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they came down under, deep down under<br />

and terra nullius they called it<br />

Judge’s Comment<br />

The repetition of the word 'and terra nullius they called it' keeps bringing the poem<br />

back to the point that it was not this - a thoughtful well-written poem.<br />

Hayley Pymont<br />

Corrimal High School<br />

CORRIMAL NSW<br />

She<br />

She sits on the new blue carpet<br />

With her back against the wall under the window,<br />

Looking close down to her novel<br />

With those small black words covering the page.<br />

Lifting her head<br />

She tells me to quiet my self talk<br />

And in a heartbeat<br />

I am back in the classroom.<br />

She, the teacher continues to read on with the novel.<br />

I ignore her<br />

As I am trying to write.<br />

To have freedom, time to myself.<br />

To do something I can do.<br />

The sound of the fan throbs in my ear.<br />

I am silent.<br />

Judge’s Comment<br />

Intense and intensely imagined<br />

Abira Riaz<br />

James Ruse Agricultural High School<br />

CARLINGFORD NSW<br />

Behind the Glass Curtain<br />

Those tendrils of sinking, empty<br />

Acts of kindness<br />

that seep into this curtained, bleached alcove<br />

Hospital corners,<br />

Oh, oh that harsh white-<br />

Antiseptic hung dry in the air<br />

Immersed.<br />

Here, nothing can remain.<br />

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