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A Journal of Mahatma Gandhi Antarrashtriya Hindi Vishwavidyalaya

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them. The author belongs to an army<br />

<strong>of</strong>ficer’s family, hence she has an insider’s<br />

view <strong>of</strong> the problem like phones as life<br />

line, problem in native village, call for<br />

war etc. However, the story could have<br />

been better had there been lively dialogues<br />

between characters. The very long (2<br />

pages) story ‘Utopia’ by Vandana Rag<br />

suffers from unncecessary details. She<br />

has tried to follow Udai Prakash’s style<br />

<strong>of</strong> long story (like a novella) but she<br />

miserably fails to sustain it throughout.<br />

Poverty <strong>of</strong> Nijjo’s family, celebration <strong>of</strong><br />

Hindu festivals with great pomp and show,<br />

division between Hindus & Muslims during<br />

Indo-Pak cricket match, preparation for<br />

building <strong>of</strong> Ram Temple at Ayodhya,<br />

abduction <strong>of</strong> Nijjo, objection <strong>of</strong> Maulavi<br />

to Muslim girls’ visit to see Hindu goddess<br />

Durga’s idols, and other details have not<br />

succeeded creatively to make it a good<br />

story – it is too casual, superficial and<br />

disconnected to be believed.<br />

Other stories <strong>of</strong> Pratyaksha (The Hunt),<br />

Kavita (Transformation), Manisha<br />

Kulshreshtha, (There is Nothing Romantic<br />

At All), Rajee Seth (Morass) and Mridula<br />

Garg (The Second one) are somehow<br />

ordinary, especially in terms <strong>of</strong> content.<br />

Though treatment, style, form and language<br />

matter in a story, yet a story is first<br />

<strong>of</strong> all a narrative that should be new,<br />

interesting and impressive to make the<br />

readers move, a little bit, if not get changed<br />

in their hearts and minds. Of course, any<br />

attempt to produce <strong>Hindi</strong> story writers<br />

into English language is welcome, yet the<br />

selection <strong>of</strong> stories should have been<br />

strictly and rigorously on merit basis so<br />

that the new readers in English version<br />

get a genuine taste and a real picture<br />

<strong>of</strong> the quality and variety <strong>of</strong> contemporary<br />

<strong>Hindi</strong> short stories. Unfortunately only<br />

three stories <strong>of</strong> older generation viz Mannu<br />

Bhandari, Chitra Mudgal and Chandrakanta<br />

deserve appreciation and the rest <strong>of</strong> the<br />

stories <strong>of</strong> this volume ‘Her Piece <strong>of</strong> Sky’<br />

are not the right representative <strong>of</strong><br />

contemporary <strong>Hindi</strong> fiction. However, the<br />

overall production <strong>of</strong> the book is quite<br />

good, with an aesthetic cover design, good<br />

printing and paper.<br />

The Book reviewed : ‘Her Piece <strong>of</strong> Sky’; Translated by : Deepa Agarwal;<br />

Publishers : Zubaan, New Delhi; Price : Rs. 295/-; Edition : 2011<br />

January-March 2012 :: 159

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