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English
Language
and Literature
for the IB Diploma
Brad
Philpot

Contents
Introduction i
Part 1 – Language in cultural context 1
Chapter 1 The English language 1
Unit 1.1 English as a global language 2
Unit 1.2 Varieties of English 8
Assessment: Part 1 written task 1 21
Assessment: Part 1 further oral activity 28
Chapter 2 Close reading 35
Unit 2.1 Audience and purpose 36
Unit 2.2 Content and theme 39
Unit 2.3 Tone and mood 43
Unit 2.4 Stylistic devices 47
Unit 2.5 Structure 51
Assessment: Paper 1 56
Part 2 – Language and mass communication 68
Chapter 3 The media 68
Unit 3.1 Journalism 69
Unit 3.2 The Internet 78
Assessment: Part 2 written task 1 81
Chapter 4 The language of persuasion 89
Unit 4.1 Propaganda 90
Unit 4.2 Rhetoric 94
Unit 4.3 Advertising 98
Assessment: Part 2 further oral activity 108
Sample
Part 3 – Literature: texts and contexts 118
Chapter 5 The context of interpretation 118
Unit 5.1 Approaching fiction 119
Unit 5.2 Traditions of literary criticism 126
Assessment: Part 3 or 4 written task 1 130
Chapter 6 The context of composition 137
Unit 6.1 Types of novel 138
Unit 6.2 Literary movements 143
Assessment: Paper 2 148
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Contents
Part 4 – Literature: a critical study 160
Chapter 7 The mechanics of fiction 160
Unit 7.1 Engaging the reader 160
Unit 7.2 Plot, character and setting 162
Unit 7.3 Conflict and theme 171
Unit 7.4 Narrative voice 176
Unit 7.5 Revision 186
Assessment: Written task 2 (HL only) 188
Chapter 8 What makes English poetic? 195
Unit 8.1 Sound and structure 196
Unit 8.2 Imagery and figurative language 204
Assessment: The individual oral commentary (SL) 211
Glossary 223
Acknowledgements 00
Index 00
Sample
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3 Literature:
texts
and contexts
Chapter 6 The context of
composition
Objectives
By the end of this chapter you will be able to
identify and discuss the characteristics of various types of novels
appreciate the importance of literary movements in shaping the contexts
in which texts are written
plan and write a timed essay for your Paper 2 exam.
In the last chapter you looked at various different approaches to literature and
traditions of literary criticism. You saw that there are different contexts in which texts
can be interpreted. In this chapter you are going to turn your attention to the different
contexts of composition and explore more about the context in which some sample
texts were composed. You will look at different types of novel first, in Unit 6.1, then at
literary movements in Unit 6.2. At the end of the chapter you will find a sample Paper 2
to study and will be able to see how the knowledge you gain in this chapter can be put
into practice in your IB exam.
Reading novels, watching plays or viewing films often prompts the question What
was the writer thinking when writing this text? This question is at the heart of the context
of composition. It can be broken down into two subsidiary questions:
1 Which literary forms inspired the writer to shape the text in this particular way?
2 What experiences, topics or ideas inspired the writer to write?
The first question is one of genre. Prose, poetry and drama are easily identifiable
categories, or genres, of literature. However, it should always be remembered that not
every work of fiction will fit neatly into a literary category or subcategory. There is no
reader’s handbook to help identify literary genres, unlike the handbooks that exist
to help identify species of birds or flowers, for example. In Unit 6.1 you will discover
several different types, or genres, of novel and the qualities that define each of them.
Learning to identify the characteristics of different kinds of novel will help put your
Part 3 texts into perspective.
The second question relates to the literary, social, political or historical movements
that have influenced the writer, which you will pursue further in Unit 6.2. Writers do
not write in a vacuum. They are influenced by their surroundings and the trends of their
times. The German word zeitgeist has been adopted in English to capture all of these
factors and describe ‘the spirit of the times’.
For centuries, great writers have ‘stood on the shoulders’ of other writers who have
gone before them. In other words, good writers build on traditions that others have
started. Studying writers’ texts in the context of different literary genres and movements
will help you understand how they have built on traditions. It will also show you how
their writing style and form have been influenced by this context.
Sample
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Key
terms
Genre describes a category of
literature that can be defi ned by the
structural and stylistic conventions
that are frequently found in that
category.
Movement, in a literary sense, is a
collection of works which seek to
address similar concerns or express
similar ideas, or which come out of
a certain period in history.
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Unit 6.1 Types of novel
Most bookshops these days have prominent displays of fiction best-sellers, and the
most popular best-sellers are usually novels. Novels have become part of the fabric of
our literary culture. What exactly are they, and why do authors choose to write a certain
type of novel in order to express their ideas?
Longer pieces of narrative writing have been around for nearly two thousand years.
The art has evolved over time, from Ancient Greek sagas, Old French romances and
medieval Italian tales. In 1719 Daniel Defoe wrote Robinson Crusoe, which tells the story of
a man who learns to survive when he finds himself alone on an island in the Caribbean.
Today, survival is still a popular theme in novels and has been treated in many best-sellers.
In Defoe’s time, however, describing the trials and tribulations of one character, and
allowing readers to hear his thoughts and see his actions, were revolutionary ideas.
Novels are usually defined by several key characteristics, such as plot, setting and
characterisation, which you will look at more closely in Chapter 7. For now the focus
will be on some of the main types of novel and the labels that are often attached to
them – for example, detective novels, social novels or science fiction novels.
First, let us consider the term science fiction. In the last chapter you read an extract
from The Handmaid’s Tale by Margaret Atwood (Text 5.5), which in 1987 won the Arthur
C. Clarke Award, the UK’s most prestigious award for science fiction writing. Atwood
was surprised: she thought science fiction was a type of novel that included ‘rockets and
chemicals’ or ’talking squids in outer space’, as she told the New Scientist and the BBC.
She explained that The Handmaid’s Tale was a work of ‘speculative fiction’, a type of
novel she believed had the ability to explore themes that ‘realistic fiction’ could not.
The question here is Why did she choose a particular genre, whether that genre is termed
science fiction or speculative fiction, to express her ideas? For the answer, we have to look at
the context of the novel. In the case of The Handmaid’s Tale, several important events took
place in the early 1980s that shaped the zeitgeist of our world. The Islamic Revolution
changed Iran into a totalitarian theocracy; prominent feminists in the USA began to align
themselves with the religious right, a group of people who wanted more Christianity in
the US government; Presidents Jimmy Carter and Ronald Reagan used religious rhetoric
openly and proudly; televised Evangelism or ‘televangelism’ became popular in the USA;
chemical warfare and the Cold War were looming threats for many people in the world.
In the context of what was happening at the time, it makes sense that Atwood
wanted to reflect these influences through science fiction or speculative fiction. What is
more, after reading the novel, you can see that she is building on a tradition established
by other writers, such as Mary Shelley, George Orwell and Aldous Huxley, called
dystopian literature (see page 127).
Sample
Dystopian literature
The term Utopia was coined by Sir Thomas More in 1516 in his description of the
perfect society. The Greek word utopia means ‘no place’, and it sounds like another
Greek word, eutopia, meaning ‘good place’. Dystopian is the opposite of Utopian. The
roots of dystopian literature can be found in Jonathan’s Swift’s novel, Gulliver’s Travels,
of 1726, in which the character Lemuel Gulliver travels to many fictitious lands, seeing
the good and bad qualities of various societies. As a genre, dystopian literature is
concerned predominantly with the values of a society.
What makes a novel a dystopian novel? Look out for the following characteristics:
The main character is an oppressed individual.
The main character suffers at the hands of an oppressive state, often a totalitarian state.
A major theme of the novel might be justice, freedom or happiness.
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The text has the purpose of warning its readers about certain trends in politics or
society at the time it was written.
