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Lauren SCHRIEBER, 13 Blackburn High School BLACKBURN VIC Ocean Breeze Salty air, sun kissed hair Palm trees, ocean breeze Surfing waves, sandy caves Beach huts, sexy butts Coconuts fall, crabs crawl Water so clear, fish swim near Sun sets, volleyball nets Beach shells, seaweed smells Fish'n'chips, salty lips Sailing ships, watermelon pips I loved today. I want to stay. Judge’s Comment Intriguing, effective use of rhyme and rhythm to recreate a day at the beach. The poet has chosen to keep it simple, using sights and smells which will typify a beach scene for many readers. Hugo SCHULZ, 14 Blackburn High School BLACKBURN VIC Skate Snake Skating is fun, Skating is sick, until You get snaked by that one little prick, On a scooter. Judge’s Comment Short and to the point, this one made me laugh.
Jasmine TODOROSKA, 13 MLC School BURWOOD NSW Lies When the rainbow erupts in the sky You smile and ask if I can see it too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see in the sunset is another day gone When the watery lamp of the sky begins to glow You smile and ask if I can see it too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see is the moon never being as warm as the sun When the warriors of the sky stand still You smile and ask if I can see them too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see in the clouds is rain When giant's tears fall to earth You smile and ask if I can see them too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see is my wet washing When the oasis from a sandy wasteland rises You smile and ask if I can see it too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see in the sea is the seaweed When the motion of time chimes through the world You smile and ask if I can hear it too When I look back and say I can You know I'm lying as all I see in the wind is my lost balloon
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