A Journal of Mahatma Gandhi Antarrashtriya Hindi Vishwavidyalaya
A Journal of Mahatma Gandhi Antarrashtriya Hindi Vishwavidyalaya
A Journal of Mahatma Gandhi Antarrashtriya Hindi Vishwavidyalaya
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them. The author belongs to an army<br />
<strong>of</strong>ficer’s family, hence she has an insider’s<br />
view <strong>of</strong> the problem like phones as life<br />
line, problem in native village, call for<br />
war etc. However, the story could have<br />
been better had there been lively dialogues<br />
between characters. The very long (2<br />
pages) story ‘Utopia’ by Vandana Rag<br />
suffers from unncecessary details. She<br />
has tried to follow Udai Prakash’s style<br />
<strong>of</strong> long story (like a novella) but she<br />
miserably fails to sustain it throughout.<br />
Poverty <strong>of</strong> Nijjo’s family, celebration <strong>of</strong><br />
Hindu festivals with great pomp and show,<br />
division between Hindus & Muslims during<br />
Indo-Pak cricket match, preparation for<br />
building <strong>of</strong> Ram Temple at Ayodhya,<br />
abduction <strong>of</strong> Nijjo, objection <strong>of</strong> Maulavi<br />
to Muslim girls’ visit to see Hindu goddess<br />
Durga’s idols, and other details have not<br />
succeeded creatively to make it a good<br />
story – it is too casual, superficial and<br />
disconnected to be believed.<br />
Other stories <strong>of</strong> Pratyaksha (The Hunt),<br />
Kavita (Transformation), Manisha<br />
Kulshreshtha, (There is Nothing Romantic<br />
At All), Rajee Seth (Morass) and Mridula<br />
Garg (The Second one) are somehow<br />
ordinary, especially in terms <strong>of</strong> content.<br />
Though treatment, style, form and language<br />
matter in a story, yet a story is first<br />
<strong>of</strong> all a narrative that should be new,<br />
interesting and impressive to make the<br />
readers move, a little bit, if not get changed<br />
in their hearts and minds. Of course, any<br />
attempt to produce <strong>Hindi</strong> story writers<br />
into English language is welcome, yet the<br />
selection <strong>of</strong> stories should have been<br />
strictly and rigorously on merit basis so<br />
that the new readers in English version<br />
get a genuine taste and a real picture<br />
<strong>of</strong> the quality and variety <strong>of</strong> contemporary<br />
<strong>Hindi</strong> short stories. Unfortunately only<br />
three stories <strong>of</strong> older generation viz Mannu<br />
Bhandari, Chitra Mudgal and Chandrakanta<br />
deserve appreciation and the rest <strong>of</strong> the<br />
stories <strong>of</strong> this volume ‘Her Piece <strong>of</strong> Sky’<br />
are not the right representative <strong>of</strong><br />
contemporary <strong>Hindi</strong> fiction. However, the<br />
overall production <strong>of</strong> the book is quite<br />
good, with an aesthetic cover design, good<br />
printing and paper.<br />
The Book reviewed : ‘Her Piece <strong>of</strong> Sky’; Translated by : Deepa Agarwal;<br />
Publishers : Zubaan, New Delhi; Price : Rs. 295/-; Edition : 2011<br />
January-March 2012 :: 159