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<strong>Content</strong> <strong>Map</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>Unit</strong> Topic: <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong> Grade: 1st<br />

Key Learnings:<br />

• Adjectives are describing<br />

words.<br />

• We can use our five senses<br />

to describe people, places,<br />

objects, or events.<br />

<strong>Unit</strong> Essential Questions:<br />

How can I use adjectives to write a<br />

descriptive paragraph?<br />

Optional<br />

Instructional Tools:<br />

Overhead projector, graphic<br />

organizers, writing paper, overhead<br />

transparencies, cookies, lollipops<br />

Concept:<br />

First Practice<br />

Concept:<br />

Second Practice<br />

Concept:<br />

Assessment<br />

Concept:<br />

Lesson Essential Questions:<br />

How can I use adjectives to<br />

write about a place?<br />

Lesson Essential Questions:<br />

How can I use adjectives to<br />

write about an object?<br />

Lesson Essential Questions:<br />

How can I use adjectives to<br />

write a descriptive paragraph?<br />

Lesson Essential<br />

Questions:<br />

( school library)<br />

(cookie)<br />

( lollipop)<br />

Vocabulary: see, smell, touch,<br />

feel, taste, adjectives, describe,<br />

wow words<br />

Vocabulary: see, smell,<br />

touch, feel, taste, adjectives,<br />

describe, wow words<br />

Vocabulary: see, smell,<br />

touch, feel, taste, adjectives,<br />

describe, wow words<br />

Vocabulary:<br />

Additional Information: Lessons will take longer than one day. Advanced students can use more than 4 adjectives in their<br />

paragraphs. Cookies are just one suggested food item. Other possibilities include: popcorn, Hershey kisses, apples.<br />

Grade level: First Participants:


Created By: Joyce McDonald First Grade Library Lesson 1<br />

Essential Question: How can I use adjectives to write about a place?<br />

Activating Strategies:<br />

(Learners Mentally Active)<br />

Acceleration/Previewing:<br />

(Key Vocabulary)<br />

Teaching Strategies:<br />

(Collaborative Pairs;<br />

Distributed Guided Practice;<br />

Distributed Summarizing;<br />

Graphic Organizers)<br />

Review the five senses and discuss how they help us learn about things around us. Then take a walk<br />

through the school’s library. Tell students that during this walk, they should use their senses to make them<br />

aware <strong>of</strong> how the library smells, looks, feels, and sounds. (If it is not possible to walk through the library,<br />

have them close their eyes and try to remember the last time they were in the library.<br />

see, hear, smell, touch, taste, adjectives, describe, “wow” words<br />

• After taking the walk, show students the overhead story, “The Library”, and have them read it aloud.<br />

Explain that it is a good story and makes sense, but it is not very interesting. It sounds boring<br />

because it does not have any “wow” words. “Wow” words are called adjectives and they tell about<br />

how things look, feel, taste, smell, and sound. They make stories a lot more interesting to read.<br />

Explain that students can use their senses to help them think <strong>of</strong> words that describe the school’s<br />

library.<br />

• Distribute the web graphic organizer and make a large one on the board or chart. Point to the “see”<br />

box and ask students to think <strong>of</strong> words that describe how the library looked. As students give their<br />

answers, write them in the box. Instruct them to fill in their graphic organizer as you complete the<br />

one on the board. Continue this procedure for the “hear”, “smell”, and “feel” boxes. Students may<br />

need some guidance with the “feel” box. Generate a discussion about the library being cold, hot,<br />

friendly, cozy, etc.<br />

• Next, reread the adjectives in the web and discuss how they would have made the overhead story a<br />

lot more interesting. Tell students that we will now try to write a story about the library using some<br />

<strong>of</strong> the “wow” words on the web. Explain that although there are several good adjectives on the web,<br />

we cannot use all <strong>of</strong> them. Say, “Today we will choose 4 adjectives to put into our stories.” Choose<br />

students to pick one adjective from each box and place a star beside it. Instruct students to mark the<br />

same words in their boxes.<br />

• Set the timer for 3 minutes and have partners read the 4 chosen adjectives and make up possible<br />

sentences to use in their stories.<br />

• Next, distribute writing paper. Say,” Now we are ready to write an interesting story about our<br />

library.” You may or may not want to guide them into writing a topic sentence such as, “I like our


school’s library.” Then point to the starred word in the “see” box. Ask, “Who can give me a<br />

sentence using this adjective?” After hearing several ideas, write one on the board. Have class copy<br />