As you read the following extracts, Text 6.1, look for the four characteristics of
dystopian literature in the list. Text 6.1 is 3 extracts from the novel Fahrenheit 451 by Ray
Bradbury, an author who is often associated with the genre of dystopian fiction.
Text 6.1 Fahrenheit 451, Ray Bradbury, 1953
This novel takes place in America at a time in the future. The main character, Guy Montag,
is a ‘fireman’, which in this novel means a person who burns books. Fahrenheit 451 refers
to the temperature at which paper and therefore books spontaneously combust. After
Montag meets his neighbour, a young intellectual, he begins to question why the state
employs him to burn books. He begins to secretly collect books and eventually stays away
from work to read them. At this point, he is visited by the chief of the fire department,
Captain Beatty, who is speaking in the extract below, sitting at Montag’s bedside.
Extract 1
‘When did it all start, you ask, this job of ours, how did it come about, where,
when? Well, I’d say it really got started around about a thing called the Civil War.
Even though our rule-book claims it was founded earlier. The fact is we didn’t get
along well until photography came into its own. Then – motion pictures in the early
twentieth century. Radio. Television. Things began to have mass.’
Montag sat in bed, not moving.
‘And because they had mass, they became simpler,’ said Beatty. ‘Once,
books appealed to a few people, here, there, everywhere. They could afford to
be different. The world was roomy. But then the world got full of eyes and elbows
and mouths. Double, triple, quadruple population. Films and radios, magazines,
books levelled down to a sort of paste pudding norm, do you follow me?’
‘I think so.
Extract 2
Yes, but what about firemen, then?’ asked Montag.
‘Ah.’ Beatty leaned forward in the faint mist of smoke from his pipe. ‘What
more easily explained and natural? With school turning out more runners, jumpers,
racers, thinkers, grabbers, snatchers, fliers, and swimmers instead of examiners,
critics, knowers, and imaginative creators, the word “intellectual”, of course,
became the swear word it deserved to be. You always dread the unfamiliar. Surely
you remember the boy in your own school class who was exceptionally “bright”, did
most of the reciting and answering while the others sat like so many leaden idols,
hating him. And wasn’t it this bright boy you selected for beatings and tortures after
hours? Of course it was. We must all be alike. Not everyone born free and equal,
as the Constitution says, but everyone made equal. Each man the image of every
other; then all are happy, for there are no mountains to make them cower, to judge
themselves against. So! A book is a loaded gun in the house next door. Burn it.
Extract 3
‘You must understand that our civilization is so vast that we can’t have our minorities
upset and stirred. Ask yourself, what do we want in this country, above all? People
want to be happy, isn’t that right? Haven’t you heard it all your life? I want to be
happy, people say. Well, aren’t they? … That’s all we live for, isn’t it? For pleasure,
for titillation? And you must admit our culture provides plenty of these.’
Chapter 6 The context of composition
1 What examples are there in
Text 6.1 of the characteristics of
dystopian literature?
2 How convincing do you fi nd
Beatty’s case for censorship?
Explain your answer with
examples from the text.
3 How might the ideas of this
novel refl ect the zeitgeist of the
1950s?
Sample
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tip
discussion
Several works of dystopian literature
offer interesting insight into the
topic of media that you explored
in Part 2: Language and mass
communication. You may want to
explore more texts from this genre
that relate to the media. Try, for
example, Nineteen Eighty-Four by
George Orwell, Vernon God Little by
D.B.C. Pierre, or the screenplay The
Truman Show by Andrew M. Niccol.
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discussion
1 How well do you think the student
has understood the novel? Where
do you see evidence of good
understanding? Is there evidence
of poor understanding?
2 How does the student make a
connection between the context
in which the novel was written
and the themes and structure of
the novel?
Anti-novel is a novel that ignores
all of the structural conventions
of regular novels such as plot,
characterisation and consistent
point of view.
Key
terms
Bildungsroman belongs to a
tradition of novel writing about
young individuals coming of age
who learn a lifelong lesson through
a transformational experience;
the German word Bildung means
‘development’ or ‘formation’, and
roman means ‘novel’.
Gothic fi ction is a mixture of horror
and romance that came out of the
Romantic movement of the 18th
and 19th centuries.
Magic realism is a style of fi ction
with origins in South America. It
creates a very realistic setting with a
few highly unrealistic elements.
Social novel is a type of novel that
stresses the importance of real
social and economic circumstances
on fi ctional characters in an attempt
to persuade the reader towards an
ideological position.
Fahrenheit 451: style and context
To prepare for your Paper 2 exam, you need practice at writing about how the context
of a work is reflected through its content, style and structure. Look at the following
response written by a student after reading Fahrenheit 451.
Ray Bradbury was devoted to writing fiction when he wrote Fahrenheit 451. This
may explain why the main topic of the novel is the importance of literature and
books in society. After the Second World War, the memory of Nazis burning Jewish
books was etched into the minds of millions, including Bradbury. Besides being
concerned about the rights of minorities in America, his greater issue was with the
state of education and literacy. Visual mass media was on the rise in America in
the 1950s. Bradbury feared that with more screens projecting sensational images,
people would forget to read and not want to be bothered with intellectual ideas,
engaging in self-censorship.
The above-mentioned ideas can be seen in the passage from Fahrenheit 451.
Bradbury creates a scene with a lot of dialogue between Captain Beatty, who
voices the opinion of the state and the masses, and Guy Montag, who, like the
reader, questions the reasoning behind the state’s ways. As we, the readers,
eavesdrop, we hear the arguments for censorship.
The novel is intriguing. It drops the reader in a strange setting and quickly
explains how to navigate. Because the novel was originally written in instalments
as a serial in both Galaxy and Playboy magazines, it had to be intriguing. It had to
make the reader want to buy the next publication.
So far in this unit you have come across several types of fiction: science fiction,
speculative fiction and dystopian literature, and have looked at these terms in relation
to two novels: The Handmaid’s Tale and Fahrenheit 451. Figure 6.1 shows how a Venn
diagram can be used to show how the two novels, plus some others, can be identified
with the genres and the relationship between then. The diagram allows for an overlap
where some texts have characteristics of more than one genre.
There are, of course, many more genres than the three you have looked at so far in
this unit. The following is a list of some of the other types of novel.
anti-novel
Gothic novel
romance
Bildungsroman
historical novel
social novel
crime / detective novel horror novel
speculative novel
documentary novel magic realism novel spy novel
fantasy novel
psychological novel thriller
Sample
Activity 6.1
1 Construct a Venn diagram like Figure 6.1 (page 139 to show the genres the
books you are reading as a class belong to. Although constructing a Venn
diagram of your texts cannot be an exact science, this is a useful exercise to
do as a class when you are discussing your Part 3 or 4 texts, or even works
you have read outside class.
2 Why do you think the authors chose these particular types of novel to
express their ideas?
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3 Choose some of the other genres in the list above and carry out some further
research on these types of novel. Make more Venn diagrams using the genres
you have found out about.
Historical fiction
Historical fiction brings history to life by placing us, the readers, in a specific historical
time and place. We see and experience the ideas of the times through the characters in the
novel, enduring the same hardships and living their lives vicariously. As with all fiction,
we must suspend our disbelief and not question how true the events or the characters are
although we are always conscious that they are inspired by true events and real people.
You are going to explore one novel of historical fiction to understand why its
author chose to write this type of novel, and you will see how style and structure are
influenced by the context in which the author wrote.
Text 6.2 One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich, Alexander
Solzhenitsyn, 1962
While many in the West knew about the Soviet labour camps of the early 1950s, known
as the gulags, it was not until One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich was published in
1962 that the world really understood the hardships endured by so many prisoners in
the USSR under Stalin. Solzhenitsyn was serving in the Red Army in 1945 when he was
arrested for making derogatory remarks about Stalin in private letters to a friend. He
was eventually imprisoned and sent to a labour camp close to Kazakhstan, where he
experienced the cold, hunger and ill treatment described in his novella.
