few <strong>–</strong> if any <strong>–</strong> profoundempirical <strong>in</strong>vestigations.ii.Process ExperiencesConsider<strong>in</strong>g the above presentationbased on the students’ accounts, moststudents enter the project with positivefeel<strong>in</strong>gs, even if they are a little bitanxious about their capacity. They alsofeel quite prepared for the task and haveclear ambitions to work very hard.Despite this, a majority of the studentsget <strong>in</strong>to trouble quite early. Asmentioned <strong>in</strong> the method section, Iconduct four <strong>in</strong>terviews with studentsthat <strong>–</strong> accord<strong>in</strong>g to officially schedules<strong>–</strong> should be <strong>in</strong> the middle of theprocess. Three of these students werealso talked to before they started towork on their theses. These follow up<strong>in</strong>terviews reveal that all students <strong>–</strong>except for one <strong>–</strong> are well beh<strong>in</strong>d thetimetable after only a couple of weeks.It can also be noted that those studentsthat recently have f<strong>in</strong>ished their thesesalso passed the <strong>in</strong>itial deadl<strong>in</strong>e a longtime ago. One student have evenrestarted the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g project <strong>from</strong>the very beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g, after hav<strong>in</strong>g failedto f<strong>in</strong>ish her first one.In this section, I elaborate on theproblems which the students haveencountered dur<strong>in</strong>g the process. I alsodiscuss how they perceive the support<strong>from</strong> e.g. supervisors, lectures andsem<strong>in</strong>ars <strong>in</strong> order to see weaknesses andstrengths <strong>in</strong> teach<strong>in</strong>g methods <strong>–</strong> andthus <strong>from</strong> the students’ perspective. Ialso pay some special attention to thestudent who is <strong>in</strong> l<strong>in</strong>e with thetimetable; someth<strong>in</strong>g that can be statedas unusual.As expected, it is ma<strong>in</strong>ly the<strong>in</strong>troductory work that causes thestudents problem. The <strong>in</strong>terviews revealthat they have a very hard timepresent<strong>in</strong>g a research project that fulfilsscientific requirements. Two students,


10who work together, tell me that theyrecently have changed topic andthereby almost started <strong>from</strong> thebeg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g. One of them expla<strong>in</strong>s:“It didn’t turn out as we expected. [...]We thought that we could cont<strong>in</strong>ue onour track, and make it <strong>in</strong>to aresearchable problem. But it didn’t work.So, we decided to change tracks.”When they try to expla<strong>in</strong> why theycouldn’t cont<strong>in</strong>ue to develop theirorig<strong>in</strong>al idea they are quite vague. Theysay that they th<strong>in</strong>k that their project wastoo broad and the research problem tooimprecise, but they can’t expla<strong>in</strong> <strong>in</strong>what sense. When I explicitly ask themif they understand the shortcom<strong>in</strong>gs oftheir previous draft and project idea,they both answer:“No, not really.”One of them cont<strong>in</strong>ues:“Actually, it felt quite good. [...] But wehave to trust our supervisors.”They further describe that they feltquite overwhelmed when they realisedthat the project did not meet scientificrequirements and that they had toreth<strong>in</strong>k. When I do the <strong>in</strong>terview, theyfeel though that they are on track aga<strong>in</strong>.They have <strong>–</strong> together with theirsupervisors <strong>–</strong> determ<strong>in</strong>ed a purpose andthey feel that they have a quite clearidea of what they should do.The <strong>in</strong>terviews further reveal thatmany of their class mates <strong>–</strong> also thosethat I do not talk to <strong>–</strong> are <strong>in</strong> a similarsituation, even if they have not gone sofar and changed the topic as theprevious group. But they struggle withthe task of def<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g the project andformulat<strong>in</strong>g a researchable problem.Also the students who have managed tof<strong>in</strong>ish their theses claim that this wasthe most difficult part of the work andrequired much more time and effortthan they ever could have expected.One group that I <strong>in</strong>terview likened thewhole process of writ<strong>in</strong>g a thesis with aroller coaster. They say:“It was ups and downs”.They further clarify that the work ofdef<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>g a project and formulat<strong>in</strong>g aresearch problems <strong>in</strong>volved many <strong>–</strong> andheavy <strong>–</strong> downs.Still another student that should be <strong>in</strong>the middle of the process clarify thather group is beh<strong>in</strong>d the timetable. Sheadds though another explanation forthis. She tells me that it took weeksbefore they got a supervisor and thengot <strong>in</strong> contact with him. She says:“S<strong>in</strong>ce we didn’t have a supervisor wedidn’t know if we were on the right track.Which we weren’t...”She further expla<strong>in</strong>s that once theymet him, they received great help withthe problem statement. Even if there arestill some improvements andclarifications to make, she feels thatthey <strong>–</strong> by now <strong>–</strong> know quite well whatthe purpose of the project is. But shestresses that the delay that this blundercaused them will be impossible to catchup with.As mentioned, there is one exceptionamong all the delayed projects. Onestudent clarify that her group followsthe plan, or they are even a little bitahead of the plan. Consequently, shestrongly believes that they will be ableto f<strong>in</strong>ish the project <strong>in</strong> time. She evenclaim that the work so far have beensomewhat easier than she expected. Sheputs it <strong>in</strong> the follow<strong>in</strong>g way:“It feels good. I thought that I would bemore under stress. But it feels verygood...”She also clarifies that their supervisorseems very pleased with what they haveaccomplished so far. When this student


