Sri Aurobindo - Karuna Yoga
Sri Aurobindo - Karuna Yoga Sri Aurobindo - Karuna Yoga
736 Although a few pages of an early version were significantly retouched at some stage, the concluding two sections of the Epilogue stayed almost exactly as they were. Thus the closing pages of the epic, like most of Book Eight, remained as a sample of the style in which Savitri was originally written. Near the end of his life, Sri Aurobindo’s eyesight was so poor that he no longer wrote at all. He made no more drafts for Savitri and the work proceeded entirely by dictation. Virtually the whole revision of “The Book of Everlasting Day” was done in this purely oral manner and may be inferred to belong to this late period. There exist only a few pages of drafts for it in Sri Aurobindo’s hand, found in note-pads he used around 1946. He was probably referring to these when he wrote in 1947 that he had already recast “part of the eleventh” book. Book Eleven culminates in the longest continuous dictated passage in Savitri. The passage was written by the scribe in a separate note-pad and seems to have no antecedent in any previous draft. This is the section which begins on p. 702 with “Descend to life . . . ”, and ends at the bottom of p. 710 with “This earthly life become the life divine.” Regarding Sri Aurobindo’s dictation in Book Eleven, the scribe reports that “line after line began to flow from his lips like a smooth and gentle stream and it was on the next day that a revision was done to get the link for further continuation.” By this time, cantos of Parts Two and Three were coming out in journal instalments and fascicles like those of Part One. Most of the cantos of Books Four, Five, Six and Nine were published in this way in 1949-50. Unlike the fascicles of the first part, they were not revised afterwards by Sri Aurobindo. But in 1948, an extract from Book Six, Canto Two had already been printed in the Sri Aurobindo Mandir Annual. An offprint of this was read to Sri Aurobindo and the changes he dictated were incorporated in a retyped copy. The painstaking revision of this second typescript was reportedly the last work he did on Savitri. A short paragraph before the concluding description of Narad’s departure was the final passage to receive detailed attention in November 1950, less than a month before
Note on the Text 737 Sri Aurobindo’s passing. The thirteen-line paragraph was expanded to the seventy-two lines beginning “Queen, strive no more to change the secret will. . . . ” Editions of Savitri Sri Aurobindo revised the proofs of the first edition of Part One, making numerous final changes and adding more than a hundred new lines. In 1950, Part One of Savitri appeared in book form. Parts Two and Three could not be similarly revised. They came out in 1951 in a second volume, thus completing the first edition. The second edition was issued in 1954 in one volume under the imprint of the Sri Aurobindo International University Centre. Some obvious errors in the text of the first edition were emended at this time. A few of these were evidently due to the mishearing of Sri Aurobindo’s dictation. In 1968, the first edition of Part One was reprinted with some new textual corrections. The third complete edition (1970) contained further emendations. Comprising Volumes 28 and 29 of the Sri Aurobindo Birth Centenary Library, it was also brought out as a single volume in a reduced format. This was reprinted a number of times between 1973 and 1990. Several typographical and other errors were rectified in the 1976 impression. The fourth, critically revised edition appeared in 1993 and is reproduced here. This edition was the outcome of a systematic comparison of the printed text of Savitri with the manuscripts. Each line was traced through all stages of copying, typing and printing in which errors could have occurred. Readings found to have come about through inaccurate transcription or misprinting were corrected. Accidentally omitted lines were restored to the text. This has resulted in a very slight increase in the length of the poem to its present 23,837 lines.
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<strong>Sri</strong> <strong>Aurobindo</strong>’s passing. The thirteen-line paragraph was expanded<br />
to the seventy-two lines beginning “Queen, strive no<br />
more to change the secret will. . . . ”<br />
Editions of Savitri<br />
<strong>Sri</strong> <strong>Aurobindo</strong> revised the proofs of the first edition of Part<br />
One, making numerous final changes and adding more than a<br />
hundred new lines. In 1950, Part One of Savitri appeared in<br />
book form. Parts Two and Three could not be similarly revised.<br />
They came out in 1951 in a second volume, thus completing the<br />
first edition.<br />
The second edition was issued in 1954 in one volume under<br />
the imprint of the <strong>Sri</strong> <strong>Aurobindo</strong> International University Centre.<br />
Some obvious errors in the text of the first edition were emended<br />
at this time. A few of these were evidently due to the mishearing<br />
of <strong>Sri</strong> <strong>Aurobindo</strong>’s dictation.<br />
In 1968, the first edition of Part One was reprinted with<br />
some new textual corrections. The third complete edition (1970)<br />
contained further emendations. Comprising Volumes 28 and<br />
29 of the <strong>Sri</strong> <strong>Aurobindo</strong> Birth Centenary Library, it was also<br />
brought out as a single volume in a reduced format. This was<br />
reprinted a number of times between 1973 and 1990. Several<br />
typographical and other errors were rectified in the 1976 impression.<br />
The fourth, critically revised edition appeared in 1993 and<br />
is reproduced here. This edition was the outcome of a systematic<br />
comparison of the printed text of Savitri with the manuscripts.<br />
Each line was traced through all stages of copying, typing and<br />
printing in which errors could have occurred. Readings found to<br />
have come about through inaccurate transcription or misprinting<br />
were corrected. Accidentally omitted lines were restored to<br />
the text. This has resulted in a very slight increase in the length<br />
of the poem to its present 23,837 lines.