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Six Traits of Writing Defined<br />

FCAT Writing Defined<br />

p. 2<br />

IDEAS:<br />

• the heart of the message<br />

• original, the writers own<br />

• strong ideas = clear message<br />

• the content of the piece<br />

• rich and developed<br />

• unusual, extraordinary, and unpredictable<br />

• interesting, informative details<br />

• layered, extended<br />

ORGANIZATION:<br />

• internal structure<br />

• events proceed logically<br />

• connections are strong<br />

• strong organization = reader’s anticipation<br />

of purpose fulfillment<br />

• the pattern fits the central idea<br />

• information is given in right doses<br />

• satisfying closure leaves reader thinking<br />

VOICE:<br />

• heart and soul of writing<br />

• writer coming through the words<br />

• writer is personally engaged with the<br />

topic<br />

• like the writer’s fingerprints-specific to<br />

one person<br />

• the magic, wit, feeling, life, and breath<br />

WORD CHOICE:<br />

• moves reader to envision<br />

• uses every day words well<br />

• clarifies and expands ideas<br />

• rich, colorful precise language<br />

• moves and enlightens the reader<br />

• vocabulary not used just to impress<br />

SENTENCE FLUENCY:<br />

• sentence variety<br />

• sound of word patterns<br />

• writing plays to the ear<br />

• sounds good when read aloud<br />

• rhythm and flow of the language<br />

• crafted for ease of reading experience<br />

• free of awkward word patterns<br />

• has cadence, power, rhythm, and<br />

movement<br />

CONVENTIONS:<br />

• ready for publication<br />

• mechanical correctness<br />

• spelling, grammar, usage<br />

• punctuation and capitalization<br />

• proofread and edited with care<br />

The FCAT Writing + assessment is scored <strong>by</strong> a holistic method. Trained scorers consider four<br />

elements then arrive at a score <strong>by</strong> considering the whole work.<br />

FOCUS refers to how clearly the paper presents and maintains a main idea, theme, or unifying<br />

point.<br />

• Papers receiving high scores demonstrate a consistent awareness of the topic and avoid<br />

loosely related or extraneous information.<br />

• Papers receiving low scores may contain information that is loosely related, extraneous, or<br />

both.<br />

ORGANIZATION refers to the structure or plan of development (beginning, middle, and end) and<br />

the relationship of one point to another. Organization refers to the use of transitional devices to<br />

signal both the relationship of the supporting ideas to the main idea, theme, or unifying point, and<br />

the connections between and among them.<br />

• Papers receiving high scores contain an effective organizational plan.<br />

• Papers receiving low scores may lack or misuse an organizational plan or transitional devices.<br />

SUPPORT refers to the quality of details used to explain, clarify, or define. The quality of support<br />

depends on word choice, specificity, depth, relevance, and thoroughness.<br />

• Papers receiving high scores generally provide elaborated examples and fully developed<br />

illustrations. The relationship between the supporting ideas and the topic is clear.<br />

• Papers receiving low scores may contain support that is a bare list of events or reasons,<br />

support that is not extended <strong>by</strong> detail, or both.<br />

CONVENTIONS refer to the punctuation, capitalization, spelling, usage, and sentence structure.<br />

These conventions are basic writing skills included in Florida’s Sunshine State Standards.<br />

• Papers receiving high scores generally follow the basic conventions of punctuation,<br />

capitalization, and spelling, using a variety of sentence structures to present ideas.<br />

• Papers receiving low scores often contain errors in punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and<br />

sentence structure. They may have little variation in sentence structure.<br />

How FCAT and Six Traits Overlap<br />

FCAT<br />

FOCUS ORGANIZATION SUPPORT CONVENTIONS<br />

Six Traits<br />

Stimulating IDEAS Logical ORGANIZATION Stimulating IDEAS<br />

Personal VOICE<br />

Original WORD CHOICE<br />

Smooth-reading sentences<br />

SENTENCE FLUENCY<br />

Correct, accurate copy<br />

CONVENTIONS<br />

Revised Edition, 2008

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