When Stalin died in 1953, Solzhenitsyn was freed but exiled. In 1956 he was
allowed to return to the USSR, where he taught in a secondary school. Solzhenitsyn
submitted the manuscript of One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich in 1961 to the literary
magazine Novy Mir, which had to seek approval from Krushchev and the government
to publish the novella. As Stalin had by then fallen out of favour, the publication was
approved. Solzhenitsyn won the Nobel Prize in 1970 but was not able to receive it until
1974, when he was deported from the USSR for being anti-Soviet.
No sense in getting your boots wet in the morning. Even if Shukhov had dashed
back to his hut he wouldn’t have found another pair to change into. During eight
years’ imprisonment he had known various systems for allocating footwear: there’d
been times when he’d gone through the winter without valenki 1 at all, or leather
boots either, and had had to make shift with bast sandals or a sort of galoshes
made of scraps of motor tyres – ‘Chetezes’ they called them, after the Cheliabinsk
tractor works. Now the footwear situation seemed better; in October Shukhov had
received (thanks to Pavlo, whom he trailed to the store) a pair of ordinary, hardwearing
leather boots, big enough for a double thickness of foot-cloth. For a week
he went about as though he’d been given a birthday present, kicking his new
heels. Then in December the valenki arrived, and, oh, wasn’t life wonderful?
But some devil in the book-keeper’s office had whispered in the commandant’s
ear that valenki should be issued only to those who surrendered their boots. It was
against the rules for a prisoner to possess two pairs of footwear at the same time.
So Shukhov had to choose. Either he’d have to wear leather throughout the winter,
or surrender the boots and wear valenki even in the thaw. He’d taken such good
Chapter 6 The context of composition
The Plot
Against
America
Etidorhpa
Speculative
fiction
Science fiction
2001: A Space
Odyssey
Fahrenheit
451
The
Handmaid’s
Tale
Dystopian
literature
Animal
Farm
Figure 6.1 Venn diagrams can be useful
when discussing genres and texts.
Sample
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Figure 6.2 The Soviet writer Alexander
Solzhenitsyn.
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Free indirect speech is a kind
of limited third-person narration
that allows the reader to hear a
character’s thoughts (see page 181).
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Key
term
discussion
1 How does the student’s
response differ from your own?
2 What evidence does the
student’s response show of
critical thinking and contextual
understanding?
care of his new boots, softening the leather with grease! Ah, nothing had been so
hard to part with in all his eight years in camps as that pair of boots! They were
tossed into a common heap. Not a hope of finding your own pair in the spring.
1 valenki knee-length felt boots for winter wear
Activity 6.2
Before reading the sample response below, write your own response to Text 6.2, drawing
connections between Solzhenitsyn’s life and One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich.
Write about 300–500 words. Remember that your writing must answer the following
question: How do the style and structure of the text reflect the context in which it was written?
One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich: style and context
Look at the following response written by a student after reading One Day in the Life of
Ivan Denisovich.
Alexander Solzhenitsyn wrote One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich as a work of
historical fiction and most notably not as a memoir or autobiography. He may have
done this for several reasons.
Under the circumstances, Solzhenitsyn was not certain how his personal history
of the gulag would have been received. After being released from prison, he had every
reason to fear imprisonment again for speaking out about the camps. Hiding behind
fictional characters and speaking through the imaginary Ivan Denisovich Shukov was
safer and therefore made sense from the author’s perspective.
Besides this reason, though, there is an even greater reason why Solzhenitsyn
wrote fiction instead of non-fiction. He wanted to be known as an artist, or
novelist, instead of a former prisoner of the gulag. His writing style draws us into
the mind of Shukov through the use of free indirect speech. We see examples of
this when the narrator says, ‘Then in December the valenki arrived, and, oh, wasn’t
life wonderful?’ We feel the elation of the main character for such simple small
things in prison life. Solzhenitsyn goes one step further to make us feel empathy
for Shukov by writing in the second person: Not a hope of finding your own pair in
the spring. This feels like an extreme let-down from the kicking his new heels.
Solzhenitsyn wrote a piece of historical fiction because it allowed him to bring
the gulag to life. He describes everything, from shoes to disease, in such detail
that we feel we are there, experiencing the hardships of this Soviet labour camp.
Sample
As you follow your IB Diploma course and prepare for the Paper 2 exam, you might
find it useful to keep a record of the texts you read. You can use a table such as the one
below to record in summary form what you have read. Not only is this a good exercise
for analysing a text, it will also be a useful overview when you come to revise for your
exam. (You may not be able to fill in the last row of the table just yet. You will be looking
more at the mechanics of fiction and literary devices in Part 4 of this coursebook.
Chapter 7 has more about point of view and narrative technique.)
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Text 1
(from PLA)
Text 2
(from PLT list)
Title The Handmaid’s Tale One Day in the Life of
Ivan Denisovich
Author Margaret Atwood Alexander
Solzhenitsyn
Themes Women in society,
religion, totalitarian
states
Genre Dystopian fi ction /
speculative fi ction
Defi ning
characteristics
of genre
Context (political,
social, cultural,
religious)
Stylistic and
structural devices
that refl ect context
of composition
Oppressed person,
oppressive state,
happiness and
society
USA, religious right
and feminism, Iran,
Cold War
1st person, stream
of consciousness,
present tense
Totalitarian state
(Stalinism), dignity,
individualism versus
socialism
Text 3
(free choice)
Vernon God Little
D.B.C. Pierre
Individual versus
society, dignity,
media and violence
Historical / memoir Dystopian fi ction /
Bildungsroman
Infl uential period
from someone’s life,
wisdom with benefi t of
hindsight
Stalinism, personal
experience in Siberian
labour camp
3rd person, free
indirect speech,
detailed description of
physical labour
Coming of age, lifeshaping
decisions,
journeys
Columbine
shootings, reality
TV
1st person, stream
of consciousness,
present tense
Activity 6.3
Find out more about the contexts of the texts that you are reading for Part 3. Use the
following questions to help you.
1 What inspired the author of the text you are reading?
2 Learn more about the characteristics that define the genre to which your text
belongs. Why do you think the author chose that particular genre to express
their ideas?
3 Comment on how any stylistic and structural devices reflect the context
of composition.
4 As a class, fill in a table similar to the one above to act as a record of the texts
you are reading.
Unit 6.2 Literary movements
Chapter 6 The context of composition
Sample
Many literary works are closely associated with a particular historical or artistic
movement. Movements often transcend the boundaries of one art form, and
characterstics of a movement can sometimes continue beyond the time period usually
given as the beginning and end of the movement. Romanticism, for example, was
a movement that took hold in Europe in the second half of the 18th century, rooted
in the idea that emotions and nature were true sources of knowledge. It gave rise to
an explosion of visual arts, philosophical essays, music and literature. The effects and
influence of Romanticism continue to this day. Even after the movement had been
succeeded by the Victorian period, realism and the Industrial Revolution, there were
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TOK
Romanticism was a philosophical
and artistic movement that came
about as a reaction to the neo-
Classicism and Enlightenment of
the 18th century and the beginnings
of the Industrial Revolution. The
main idea behind Romanticism was
that emotions were a source of
truth. Other sources of inspiration
included nature, beauty and youth.
1 Read Text 6.3, a poem by
William Wordsworth, and
comment on how it refl ects the
ideas of Romanticism.
2 Comment in particular on the
notion that The child is father of
the man. Can a child know more
or be wiser than an adult? What
do you think Wordsworth means
when he says a child can be father
of the man? Discuss the relevance
of the TOK terms (a) intuition and
(b) wisdom in your answer.
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EE
Extended
essay
William Blake: laying the
foundations of Romanticism.
‘Middlemarch’: the epitome of
realism in English literature.