onto their writing paper. Remind them to use the editing checklist.<br />

• Continue in this manner, one sentence at a time. You may or may not choose to have students write<br />

a concluding sentence.<br />

• When the story is finished, choose students to read it aloud. Then reread the first story on the<br />

overhead. Have students vote by showing thumbs up or thumbs down on which story sounded<br />

better. Ask, “Why did the story we wrote sound better than the first one?”<br />

Distributed Guided Practice/<br />

Summarizing Prompts:<br />

(Prompts Designed to Initiate<br />

Periodic Practice or<br />

Summarizing)<br />

• Students can work in pairs and read the stories to each other. They can use a yellow crayon to<br />

highlight all the “wow” words in the story. Partners may also edit each others papers using the<br />

editing checklist.<br />

Summarizing Strategies:<br />

(Learners Summarize &<br />

Answer Essential Question)<br />

• Practice answering the essential question.<br />

• TOD: Choose a student to read an adjective from the “see” box, from the “smell” box, etc.


Transparency One First Grade<br />

The Library<br />

I like the school library. It<br />

has books. It is fun.


First Grade<br />

See Smell<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

My Library<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

Touch / Feel Hear<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________


Name_______________________________________ Date_________________<br />

First Grade <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong> Lesson 1<br />

Library Rubric School _____________________________<br />

Task<br />

Component<br />

4 points 3 points 2 points 1 point<br />

Total<br />

Adjectives<br />

Uses 4 or more<br />

adjectives correctly.<br />

Uses 3 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 2 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 0-1 adjective<br />

correctly.<br />

Sentences<br />

Writes 4 or more<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 3<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 2<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes 0-1 complete<br />

sentence with no<br />

words omitted.<br />

Capitalization<br />

All sentences begin<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

0-1 sentence begins<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

Punctuation<br />

All sentences end with<br />

the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

0-1 sentence ends<br />

with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

Total


Created By: Joyce McDonald First Grade Lesson Plan 2<br />

Essential Question: How can I use adjectives to write about something?<br />

Activating Strategies:<br />

(Learners Mentally Active)<br />

Acceleration/Previewing:<br />

(Key Vocabulary)<br />

Teaching Strategies:<br />

(Collaborative Pairs;<br />

Distributed Guided Practice;<br />

Distributed Summarizing;<br />

Graphic Organizers)<br />

Distributed Guided Practice/<br />

Summarizing Prompts:<br />

(Prompts Designed to Initiate<br />

Periodic Practice or<br />

Summarizing)<br />

Remind students that using adjectives can make our stories about places be much more interesting. Explain<br />

that we can also use “wow” words to tell about things. Give each child a cookie and a cookie graphic<br />

organizer. Place a large one on the board or on a chart.<br />

Web, graphic organizer, adjective, describe, describing words, “wow” words, see, hear, touch/feet, smell,<br />

taste<br />

• Starting with the “see” box, ask students to think <strong>of</strong> describing words that tell how the cookie looks.<br />

Write several <strong>of</strong> their responses in the box on the board. Students write as many as possible on their<br />

graphic organizer.<br />

• Continue this procedure, filling in every box, ending with the “taste” box. After students have eaten<br />

their cookies, explain that they will now write a story describing their cookie.<br />

• Explain that although there are many great adjectives on the graphic organizer, they can only choose 4.<br />

Instruct them to put a star beside the adjective in each box that they want to use. (Advanced students<br />

may be able to use more than four or may combine two adjectives in one sentence)<br />

• Partners may work together and read their chosen “wow” words.<br />

• Tell the students, “Now that you have chosen your adjectives, you are ready to write. Choose 1 <strong>of</strong> your<br />

starred adjectives and write a sentence with it. Remember to use the editing checklist when you finish<br />

your sentence.”<br />

• Continue in this manner, one sentence at a time, until students have written one sentence for every<br />

starred word in their web. You may or may not want to guide them in writing a concluding sentence.<br />

•<br />

• Working in pairs, partners read their stories to each other.<br />

• Using bingo markers, chips, etc, partners read each others stories and place a marker on all the<br />

“wow” words.


Summarizing Strategies:<br />

(Learners Summarize &<br />

Answer Essential Question)<br />

• TOD Answer the essential question. (I used my senses to help me think <strong>of</strong> describing words.)