11<strong>–</strong> let’s call her Sara <strong>–</strong> communicates herideas about the work of writ<strong>in</strong>g a thesis,she provides me with a picture whichhas similarities with Ylijoki’s bus<strong>in</strong>esslikestory (2001). Accord<strong>in</strong>g to Sara, itis not a big deal to write a thesis. It justhas to be done, and you need to workhard and with great discipl<strong>in</strong>e. At thesame time, Sara seems to have <strong>–</strong> whatGibb et.al. (1986) call <strong>–</strong> an academiclearn<strong>in</strong>g orientation. She likes theacademic elements <strong>in</strong> her education andshe sees the po<strong>in</strong>t <strong>in</strong> them, even if notplann<strong>in</strong>g an academic career.Accord<strong>in</strong>gly, the comb<strong>in</strong>ation of anacademic orientation and a bus<strong>in</strong>esslikeattitude towards the task of writ<strong>in</strong>ga thesis seems to be a good one, <strong>in</strong> therespect of keep<strong>in</strong>g the timetable andsatisfy<strong>in</strong>g the supervisor.When I ask the students to describewhere they are <strong>in</strong> the process, theyfirstly tell we what parts they havechapter, have started to write on themethod and so forth. This written <strong>in</strong> thethesis. For example, they declare theyhave almost f<strong>in</strong>ished the <strong>in</strong>troductorysuggests that they ma<strong>in</strong>ly see theproject as a writ<strong>in</strong>g task; someth<strong>in</strong>gwhich also the title of this article<strong>in</strong>dicates. To them then, the mean<strong>in</strong>g of‘thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g’ is closely related towrit<strong>in</strong>g a report. Even if some of themmention that they have made some<strong>in</strong>terviews, few accounts <strong>in</strong>dicate thatthey also see the task as a researchproject.To cont<strong>in</strong>ue with the students’perspective of teach<strong>in</strong>g methods dur<strong>in</strong>gthe course and process, they are <strong>in</strong>general very satisfied. When I ask themabout the lectures which has beenoffered on e.g. methods and academicwrit<strong>in</strong>g, they have been to most ofthem. They also assert that they f<strong>in</strong>d thelectures useful. All students that I talkto <strong>–</strong> irrespective of supervisor <strong>–</strong> are alsovery pleased with the supervision, whenit takes place. They stress that thesupervisors are eager to help, that theyhave the right attitude, and that theyprovide them with useful comments.They also appreciate that thesupervisors leave the decisions to them,and that they do not provide them withsolutions. The students <strong>–</strong> somewhatimplicitly <strong>–</strong> express the idea that thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g is an <strong>in</strong>dependent project, whichthey want to accomplish mostly bythemselves. This also expla<strong>in</strong>s why thestudents do not want the supervisors to<strong>in</strong>terfere more <strong>in</strong> their work, and whythey do not ask for more meet<strong>in</strong>gs.However, some disappo<strong>in</strong>tment withrespect to supervis<strong>in</strong>g is brought up. Asmentioned, one group had to wait quitelong before they got a supervisor. Thereare also some accounts that reveal thatsome supervisors are hard to get <strong>in</strong>contact with, and that they are bad atanswer<strong>in</strong>g short questions <strong>in</strong> e-mail.But <strong>–</strong> and as already po<strong>in</strong>ted at <strong>–</strong> whenthey meet with their supervisors andreal supervision takes place, thestudents are satisfied.Regard<strong>in</strong>g the sem<strong>in</strong>ars that arescheduled and where the aim is topresent drafts and to discuss them, thereare different op<strong>in</strong>ions. On the one hand,most of them th<strong>in</strong>k that these sem<strong>in</strong>arsare necessary. They need to read otherstudents’ reports and they need tocomment upon them. On the otherhand, they do not really f<strong>in</strong>d themuseful <strong>in</strong> the sense of carry<strong>in</strong>g their ownpiece of work forward. Mostly, they getcomments <strong>from</strong> the sem<strong>in</strong>ar leaders;which they would have gotten anywaywhen meet<strong>in</strong>g with the supervisors. Afew students do also f<strong>in</strong>d these sem<strong>in</strong>arsunfair. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to them, some groupsget a lot of criticism and some hardlyany comments. And they can’t reallysee the correlation between the amountof comments and the quality of thework. Thereby, the sem<strong>in</strong>ars may beperceived as unfair and somewhatmysterious.