Understanding post-modernism
through Paul Auster’s ‘New York
Trilogy’.
You may want to devote an extended
essay to exploring a literary
movement. Besides focusing on
one or two of its key literary works
in depth, you should have a broad
understanding of many of the texts
associated with this movement in
order to comment on the contexts of
composition and interpretation. You
could structure your essay around
questions such as To what extent did
the authors of your works contribute
to a particular movement? Were the
ideas of the authors understood by
the audiences of their times? Were
they ahead of their times?
Figure 6.3 In the 1984 film A Passage to
India the Marabar Caves are an important
but mysterious part of the story. The
unsolved events in the Marabar Caves are
what characterise the novel as a work of
modernism.
still writers who were inspired by romanticism and continued in its tradition. One such
writer is the poet Robert Frost.
Attempts at defining literary movements can, however, be as difficult as defining
literary genres and types of novel. While some movements transcend art forms
and time periods, others are very much confined to a particular art form or period.
Some movements are sub-movements. We will explore one movement in this unit,
modernism, and see how it inspired writers such as John Fowles and E.M. Forster.
Text 6.3 My heart leaps up, William Wordsworth, 1807
My heart leaps up when I behold
A rainbow in the sky:
So was it when my life began,
So is it now I am a man,
So be it when I shall grow old,
Or let me die!
The child is father of the man,
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
Modernism
In 1924 a novel by E.M. Forster, A Passage to India, challenged readers to read novels
differently. In the story several British colonists are taken on an expedition by local
Indians into the mysterious Marabar Caves. A British woman is possibly assaulted by
one of the local men but the reader never finds out the truth about what happened in
the caves. Instead we see how the characters have to deal with the aftermath.
This, in essence, is a modernist novel. Modernism had begun much earlier than
1924, towards the end of the 19th century, when writers and intellectuals started
reacting against the common ideas of the Victorian era. They believed that subjective
experience was more valuable than objective reality. What really happened in the
Marabar Caves in A Passage to India does not matter as much as the emotional
consequences suffered by the characters of the novel.
Another characteristic of modernism is the rejection of the notions of natural
order and authority. Hence, in A Passage to India, the attempts at persecuting the
alleged perpetrator of the crime seem unjust and baseless. The two authorities of
religion and the Raj (the British colonial rule in India) are questioned in the novel.
Modernism especially took root after the atrocities of the First World War, which
seemed senseless to so many. The world seemed to lack guiding principles and
moral order.
Finally, modernism questions form. E.M. Forster challenges the readers of the novel
by not allowing them to know as much as some of the book’s characters. Not solving
the mystery of the Marabar Caves breaks a widely accepted convention of storytelling.
By drawing our attention to the novel’s form, Forster is a modernist.
In summary, a modernist work can be identified by the following three
characteristics:
Subjective experience matters more than objective reality.
The world lacks moral order or natural authorities.
Form and convention are there to be broken.
Sample
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Text 6.4 The Collector, John Fowles, 1963
John Fowles was the son of a veteran of the First World War. He was gifted in
languages and athletics, which became apparent while he was at Bedford School
during the years of the Second World War. He completed his navy officer training
on Victory in Europe Day in 1945. In 1947, after two years of military service, he
went to Oxford University to study French. In 1947 he wrote: I … began to hate
what I was becoming in life – a British Establishment young hopeful. I decided instead to
become a sort of anarchist. He was interested in Albert Camus, Jean-Paul Sartre and
the ideas of existentialism. After leaving university he taught in Greece but he
quarrelled with the school. He returned to England, got married and was teaching
English as a foreign language when he wrote The Collector. The story is about a
young man, Frederick Clegg, who kidnaps a young girl, Miranda Grey. The story
is told twice, from the perspective of each of the characters. The extract below
contains the very last lines of the novel. They are told by Frederick after Miranda
has died of pneumonia.
The days passed, it is now three weeks since all that.
Of course I shall never have a guest again, although now Aunt Annie and
Mabel have decided to stay Down Under, it would not be difficult.
Still as a matter of interest I have since been looking into the problems there
would be with the girl in Woolworths. She lives in a village the other side of Lewes
from here, in a house a quarter mile or so from the bus-stop. You have to go
along a country-lane to get to it. As I say, it would be possible (if I hadn’t learnt my
lesson). She isn’t as pretty as Miranda, of course, in fact she’s only an ordinary
common shop-girl, but that was my mistake before, aiming too high, I ought to
have seen that I could never get what I wanted from someone like Miranda, with
all her la-di-da ideas and clever tricks. I ought to have got someone who would
respect me more. Someone ordinary I could teach.
She is in the box I made, under the appletrees. It took me three days to dig
the hole. I thought I would go mad the night I did it (went down and got her in the
box I made and outside). I don’t think many could have done it. I did it scientific.
I planned what had to be done and ignored my natural feelings. I couldn’t stand
the idea of having to look at her again, I once heard they go green and purple in
patches, so I went in with a cheap blanket I bought in front of me and held it out
till I was by the bed and then threw it over the deceased. I rolled it up and all the
bedclothes into the box and soon had the lid screwed on. I got round the smell
with fumigator and the fan.
The room’s cleaned out now and good as new.
I shall put what she wrote and her hair up in the loft in the deed-box which
will not be opened till my death, so I don’t expect for forty or fifty years. I have
not made up my mind about Marian (another M! I heard the supervisor call her
name), this time it won’t be love, it would just be for the interest of the thing and
to compare them and also the other thing, which as I say I would like to go into
in more detail and I could teach her how. And the clothes would fit. Of course
I would make it clear from the start who’s boss and what I expect.
But it is still just an idea. I only put the stove down there today because the
room needs drying out anyway.
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Key
term
Existentialism is the philosophy
that individuals are responsible for
defi ning their own existence and
giving their life meaning. Existential
literary works often include troubled
protagonists who question the
meaning of life.
Figure 6.4 John Fowles (1926–2005). He
once wrote, I ... began to hate what I was
becoming in life … I decided instead to
become a sort of anarchist.
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discussion
1 Find evidence of the three
characteristics of modernism in
Text 6.4.
2 How does the narrator draw you
into his world?
3 What kind of person is the
narrator? Give examples to
illustrate your ideas.
4 How does Text 6.4 refl ect John
Fowles’s interest in modernism
and anarchy?
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Figure 6.5 Albert Camus (1913–60), a
source of inspiration for John Fowles.
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There are, of course, many literary movements, and not just that of modernism that
you have looked at so far in this unit. The following is a list of some other literary
movements.
beat poetry
Dadaism
existentialism
First World War poetry
Harlem renaissance
imagism
lost generation writers
metaphysical poetry
modernism
post-colonialism
post-modernism
realism
Renaissance
Romanticism
surrealism
Victorian literature
Activity 6.4
As you study the contexts in which your Part 3 texts were written, you will want
to learn more about the sources that inspired the authors. Albert Camus, Jean-
Paul Sartre, the ideas of existentialism and the Theatre of the Absurd inspired
John Fowles. Read Text 6.5, an extract from The Stranger by Albert Camus, to see
how Fowles might have been inspired. Find out about existentialism and the
Theatre of the Absurd in order to gain a deeper understanding of both Texts 6.4
and 6.5. Here are some questions to consider when comparing and contrasting
the two texts:
1 How are the personal lives of the authors different? How are they similar?
Can you see how their lives are reflected through their writing?
2 Both stories are told in the first person, or the ‘I’ form, from the perspective of
the main characters (the murderers). How are Frederick Clegg and Meursault
similar in their thoughts and actions? How are they different?
3 Read the short summaries of the main ideas of existentialism and the
Theatre of the Absurd. Can you find evidence of these ideas in the two texts?
Existentialism
A philosophy that focuses on the condition of the individual person: their
thoughts, emotions, responsibilities and actions.
Only an individual can give their life meaning.