First Grade<br />

See Smell<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

My Cookie<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

Touch/Feel Taste<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________


Name_______________________________________ Date_________________<br />

First Grade <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong> Lesson 2<br />

Rubric Cookie School _____________________________<br />

Task<br />

Component<br />

4 points 3 points 2 points 1 point<br />

Total<br />

Adjectives<br />

Uses 4 or more<br />

adjectives correctly.<br />

Uses 3 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 2 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 0-1 adjective<br />

correctly.<br />

Sentences<br />

Writes 4 or more<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 3<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 2<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes 0-1 complete<br />

sentence with no<br />

words omitted.<br />

Capitalization<br />

All sentences begin<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

0-1 sentence begins<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

Punctuation<br />

All sentences end with<br />

the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

0-1 sentence ends<br />

with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

Total


Created By: Joyce McDonald First Grade Assessment Lesson Plan<br />

Essential Question: How can I use adjectives to write a descriptive story?<br />

Activating Strategies:<br />

(Learners Mentally Active)<br />

Acceleration/Previewing:<br />

(Key Vocabulary)<br />

Teaching Strategies:<br />

(Collaborative Pairs;<br />

Distributed Guided Practice;<br />

Distributed Summarizing;<br />

Graphic Organizers)<br />

Distributed Guided Practice/<br />

Summarizing Prompts:<br />

(Prompts Designed to Initiate<br />

Periodic Practice or<br />

Summarizing)<br />

ell the students:” We have used our senses to help us think <strong>of</strong> adjectives to describe our library and a<br />

cookie. Today we are going to use our senses to write about something else you may like to eat. Start<br />

writing the letters in “lollipop” on the board slowly and allow students opportunities to guess.<br />

adjectives, describe, describing words, see, touch/feel, smell, hear, taste, “wow” words<br />

• Give each student a lollipop and a lollipop graphic organizer. Display or make a large one on the board.<br />

As they lick their lollipop, ask students to name “wow” words that describe the way it feels, tastes,<br />

smells, and looks.<br />

• Write their suggestions on the board in the correct boxes. Students may copy those on the board or may<br />

use some <strong>of</strong> their own adjectives. When each box is complete, instruct them to place a star beside the 4<br />

adjectives they want to put in their stories.<br />

• Instruct students to work independently to write a descriptive story about their lollipop. Write one<br />

sentence at a time using the starred words on their graphic organizers. (Advanced students may use<br />

more than four or may combine two adjectives into one sentence.)<br />

• Remind students <strong>of</strong> the editing checklist and rubric.<br />

Summarizing Strategies:<br />

(Learners Summarize &<br />

Answer Essential Question)<br />

• <strong>Descriptive</strong> paragraph writing assessment will be graded according to the rubric.


First Grade<br />

See Taste<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

My Lollipop<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

Touch Smell<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________<br />

___________________________


Name_______________________________________ Date_________________<br />

First Grade <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong> Assessment Rubric School _____________________________<br />

Task<br />

Component<br />

4 points 3 points 2 points 1 point<br />

Total<br />

Adjectives<br />

Uses 4 or more<br />

adjectives correctly.<br />

Uses 3 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 2 adjectives<br />

correctly.<br />

Uses 0-1 adjective<br />

correctly.<br />

Sentences<br />

Writes 4 or more<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 3<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes at least 2<br />

complete sentences<br />

with no words<br />

omitted.<br />

Writes 0-1 complete<br />

sentence with no<br />

words omitted.<br />

Capitalization<br />

All sentences begin<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

begin with a capital<br />

letter.<br />

0-1 sentence begins<br />

with a capital letter.<br />

Punctuation<br />

All sentences end with<br />

the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 3 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

At least 2 sentences<br />

end with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

0-1 sentence ends<br />

with the correct<br />

punctuation.<br />

Total


Teacher’s Name ________________________________________ First Grade Assessment: <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong><br />

School ________________________________________________ Month ____________________<br />

Student’s Name Adjectives Sentences Capitalization Punctuation Average<br />

1.<br />

2.<br />

3.<br />

4.<br />

5.<br />

6.<br />

7.<br />

8.<br />

9.<br />

10.<br />

11.<br />

12.<br />

13.<br />

14.<br />

15.<br />

16.<br />

17.<br />

18.<br />

19.<br />

20.<br />

21<br />

Class Average


School: _____________________<br />

Teacher: ____________________<br />

Principal’s Report<br />

First Grade: Assessment Three – <strong>Descriptive</strong> <strong>Paragraph</strong><br />

Task Components<br />

Adjectives<br />

Sentences<br />

Capitalization<br />

Punctuation<br />

Average for all components<br />

Class Average Scores

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