12iii.Learn<strong>in</strong>g OutcomesIt is now time to turn our attention tothe last P <strong>–</strong> the product. In this section,I will cover three topics that <strong>in</strong> somesense are related to the product. Besideslearn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes, I also elaborate onthe purpose of the course and therequirements <strong>in</strong> order to pass it.Regard<strong>in</strong>g the purpose of the course,all the students who are about to enterthe thesis project seem to have a clearidea what it is, even if they have notread the official course plan. (It is onlyone student who has read the courseplan and that is Sara <strong>–</strong> our modelstudent.) However, the ideas about thema<strong>in</strong> purpose differ somewhat. Somestudents stress that they <strong>–</strong> <strong>in</strong> this lastassignment <strong>–</strong> should show us what theyhave learned dur<strong>in</strong>g their education.Such ideas are reflected <strong>in</strong> thefollow<strong>in</strong>g statements:“The purpose... It is to show you that wehave understood all the th<strong>in</strong>gs that wehave learned. And also showourselves...”“[In this work] we shall demonstratewhat we have learned.”A statement which is quite contrary isprovided by a third student. He says:“At the beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g of the education Ithought that we should show you all thatwe have learnt [<strong>in</strong> this piece of work].But now, I don’t th<strong>in</strong>k so. It is not aboutthat. It is impossible to show you all thatwe have learned...”However, when I try to figure outwhat k<strong>in</strong>d of knowledge they th<strong>in</strong>k thatthey should show us, I realise that theideas differ. One student expla<strong>in</strong>s thatthey should show us that they knowhow to write an academic report.Another one ma<strong>in</strong>ly th<strong>in</strong>k of knowledgerelated to the subject of bus<strong>in</strong>ess andmanagement. Still another one br<strong>in</strong>gsup knowledge related to research and<strong>in</strong>vestigatory work.Some students emphasise theacademic purpose of the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gtask. They say:“It [the thesis work] is part of thisacademic th<strong>in</strong>g. To conduct a study, todo research.”“[The aim is to get a] deeperunderstand<strong>in</strong>g of how humans create <strong>–</strong>and store <strong>–</strong> knowledge.”A last student th<strong>in</strong>k that the purposeis to “tie up the sack”, as he puts it. Inother words, and accord<strong>in</strong>g to his view,the aim is to get all pieces together.It can also be noted that all students <strong>–</strong>except for possibly one <strong>–</strong> claim thatthey regard the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g project asa useful one, also <strong>in</strong> relation to a futureprofessional life. This was somewhatunexpected consider<strong>in</strong>g what waspreviously mentioned; that manystudents regard bus<strong>in</strong>ess educationsmore as a vocational education than asan academic one. However, the way ofreason<strong>in</strong>g is somewhat differentbetween the students. Those studentsthat have recently f<strong>in</strong>ished the thesiswork, mention such learn<strong>in</strong>g outcomessuch as the ability to conduct a projectsystematically and the ability to arguelogically and trustworthy. Among thosethat are about to start the project, theybr<strong>in</strong>g forward to topic of the project andthe usefulness of digg<strong>in</strong>g deep <strong>in</strong>to aspecific topic. They also mention theusefulness of know<strong>in</strong>g how to write areport. Two of those students alsomention that they <strong>in</strong> a futureprofessional life may have to makesmaller <strong>in</strong>vestigations; someth<strong>in</strong>gwhich the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g task preparethem for. However, one student admits<strong>–</strong> with some hesitation <strong>–</strong> that he th<strong>in</strong>ksthat thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g is ma<strong>in</strong>ly anacademic device, which has littleconnection to a ‘real’ life.Consequently, he sees limited