In order to give their life meaning, the individual must overcome existential
obstacles such as fear, alienation, boredom and absurdity.
Sample
The Theatre of the Absurd
A movement comprising plays written by playwrights who believed human
existence has no meaning in a godless world.
The mismatch between people’s urge to give their lives meaning and the
meaninglessness of life often results in absurd situations.
Text 6.5 The Stranger, Albert Camus, 1942
Albert Camus came from a poor, pied noir family (of French origin) in Algeria. His
father died in the First World War; his mother, of Spanish descent, was half deaf. Just
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making anarchist claims. He spoke out about the inequalities between the Algerians
and French in Algeria, which was a French colony until 1962. In 1940, after he saw
some Nazis murder a French communist politician, Gabriel Péri, Camus joined the
underground Resistance movement. Like Solzhenitsyn, Camus was also a winner of the
Nobel Prize in Literature (1957).
Although Camus rejected the existentialist label, The Stranger is often seen as
a work of existentialism. In it, the main character, Meursault, leads an ordinary life
that begins to fall apart after his mother dies; he meets an old girlfriend and his
neighbour beats an Algerian lover. Meursault becomes involved in his neighbour’s
affairs and finds himself being tailed by angry Arabs. In an act of what seems like
random violence he shoots and kills an Arab. The following extract begins after he is
imprisoned for murder.
The next day a lawyer came to see me at the prison. He was short and stout,
quite young, with his hair carefully greased back. In spite of the heat (I was in
my shirt-sleeves), he was wearing a dark suit, a wing collar and a peculiar tie
with broad black and white stripes. He put the briefcase which he had under his
arm down on my bed, introduced himself, and told me that he’d studied my file.
My case was tricky, but he was confident of success provided I had faith in him.
I thanked him and he said, ‘Let’s get straight on with it.’
He sat down on the bed and explained that some investigations had been
made into my private life. It had been discovered that my mother had died recently
in a home. Enquiries had then been made in Marengo, and the magistrates had
learned that I’d ‘displayed a lack of emotion on the day of mother’s funeral. ‘You
will understand,’ my lawyer said, that I feel another embarrassed at having to ask
you this. But it matters a great deal. And the prosecution will have a strong case
if I can’t find anything to reply.’ He wanted me to help him. He asked me if I’d felt
any that day. This question really surprised me and I thought how embarrassed I’d
have been if I’d had to ask it.
I replied though that I’d rather got out of the habit of analyzing myself and
that I found it difficult to answer his question. I probably loved mother quite a lot,
but that didn’t mean anything. To a certain extent all normal people sometimes
wished their loved ones dead. Here the lawyer interrupted me, looking very
flustered. He made me promise not to say that at the hearing, or in front of the
examining magistrate. But I explained to him that by nature my physical needs
often distorted my feelings. On the day of mother’s funeral I was very tired and
sleepy. So I wasn’t fully aware of what was going on. The only thing I could say for
certain was that I’d rather mother hadn’t died. But my lawyer didn’t seem pleased.
He said, ‘That’s not enough.’
He thought for a moment. Then he asked me if he could say that I’d controlled
my natural feelings that day. I said, ‘No, because it’s not true.’ He looked at me in
a peculiar way, as if he found me slightly disgusting. He told me almost spitefully
that whatever happened the warden and staff of the home would be called as
witnesses and that this ‘could make things any unpleasant for me’. I pointed out
to him that none of this had anything to do with my case, but he merely replied
that obviously never had anything to do with the law.
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Figure 6.6 How does this image from
Luchino Visconti’s film of The Stranger
(Lo Straniero) depict the narrator,
Meursault, from Text 6.5?
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At higher level you are expected to
have an even greater understanding
of the contexts in which literary
works are written. The following
activity provides useful research
into literary movements. You could
divide the research work among
all the higher level students in the
class. You may also only want to
focus on the literary movements that
are relevant for your Part 3 works.
Discuss the question of to what
degree the movements of your
Part 3 works are defi ned by (a) form,
(b) philosophy and (c) time period.
An example answer may be:
‘Poetry of the First World War is not
necessarily defi ned by a particular
philosophy, as there were poets
both for and against the war.
First World War poetry, however,
is famous for its sonnets, a form
explored by many poets both critical
and supportive of the war. While
war poetry is still written today, First
World War poems are characteristic
of their times, describing the horrors
of trench warfare and the causes of
these seemingly senseless deaths.’
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Higher
level
You have seen how a literary text is shaped by the context of the writer – the context
of composition. By now you will also have realised that research is the key to
understanding the contexts in which the literary texts you are studying are written.
Learning about a movement or a genre of novel writing will help shed light on the
underlying ideas of a literary text. Research will help you read between the lines.
As you read the Paper 2 sample responses below, you will notice that they demonstrate
as much knowledge of the context of the literary texts as of the texts themselves.
Activity 6.5
To what movement or movements do your literary texts from Part 3 belong? Look
back at the list of movements on page 144 to help you. How does a little research
on a particular movement shed light on and give new meaning to the works you
are reading?
Assessment: Paper 2
In Paper 2 you must demonstrate in an essay your understanding of the contexts in
which your Part 3 texts were written. The Paper 2 essay is a timed exam, which means
you will be assessed on your ability to perform under a time constraint. Before you
begin practising for the exam, make sure you are familiar with its requirements and
grading criteria (see page V). Study the standard level and higher level sample student
responses on pages 147–49 and 151–54 to give you an idea of what you are expected
to do.
The sample exams in this unit, like the real exams, contain six questions from which
the student has chosen one to answer on. It is a good idea to begin your preparation
by writing an essay without any time pressure in answer to one of the sample exam
questions, either in class or by yourself, and not under exam conditions. Try to focus on
two main things:
what you are going to write
how you are going to write it.
Then, when you feel confident about the content, or what you want to say, and
the conventions of essay writing, or how you are going to say it, you can begin writing
some timed essays on previously unseen questions.
Sample
Sample exam Paper 2 (SL/HL)
Write an essay on ONE of the following questions. Base your essay on the texts that you have read
for Part 3. You may refer to other literary texts, but they should not form the body of your essay.
1 How can we explain the continued interest in a particular work in different
contexts and at different times?
2 What do you think of the assertion that the meaning of a text is fi xed and does
not change over time?
3 To what extent do male and female literary characters accurately refl ect the role
of men and women in society?
4 How can a literary text’s style and structure refl ect the context in which it was written?
5 How can political pressure or censorship shape the way literary texts are both
written and read?
6 How do literary texts capture the spirit of the times and the values of a culture?
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Sample student response (SL)
1 How can we explain the continued interest in a particular work in different
contexts and at different times?
Some works are timeless. For example, Shakespeare’s plays have been read by
students and performed for audiences for centuries. Even though audiences
have changed as social values have changed, the plays have always been relevant.
Why is this? In The Handmaid’s Tale, by Margaret Atwood, and One Day in the Life
of Ivan Denisovich by Alexander Solzhenitsyn, we can see two reasons why literary
works have received continued interest in different contexts and at different times
by looking at their timeless themes and their literary devices.
The Handmaid’s Tale and One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich similarly
explore timeless themes, namely, the themes of oppression and dignity. The
question at the heart of these novels is: ‘How can you keep your dignity under
extreme circumstances?’ In the case of the character Offred, from The Handmaid’s
Tale, she is reduced to a fertility machine in a dystopian theocracy. Ivan Denisovich,
or ‘Shukov’ as he is called, is reduced to a manual labourer in a camp near
Kazakhstan, where temperatures are minus 40 degrees Celsius. For Offred, her
dignity means being loved and found beautiful. She steals butter to keep her skin
moist. For Shukhov dignity means refusing to lick his bowl or wear his hat at the
dining table, which other prisoners do because of the hunger and cold.
