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36) TITLE- although not necessary, titles can help the writer stay focused<br />

and entice the reader<br />

The Important Book, Margaret Wise Brown<br />

A Day I’ll Never Forget<br />

School is No Place For Cats!<br />

I Stink! Kate and Jim McMullan<br />

37) TRANSITIONAL PHRASES- move reader from one thought or event to another<br />

Descriptive<br />

In the blink of an eye… With a hop, skip, and a jump…<br />

The Night I Followed the Dog, Nina Laden<br />

Time<br />

Skippy Jon Jones, Judy Schachner<br />

A few minutes later…The next day…After that…<br />

Place<br />

The Mud Pony, Caron Lee Cohen<br />

On my grandfather’s doorstep…At that very spot…<br />

Contrasting Ideas<br />

However…Despite…In that case…<br />

Supporting Ideas<br />

According to… What’s even more important…<br />

To Signal a Mini-Story<br />

One time…For example…For instance… To illustrate my point…That reminds me of a time…<br />

38) VIVID VERBS- replace weak verbs with a strong one<br />

Weak- My brother Sam hurt me.<br />

Strong- My brother Sam pinched my arm<br />

In the Small, Small Pond, Denise Flemming<br />

Come On, Rain! Karen Hesse<br />

Kites Sail High, Ruth Heller<br />

Revised Edition, 2008

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