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Module 2: Written feedback - PGCE

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Handout 4.2.1<br />

Teacher comment Does the <strong>feedback</strong> provide information to the pupil about:<br />

whether they are their limitations and a way to improve a way to think through<br />

on the right track? encourage them to their learning? the answer for<br />

correct work? themselves?<br />

You started off well. Unfortunately you have made the<br />

same error in the last three questions. Can you see<br />

what this is? You may find it helpful to go back to the<br />

grid method.<br />

Your poem about copper sulphate was interesting. We<br />

need to discuss how you think copper crystals are<br />

made.<br />

Attainment 3 Effort 2<br />

You have made good progress in your handwriting.<br />

Your spelling still needs work.<br />

I think we need to talk about this work in more detail.<br />

Yet again you have not completed the work.<br />

Well done Simon. This is a very impressive article<br />

about the pros and cons of nuclear power. It was well<br />

presented as a newspaper article and I liked your<br />

quotes from different members of the public.<br />

The concerns you started to raise about nuclear waste<br />

perhaps need some further discussion. We can talk<br />

about this next lesson.<br />

22 Whole-school development in assessment for learning | Presenter’s Notes © Crown copyright 2004

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