Even though the Stalin labour camps and the Republic of Gilead are very
remote for many readers, the novels are just as relevant today as when they were
written. While Offred’s situation sounds so unrealistic, readers know that religious
oppression is a real threat. Atwood wrote the novel in 1985, just years after Iran
became a theocracy and made women cover themselves in public, like the women
of Gilead. Today, war is fought against the Taliban, who impose strict rules on
the way women dress and are educated. While the Soviet labour camps have been
dismantled, the world has learned about places like Abu Ghraib. People will always
fear oppression and will therefore always be intrigued by works like The Handmaid’s
Tale and One Day in the Life of Ivan Denisovich.
There is another reason why these works will remain timeless. They are cleverly
crafted. Margaret Atwood makes use of a stream of consciousness style,
retelling flashbacks in the present tense, which keeps the reader engaged. She
drops the reader in a very strange world, where people wear uniforms and have
designated roles in society. It is up to the reader to piece together the logic
of this strange setting. In a very clever structural device Atwood presents an
epilogue to explain how Offred’s narrative has come to us through the transcription
of a dictaphone that Offred secretly kept. The transcription is presented as a
historical document in a futuristic, still fundamentally religious society. Such
devices show Atwood’s technical skill as a writer in a genre of dystopian and
speculative fiction, a genre most suitable for the themes of her novel.
Alexander Solzhenitsyn wrote a historical novel in the third-person limited
perspective, a style and structure that reflected the context that he was writing in.
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Key
term
Stream of consciousness is a style
of storytelling which puts the reader
in the narrator’s mind, allowing
the reader access to the narrator’s
thoughts as they occur, randomly,
fragmented and unorganised.
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If he had written a memoir in the first person, blatantly presenting his personal story
as fact, he would have run the risk of being imprisoned again. Instead he told the story
as fiction and he distanced himself from the main character by writing in the third
person. Nevertheless, readers are drawn into the everyday experiences of Shukov in
the labour camp through Solzhenitsyn’s use of free indirect speech. There are times
when we read Shukov’s thoughts, which are not written with quotation marks. He can
become very excited about warm boots, a proper spoon or a morsel of bread.
All in all Solzhenitsyn and Atwood, like many great writers, have written
timeless works by writing about timeless themes. Through their novels we see our
fascination with themes of dignity and oppression. Furthermore, these authors
have used stylistic devices and literary structures that suit the contexts of their
works, be they speculative fiction or historical fiction. It is for these reasons that
readers return to literary geniuses, like Shakespeare, again and again.
Examiner’s comments
Generally speaking the student’s work is well structured and relevant to the question.
The following comments give a good indication of how an examiner would assess this
sample student response.
Criterion A: Knowledge and understanding – 3 out of 5
The student puts his main ideas into the contexts of the reader and the writer, comparing
the times in which they were written and the times in which they are read today. While
the contexts of the composition are compared with the contexts of interpretation today,
with parallels made between Iran and the Taliban, the gulag and Abu Ghraib, there is not
much illustration of the effects of the works on readers then and now.
Criterion B: Response to the question – 4 out of 5
The student rewords the question a little to change the focus away from explaining
the continued interest in a work to explaining what makes a work timeless. Nevertheless,
the candidate understands the implications of the question. The argument that a work
is timeless because of timeless themes is a basic but important one. Focusing on two
common themes, oppression and dignity, is also relevant and insightful.
Sample
Criterion C: Understanding of the use and effects of stylistic
features – 3 out of 5
There is clear evidence of critical thinking when the student makes a link between
Solzhenitsyn’s use of free indirect speech and his fear of imprisonment. When explaining
the correlation between Atwood’s style, the use of dystopian fiction and the historical
context, the student is not as clear. It would have been nice to have an explanation of
dystopian and historical fiction, along with examples of illustrations from the work.
Criterion D: Organisation and development– 5 out of 5
This essay is well structured. The student makes good comparisons of the works within
most paragraphs. Once a guiding question is asked, such as How can you keep your
dignity under extreme circumstances?, the answer is related to both novels immediately.
The student integrates examples into the essay, referring to careful details of the
novels, such as the butter incident in The Handmaid’s Tale or how Shukov refuses to
lick his bowl or wear his hat at dinner. The student makes use of linking words such as
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nevertheless, while and even though, which act as signposts for the reader. The opening
idea about continued interest in Shakespeare returns in the conclusion as well, which
gives the piece a sense of coherence.
Criterion E: Language – 4 out of 5
The student uses a good register that is characteristic of academic essays. The
introduction is a good example of this, where the student writes a long but clear thesis
statement. The student uses a wide range of vocabulary. The sentence structures follow
parallel patterns. For example, the student starts one sentence with While Offred’s
situation may sound unrealistic and then another with While the Soviet labour camps have
been dismantled. This creates a clear link between the ideas of these sentences. Well done.
How to structure an essay
In Chapter 2 you read about the PIE structural pattern that occurs throughout good
paragraphs (see page 58). PIE stands for Points, Illustrations and Explanations. We will
take this method one step further here and ask What kind of points belong in a literature
essay, and where do we put them?
A good essay is a well-structured essay. You may be bubbling with good ideas, but
if they are not presented in a logical order for the reader, then they will be lost. The
solution for this is a good outline. While you might think in a timed exam that there is
no time to write an outline, writing one will actually save you time. If you simply write
your ideas down as they come to you, you will find yourself backtracking, crossing lines
out or squeezing lines in. Outlines help you think before you write.
What should your outline look like? There is no single outline to fit all essays.
There is, however, a particular way of organising an essay that is commonly
accepted as standard. Often referred to as the ‘five-paragraph essay’, this sort of
essay has an introduction, usually three body paragraphs (but sometimes more),
and a conclusion. The student’s outline below is for the sample essay you read
above, and the outline follows this five-paragraph structure. (Notice that the
sample response has six paragraphs, not five, because of the four body paragraphs,
not three).
Here are several key building blocks of essays.
Introduction
Attention grabber Why are Shakespeare’s plays timeless?
Factual information Study of The Handmaid’s Tale (HT) and One Day in the Life of
Ivan Denisovich (ODLID)
Thesis 2 reasons explain why works are timeless: 1 timeless themes, 2 good
literary technique
Body paragraph 1
Point Timeless themes – oppression and dignity. She = fertility machine.
He = hard worker.
Illustration She steals butter, he doesn’t lick his bowl.
Explanation Expression of beauty for her. Display of pride for him.
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Body paragraph 2
Point Novels’ themes were relevant when written and relevant today.
Illustration HT written 1985 during Islamic Revolution in Iran. Today – the Taliban.
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ODLID about gulag in 1950s. Today – Abu Ghraib.
Explanation People will always fear oppression.
Body paragraph 3
Point HT cleverly crafted and therefore timeless.
Illustration Stream of consciousness and clever epilogue.
Explanation Style and structure suitable for dystopian literature.
Body paragraph 4
Point ODLID cleverly crafted and therefore timeless.
Illustration Not memoir: historical novel for a reason – risk of imprisonment.
Explanation Free indirect speech puts author at safe distance from main character
but draws reader in.
Conclusion
Summary Timeless themes – oppression and dignity. Style and structure suit genre.
Put ideas into greater context and/or link to ideas from introduction Reasons
why we always return to writers such as Shakespeare.
Attention grabber
Try to capture your reader’s attention immediately, by using a bold statement, a
question, a quote or a brief anecdote in the first line of the introduction. (It is also
important that you first write out the question that you are responding to at the top of
the essay. This will help both you and the examiner.)
Factual information
In the opening paragraph state briefly what the essay will respond to. Just as in a letter
to the editor you find the name of the article, the date of publication and author of
the article the letter responds to, similarly in a literature essay you should give the title
of the text or texts and author’s name. This can be done in passing, as in the sample
student response.
