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And the proud, orange layers that they surround.<br />

It dances in the air<br />

So exuberant, too alive<br />

Casting cruel shadows on their painted faces<br />

Enhancing their brutal natures<br />

It too, is betrayed<br />

Forgotten is the fire,<br />

Bringing with it the signal for rescue<br />

Now, it hosts evil<br />

What has become of us?<br />

Only the violent ripples of the ocean<br />

Can assuage my anger.<br />

I can not take it any longer<br />

For the blood stains their hand<br />

Red as the paint they wear around their eyes<br />

Oh, it is red<br />

Red as the sun in mid-morning<br />

Red as the berries that burst in my hand,<br />

The juice dripping down my clenched fist<br />

Oh,<br />

It is sick,<br />

It is disgusting<br />

What has become of me?<br />

Their sobs are ignored,<br />

Their hopes are shattered<br />

Like broken glass.<br />

Evil has prevailed<br />

For even the fire has turned against us<br />

For even reality has diminished<br />

For even 'rescue' is unfamiliar on my tongue<br />

Fear has shaped our lives<br />

Afraid of my own shadow<br />

Oh,<br />

What has become of me?<br />

Oh,<br />

What has become of us?<br />

Judge’s Comment<br />

There are vivid images that put the reader in the place very effectively<br />

Jemima Ng<br />

Applecross <strong>Senior</strong> High School<br />

ARDROSS WA<br />

Frost Free<br />

The lacy tourist attraction<br />

frozen to the bone<br />

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