13usefulness of the task, <strong>in</strong> relation to hisfuture professional life.The above answers also <strong>in</strong>dicate whatthe students th<strong>in</strong>k that the learn<strong>in</strong>goutcomes of the course will be, or havebeen. Accord<strong>in</strong>g to the students, theywill learn <strong>–</strong> or have learned <strong>–</strong> how towrite a report, how to make an<strong>in</strong>vestigation, how to read and analysescientific articles and papers, as someexamples. However, there is only onestudent <strong>–</strong> <strong>in</strong> the beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g of theprocess <strong>–</strong> who has read the course planand thus has seen the officially statedlearn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes. As mentioned, it isSara.Regard<strong>in</strong>g the officially statedlearn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes, I read them to thosethree students who worked together andwho recently have f<strong>in</strong>ished their thesis.Luckily, they all nod conv<strong>in</strong>c<strong>in</strong>gly at allof them, when I ask them if they th<strong>in</strong>kthat those aims have been fulfilled andif they have managed to reach statedlearn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes. However, it hastaken quite long time s<strong>in</strong>ce they presenttheir thesis half a year after planneddeadl<strong>in</strong>e. When discuss<strong>in</strong>g this, they donot have any ideas on how to speed upthis process. They simply state:“These th<strong>in</strong>gs take long time to reallyunderstand. You need time.”Regard<strong>in</strong>g requirements <strong>–</strong> the lastaspect which will be covered here <strong>–</strong> theobservations are somewhatcontradictory. At one hand the studentsclaim that they are well aware of therequirements and what is expected ofthem. When I ask the students at thebeg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g of the process, if they feelconfused about the task, several of themclaim with certa<strong>in</strong>ty:“No, not at all.”There are however many otherstatements that <strong>in</strong>dicate that there issome confusion despite all. First of all,those students that recently havepresented their thesis at a f<strong>in</strong>al sem<strong>in</strong>arseem to have no idea what the gradewill be. Also, statements, which<strong>in</strong>dicate that the students f<strong>in</strong>d work<strong>in</strong>gsem<strong>in</strong>ars and comments <strong>from</strong> sem<strong>in</strong>arleaders unfair, po<strong>in</strong>t at some confusion.It suggests that the students are unableto evaluate their own and otherstudents’ work, <strong>in</strong> relation to scientificrequirements.VI. Discussion and Teach<strong>in</strong>gImplicationsThe above account of students’perceptions and experiences of thethesis work raises many questions andtopics for discussion. One observationthat can be made is that their statementsdirect attention towards some issuesthat quite easily can be handled <strong>in</strong> orderto improve the plann<strong>in</strong>g andimplementation of the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gprocess. Some of these ideas are <strong>in</strong> l<strong>in</strong>ewith previous studies on <strong>in</strong>stitutionalfactors, mentioned by Hagström (2005)and <strong>in</strong> section III. One such th<strong>in</strong>g is theidea to relate one assignment <strong>in</strong> thepreced<strong>in</strong>g course to the thesis work.Thereby, the students would be forcedto start earlier with the project, whichmeans that they may have a topicalready when the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g coursestarts. This would probably dim<strong>in</strong>ishthe students’ anxiety and help themkeep the timetable. S<strong>in</strong>ce the studentshave very limited time <strong>–</strong> which we alsostress <strong>–</strong> it is of course important that we<strong>–</strong> as teachers and supervisors <strong>–</strong> actquickly. No group should have to waitfor weeks before gett<strong>in</strong>g a supervisor.We also have to be better at answer<strong>in</strong>gstudents’ questions quickly, also whenthey are sent on mail. For us <strong>–</strong> asteachers <strong>–</strong> it is easy to assume that it isnot very urgent to react on students’mail. We seem to assume that thestudents simply cont<strong>in</strong>ue their thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g work while wait<strong>in</strong>g. However,some statements <strong>from</strong> the students<strong>in</strong>dicate that they do not. Even if the