Thesis
A thesis statement captures the main idea and purpose of the essay. Half of the thesis
is given to you in the Paper 2 exam question. The other half will be your answer to
the question. Thesis statements are clear, succinct and persuasive. The sample student
response suggests two reasons why literary works have received continued interest:
timeless themes and strong literary devices. This thesis already provides a structure for
the rest of the essay. Furthermore, notice how the sample student response mentions
the titles of the works, the author’s names and the thesis in one fluid statement. There
is no weak or over-obvious wording such as In this essay I will … or My essay is about
question number … Avoid the word I and make a strong statement.
Sample
Topic sentence (point)
Body paragraphs start with a topic sentence in which the first point is made. A topic
sentence refers to one of the main ideas of the thesis statement. For this reason it is
effective if the thesis statement consists of two or three components. The topic sentence
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serves as the guiding idea for a paragraph. Within the paragraph, there should be
illustrations and explanations of the point that the topic sentence makes. Notice that
the sample student response refers to the timeless themes idea of the thesis statement in
the first topic sentence of the first body paragraph. This acts as a structural signpost for
the reader.
Conclusion
The conclusion is often the most difficult bit to write because you need to keep the
reader’s interest without introducing any new ideas. Make a note of the following tips
for concluding your essay:
Try linking the conclusion to earlier ideas from the introduction. Notice how the
sample student response starts with the Shakespeare question and answers it in the
last line of the conclusion.
Signposts are important for the examiner. Phrases like To conclude, In summary or All
in all work well. If your sentences already sound conclusive and summative, you can
skip them.
Although you will need to summarise the main ideas, avoid simply repeating the
points you have already made. For this reason it is important to use synonyms. The
sample student response has the word intrigued in the body of the essay but the word
fascination in the conclusion.
Put your points into a wider context. The sample student response does this through
the Shakespeare example.
Do not apologise or sound weak. Avoid statements such as We have examined only one
of many positions on this subject.
Activity 6.6
Read the HL sample student response on pages 152–153. Then using the
five-paragraphy essay structure, write the outline you think the student could have
made before writing the essay.
Sample exam Paper 2 (SL/HL)
Write an essay on ONE of the following questions. Base your essay on the texts that you
have read for Part 3. You may refer to other literary texts, but they should not form the body
of your essay.
1 How do different forms of publishing affect the way literary texts are written
and received?
2 How are changing family values refl ected in literary texts?
3 How have certain philosophical movements infl uenced writers of literary texts?
4 How has one of the universal themes, for example love, murder, ambition or
jealousy, been treated similarly or differently by writers in different cultures and
in different times?
5 How have dominant and minority social groups been portrayed similarly and
differently in literary texts through the ages?
6 How have literary texts been used over time as a form of social protest?
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Sample student response (HL)
4 How has one of the universal themes, for example love, murder, ambition or
jealousy, been treated similarly or differently by writers in different cultures
and in different times?
One of the universal themes that we see in many literary works is murder. Three
authors, William Shakespeare, Albert Camus and John Fowles, have treated this
theme of murder both similarly and differently. By exploring Macbeth, The Stranger
and The Collector we will see how each author used murder to comment on the
meaning of life, how their ideas were influenced by their contexts, and how they
used language to express these ideas.
While the storylines of all three works are different, they have one thing in common:
someone dies. Since readers usually look for meaning behind such catastrophic events,
we can assume that the characters of these works die for a reason. Why do the
characters in these works die and what are we supposed to learn from their deaths?
Macbeth kills Duncan, the King of Scotland, because he wants to become king himself,
but his guilt comes back to haunt him and he is eventually killed too. There is an obvious
moral lesson that ambition is dangerous and murder is not a shortcut to the top. The
moral lesson is less obvious in The Collector, where Miranda, a posh, young, pacifistic
girl, is abducted by an autistic, young madman, Frederick Clegg. She needlessly dies of
pneumonia in his cellar. Nevertheless, there is a moral message that one can and should
use violence to preserve one’s life. The Stranger, however, offers a nearly impossible
message to comprehend. When Meursault is asked in court why he killed an Arab on the
beach, his only answer is ‘because of the sun’. It is as if Camus is trying to say people
are murdered for no reason at all. In this sense Camus is different from Shakespeare or
Fowles, by telling us not to look for meaning behind the story of a murder.
In each story, Macbeth, The Stranger and The Collector, murder is treated
differently because each author was inspired by different contexts. Macbeth
is based on the history of King James I, who had just come to the throne in
1606 when Shakespeare presented his play. In reality, Banquo, who was James
I’s ancestor, helped Macbeth kill Duncan to become king. It would have created a
political scandal and cost Shakespeare his head if he had presented it this way.
Shakespeare presented Banquo as the rightful and just leader of Scotland. This
flattered King James. People at that time believed it was a religious sin to kill a
king. Kings were chosen by the hand of God. Shakespeare’s moral lesson was not
only ‘murder is wrong’, but ‘murdering your king is wrong’. In order to understand
the contexts of The Stranger and The Collector, we must also discuss the notion
of God and religion. In a religious world, murder is obviously wrong and life naturally
has meaning. Both characters, Meursault and Frederick Clegg, do not believe in
religion and their murders are meaningless. The fact that they do not feel regret or
remorse makes the reader feel rather uncomfortable. Instead these works seem to
say, ‘Murder happens. Accept it and move on.’ Both Camus and Fowles were inspired
by the ideas of Sartre, existentialism and the Theatre of the Absurd, a movement
that explores the mismatch between people’s attempts to create meaningful lives
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and the fact that life lacks meaning. Fowles’s work is less absurd than Camus’s in
that Miranda seems to die for a reason: she is a victim of her own pacifism.
In the writing styles of all three authors, the focus is on portraying the
thoughts of the murderer. In Macbeth, King Duncan is killed off-stage. We see
Macbeth contemplating the murder, and he feels guilty about the murder. His
speeches Is this a dagger which I see before me …? and Will all great Neptune’s
ocean wash this blood / Clean from my hand? are evidence of this. Just like
Shakespeare, Camus and Fowles show us the thoughts of their perpetrators
through first-person narration. In contrast, though, Meursault and Clegg are both
surprisingly bland in how they describe their murders and indifferent about the
aftermath of their murders. The language of both is simple and basic. Events are
told to the reader as they unfold in a stream of consciousness and matter-offact
tone. Only the immediate ‘here and now’ action seems to matter to the main
character. This is a typical characteristic of existentialism.
The mind of a madman is something that intrigues all of us. We have seen how
three authors approach this universal theme of murder differently. For a large part
their contexts and sources of inspiration account for how they portray this theme
differently. Interestingly the first-person perspective lends itself best to this subject
matter. It is ironic that readers look for the meaning of life in the death of others.
Examiner’s comments
The following comments give a good indication of how an examiner would assess this
sample student response.
Criterion A: Knowledge and understanding – 5 out of 5
The student has done research on the contexts of the Part 3 texts, as is seen in the
references to King James and existentialism. The explanation of how kings and religion
were perceived in Shakespeare’s time is especially relevant. Similarly the student
explains how Camus and Fowles were influenced by existentialism and the Theatre of
the Absurd to different degrees. There is evidence of critical thinking, as the student
sees similarities and differences between all three works with regards to theme.
Criterion B: Response to the question – 3 out of 5
The focus of the essay remains on the title question for the most part, but ignores the
aspect of different cultures. Is there something typically French in the portrayal of
Meursault, compared to Fowles’s portrayal of the British Clegg? While this is a difficult
question to answer, it remains part of the exam question and is expected of the student.
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tip
You will notice from the criteria that,
as far as content is concerned,
your essay must have three areas
of focus: your understanding of the
works in light of the question, the
importance of context, and your
understanding of stylistic devices.
While criteria D (organisation) and
E (language) must be apparent
throughout the essay, the fi rst
three points can be tackled one by
one in the essay. In fact, you will
notice that both SL and HL sample
responses are structured along the
lines of the fi rst three criteria. First
they discuss common themes in
relation to the question (Criterion B).
Then they explain the signifi cance
of context (Criterion A). Finally
they explore the effect of stylistic
features (Criterion C). Following
such a format will help keep your
essay focused and effective.
Sample
Criterion C: Understanding of the use and effects of stylistic
features – 3 out of 5
The student identifies and compares the use of stylistic features very well. The tone
of Meursault and Clegg is matter-of-fact, and the use of first-person, stream of
consciousness narration is prevalent in the novels. However, what is the effect of these
on the audience? Why did the authors choose these points of view for these stories
about murder? These are questions that could receive more attention.
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Criterion D: Organisation and development – 4 out of 5
The essay follows a classic five-paragraph essay structure, with a thesis statement and
topic sentences. The question Why do the characters in these works die and what are we
supposed to learn from their deaths? is particularly effective. Such questions give paragraphs
a lot of guidance and structure. Illustrations are integrated effectively as well, such as the
quotations from Macbeth after a statement about the thoughts of the murderer. There
could have been more examples like these for The Collector and The Stranger. The structure
could have been a little more coherent with better use of linking words and clauses as well.
Criterion E: Language – 4 out of 5
The flow of the text is very good. While the essay is free of grammatical errors, the
student could have taken risks with more difficult sentence structures. Many sentences
are fragmented and choppy, needing to be connected to other ideas. With a few minor
slip-ups, the register is for the most part academic and appropriate.
Ten ways to invigorate your writing
The higher level sample student response could have been written more effectively. While
writing styles may vary from person to person, there are several characteristics of good
writing that everyone should be aware of. Here are ten ways to invigorate your writing
style. When used properly, they can change a score of 7 for Criterion C into a 10.
1 Avoid One of … and The fact that …
Sentences that begin with One of the … or The fact that … tend to be cumbersome for
the reader. They are more characteristic of spoken language.
Instead of
One of the universal themes that we see in many literary works is murder.
The fact that they do not feel regret or remorse makes the reader feel
rather uncomfortable.
use
Sample
Murder is a universal theme found in many literary works.
Their lack of regret or remorse makes the reader feel uncomfortable.
2 Avoid There is or It is
The verb be can often be replaced by stronger, more descriptive verbs. Similarly
the impersonal subjects there and it can usually be replaced by stronger, more
meaningful subjects.
Instead of
There is an obvious moral lesson that ambition is dangerous.
It is ironic that readers look for the meaning of life in the death of others.
use
The moral lesson here is that ambition is dangerous.
Ironically, readers look for the meaning of life in the death of others.
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3 Avoid obviously and naturally
Nothing is obvious for the reader, so words such obviously or naturally are
presumptuous. (Notice in the example above that the word obvious has been removed,
making giving the statement more impact.)
Instead of
In a religious world, murder is obviously wrong and life naturally has meaning.
use
In a religious world, murder is wrong and life has meaning.
4 Avoid passive verbs
Avoid passive verb constructions. Active ones engage the reader more.
Instead of
In each story, Macbeth, The Stranger and The Collector, murder is
treated differently.
use
Each story, Macbeth, The Stranger and The Collector, treats murder
differently.
5 Avoid vague language
If you want to be persuasive in your essay, you will have to be clear. This is especially
applicable to quantifiers, or words that indicate an amount.
Instead of
For a large part their contexts and sources of inspiration account for how
they portray this theme differently.
use
Their contexts and sources of inspiration account for how they portray
this theme differently.
6 Use the -ing form
Using subject–verb–object syntax can become very boring for the reader, when the
subjects are always common countable nouns. Instead try creating noun phrases using
gerunds (-ing forms).
Instead of
It would have created a political scandal and cost Shakespeare his head if
he had presented the play this way.
use
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Sample
Presenting the play this way would have created a political scandal and
cost Shakespeare his head.
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7 Use effi cient noun phrases
This tip is similar to Tip 2 above and is about avoiding clumsy sentences with too
many words.
Instead of
Both Camus and Fowles were inspired by the ideas of Sartre,
existentialism and the Theatre of the Absurd, a movement that explores
the mismatch between people’s attempts to create meaningful lives and
the fact that life lacks meaning.
use
Both Camus and Fowles were inspired by the ideas of Sartre,
existentialism and the mismatch between people’s attempts to create
meaningful lives and the meaninglessness of life.
8 Use parallel structures
Readers and listeners like parallel constructions because they contain patterns
that can be easily understood. The sentence below can be rewritten with a
repeated -ing form.
Instead of
We see Macbeth contemplating the murder, and he feels guilty about the
murder.
use
We see Macbeth contemplating the murder and feeling guilty about it.
9 Use varied sentence length
Keep your reader interested by varying the lengths of your sentences. Offset long
sentences with short ones, and look for choppy, fragmented sentences that can be
strung together.
Instead of
The language of both is simple and basic. Events are told to the reader
as they unfold in a stream of consciousness and matter-of-fact tone.
Only the immediate ‘here and now’ actions seem to matter to the main
character. This is a typical characteristic of existentialism.
Sample
use
The reader learns of events as they unfold via a stream of consciousness,
recounted simply and in a matter-of-fact tone, where only the immediate
‘here and now’ seems to matter to the main character. This is typical of
existentialism.
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10 Use linking words and clauses
You must indicate the relationships between your ideas as you present them to your
reader. Look again at the list of linking words on page 65. Besides using linking words,
also make good use of relative clauses, which are clauses like this one that use words
such as which and that to link ideas together and make longer sentences. If you have a
sentence starting with This, you can probably join it on to the sentence before.
Instead of
Shakespeare presented Banquo as the rightful and just leader of
Scotland. This flattered King James. People at that time believed it was a
religious sin to kill a king. Kings were chosen by the hand of God.
use
Instead, Shakespeare presented Banquo as the rightful and just leader of
Scotland, which flattered King James. Furthermore, people at that time
believed it was a sin to kill a king, as kings were chosen by God.
Chapter 6 summary
The focus in this chapter has been the context of composition, on
gaining a greater understanding of literature by placing ourselves in
the mind of the writer and learning about literary traditions. You began
by looking closely at some examples of dystopian and historical fi ction.
You have also seen the importance of researching the contexts in which
literary texts are written and examined the philosophical and artistic
movements of modernism and existentialism in relation to an extract
from a novel by John Fowles. Understanding the zeitgeist of a writer
opens new windows on a literary text and allows you to read more
deeply between the lines. Finally, as preparation for the Paper 2 exam,
you have learnt about the fi ve-paragraph essay structure and worked
through ten tips to improve your writing style.
Chapter 6 brings to a close Part 3 of the coursebook. By now, you
will be familiar with the contexts of interpretation and composition,
and know how they can shape meaning in the literary texts you are
studying. In the next chapter you will be fi nding out more about the
mechanics of fi ction. Before deciding how effective a certain writing
style is for the purpose of a text, it is necessary to know more about the
writing devices writers have at their disposal and how well they have
chosen them in their texts.
Chapter 6 The context of composition
tip
You may have noticed that the list is
divided into two sets: Tips 1–5 start
with Avoid … and Tips 6–10 with
Use … Think of them as the dos
and don’ts of writing. In pairs, check
each other’s essays in response
to an exam question. Have you
included all the dos and avoided
all the don’ts? Make a checklist for
reviewing each other’s work.
You could also try working in groups
of ten, with each student assigned
one of the tips to watch out for.
Pass your essays around and as a
group screen them for all ten ways
to invigorate your writing style.
Sample
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Further
resources
The Little, Brown Compact
Handbook by Jane E. Aaron is an
excellent, American guide on how to
organise essays, invigorate writing
style, use punctuation and cite
sources. You will also fi nd it useful
long after you have fi nished your IB
Diploma course!
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