14students regard thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g as an<strong>in</strong>dependent project and claim that theydo not want more <strong>in</strong>volvement <strong>from</strong> thesupervisors, they seem to stop the workwhile wait<strong>in</strong>g for an answer <strong>from</strong> thesupervisor. It suggests that the studentshave a quite l<strong>in</strong>ear view of the projectwork. One issue or problem has to bef<strong>in</strong>ished and solved before tackl<strong>in</strong>g thenext.Another th<strong>in</strong>g which may improvethe thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g project <strong>–</strong> also relatedto supervision <strong>–</strong> is that it may be fruitfulto have a more active way ofsupervis<strong>in</strong>g <strong>in</strong> the beg<strong>in</strong>n<strong>in</strong>g of theprocess; with many frequent meet<strong>in</strong>gscharacterised by dialogue anddiscussions. This would possibly helpthe students <strong>in</strong> the process of def<strong>in</strong><strong>in</strong>gthe purpose of the project.The students’ stories and accountsalso reveal aspects which are moretroublesome to deal with. Asmentioned, most students encounteredsevere problems when formulat<strong>in</strong>g ascientific research problem, despite thefact that they claim that they knew whata research problem means. Thisobservation suggests that students knowthe requirements of a scientific researchproject on a surface level. In otherwords, they can quite easily l<strong>in</strong>e up thecharacteristics of a research project ofhigh quality. However, they seem tohave limited understand<strong>in</strong>g of thedeeper mean<strong>in</strong>g of these requirements,and the consequences when do<strong>in</strong>g anown piece of research. This may alsorelate to similar aspects, such as methodand theory (cf. Emsheimer, 2005). Acentral question is then: How can wechange our teach<strong>in</strong>g methods andlearn<strong>in</strong>g activities <strong>in</strong> order to encouragedeep learn<strong>in</strong>g regard<strong>in</strong>g such difficultth<strong>in</strong>gs as research problem, method andtheory? All these concepts can beunderstood as threshold concepts (seee.g. Meyer & Land, 2003). They are allvery difficult to understand but oncethey are understood a new worldappears. Maybe a first step is to moredeeply dig <strong>in</strong>to the students’ ideas andperceptions of these concepts.The study also reveals that thestudents have a hard time understand<strong>in</strong>ghow we assess their work and how weevaluate the quality of written theses.One group did not understand why theirproject idea was not good enough. Onegroup could not understand why theyhad received many comments dur<strong>in</strong>g asem<strong>in</strong>ar despite the fact that theythought that their draft was better thansome of the others. And the studentswho recently had f<strong>in</strong>ished their thesesfound it hard to speculate on the f<strong>in</strong>algrade. All these observations <strong>in</strong>dicatethat the evaluation process and ourassessment criteria are quite obscure tostudents. Accord<strong>in</strong>gly, a challeng<strong>in</strong>gtask is to make the process and thecriteria more visible and to explicitlyrelate comments and judgements tostated evaluation criteria.Furthermore, many different picturesand ideas about the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>gproject appear <strong>in</strong> the students’ accounts,even if we also see some similarities <strong>in</strong>their way of reason<strong>in</strong>g The studentsrelate the project with somewhatdifferent purposes, different mean<strong>in</strong>gs,and different learn<strong>in</strong>g outcomes. AsHagström (2005) stresses, handbooksfor example reflect a mean<strong>in</strong>g of thesiswrit<strong>in</strong>g that it is ma<strong>in</strong>ly about follow<strong>in</strong>grules, and particularly <strong>in</strong> relation towrit<strong>in</strong>g. Such ideas do also occur <strong>in</strong>many the students’ stories. Of course, itis important to be aware of this; thatstudents relate thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g withdifferent mean<strong>in</strong>gs. However, andmaybe even more important, is toconsider that our teach<strong>in</strong>g methods andteach<strong>in</strong>g activities may support variousmean<strong>in</strong>gs. Hereby, we may not be ableto accomplish the k<strong>in</strong>d of constructivealignment as Biggs (2003) advocatesfor, <strong>in</strong> the programme generally and <strong>in</strong>the thesis writ<strong>in</strong>g course specifically.


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