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84 ◆ Crab Orchard Review Donna Hemans to the one in front, through the windows that were slightly open, through the holes built into the wall just below the thatch. Wasps were building nests on the thatch. Brad dropped his bag. “Cool,” he said. “I always wanted to stay in a rustic cabin.” I wondered where the Brad I’d known had gone. Perhaps he hadn’t realized yet that there was no switch by the door that would magically pipe current into the room, no bulbs hanging overhead, no television in a corner below a window, no refrigerator, no microwave, no stove. “Cool,” I said too, and turned to look at the bathroom, just outside the door. “Simply cool.” Inside the bathroom, the concrete floor was painted red. Even the shower stall, concrete as well, was painted red. The pipes worked. The toilet looked fairly new. Mom had long threatened to send us from our Hempstead, Long Island home to a country house in Jamaica so we could learn what life was really like. For a while her threats worked. We behaved. We turned off lights and wasted nothing. We were still young then. But the nearly bare cabin was more than I expected. We hadn’t turned wasteful again and there was no sin I could think of that would have prompted this retreat. Mom didn’t know, for instance, of Brad’s girlfriend or the things they did in the early morning after Dad left for work and before she returned from the overnight shift. I wouldn’t be the one to tell of Brad’s senior class slide. My mother was moving around downstairs, and, when I looked, her room was as bare as ours. “There’s a kitchen next door,” she said. “I’ll have to show you how to use the stove.” I didn’t want to see a stove that my mother had to show me how to use. I’d seen kitchens. I’d seen stoves, but never any that required lessons. “Mom, why are we here?” I tried to keep the whine out of my voice. “What did we do?” “What do you mean?” “This place…it’s not a hotel. There’s no electricity, not even a phone.” “You children are lucky,” she said again. “Anyhow sometimes we all need a change.” I heard Brad outside asking about the beach and before she said anymore about how little we understood of the hardships of life, I said, “I think I’ll go to the beach, Mom.” “Okay,” she said.
Donna Hemans As I left, she was taking out one of her tranquility candles, lavender scent, I believed. Once the flame was lit, she shook the lit match, breathed deeply, the outtake as heavy as a sigh. Brad led us through a footpath bordered by grass and prickly shrubs. The beach was a small cove with naked reefs jutting out into the sea. The water was surprisingly warm but a little dark because the sun was no longer directly overhead, and the sand carried a tinge of black. It wasn’t until after I sat, my legs stretched out, the waves crashing over my body, that I noticed the small crabs being carried as well by the waves. Once the wave retreated, the crabs buried themselves quickly. There were small, almost translucent fish darting around, inspecting my dark brown legs and unable to resist the pull of the waves. “This is awesome,” Brad said and whooped, plunging into the water. I imagined him as someone else, a television character who says words like cool and dude and awesome, the type of American son my mother didn’t want to raise. In that moment he was not the brother I had known, not the brother who always stood back from baseball or softball games and who would dribble a basketball if there was only one other person on court, never with a full team. Independent thinker, my father said because he hadn’t yet learned Brad’s thinking. Brad wants no broken bones; he wants to remain as complete as the day he was born. Brad swam a bit, coming up for air and yelling back, “Aren’t you coming in?” I didn’t swim at all but sat at the water’s edge rubbing sand onto my skin. A free body scrub. Two boys came loping down. They were accustomed to the cove. They waved hello, dropped their towels on the rocks and waded out towards Brad. Brad settled for a bit to shake hands. Later, I learned one was seventeen, one twenty. The seventeen-year-old, Shane, spoke softly as if all conversations were private or it pained him to talk. The other, who called himself Red, spoke with a different accent. He told us his mother was from Germantown, a descendant of a group of Germans who came to the island years and years earlier and never resettled back home. He pointed west as if we should know where. Germantown, another name I love. Simple. Straightforward. Once we headed back to the cabins, the boys pointed out their respective homes on the compound. All the houses were occupied by siblings, uncles and aunts of the two boys. I couldn’t help but think of my parents who could barely live together, but here was one tribe on the same compound. I couldn’t imagine an entire family of adult Crab Orchard Review ◆ 85
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Donna Hemans<br />
As I left, she was taking out one of her tranquility candles, lavender<br />
scent, I believed. Once the flame was lit, she shook the lit match, breathed<br />
deeply, the outtake as heavy as a sigh.<br />
Brad led us through a footpath bordered by grass and prickly<br />
shrubs. The beach was a small cove with naked reefs jutting out into the<br />
sea. The water was surprisingly warm but a little dark because the sun<br />
was no longer directly overhead, and the sand carried a tinge of black.<br />
It wasn’t until after I sat, my legs stretched out, the waves crashing over<br />
my body, that I noticed the small crabs being carried as well by the<br />
waves. Once the wave retreated, the crabs buried themselves quickly.<br />
There were small, almost translucent fish darting around, inspecting<br />
my dark brown legs and unable to resist the pull of the waves.<br />
“This is awesome,” Brad said and whooped, plunging into the water.<br />
I imagined him as someone else, a television character who says<br />
words like cool and dude and awesome, the type of American son my<br />
mother didn’t want to raise. In that moment he was not the brother I<br />
had known, not the brother who always stood back from baseball or<br />
softball games and who would dribble a basketball if there was only one<br />
other person on c<strong>our</strong>t, never with a full team. Independent thinker, my<br />
father said because he hadn’t yet learned Brad’s thinking. Brad wants no<br />
broken bones; he wants to remain as complete as the day he was born.<br />
Brad swam a bit, coming up for air and yelling back, “Aren’t you<br />
coming in?”<br />
I didn’t swim at all but sat at the water’s edge rubbing sand onto<br />
my skin. A free body scrub.<br />
Two boys came loping down. They were accustomed to the cove.<br />
They waved hello, dropped their towels on the rocks and waded out<br />
towards Brad. Brad settled for a bit to shake hands. Later, I learned<br />
one was seventeen, one twenty. The seventeen-year-old, Shane, spoke<br />
softly as if all conversations were private or it pained him to talk. The<br />
other, who called himself Red, spoke with a different accent. He told<br />
us his mother was from Germantown, a descendant of a group of<br />
Germans who came to the island years and years earlier and never<br />
resettled back home. He pointed west as if we should know where.<br />
Germantown, another name I love. Simple. Straightforward.<br />
Once we headed back to the cabins, the boys pointed out their<br />
respective homes on the compound. All the houses were occupied by<br />
siblings, uncles and aunts of the two boys. I couldn’t help but think<br />
of my parents who could barely live together, but here was one tribe<br />
on the same compound. I couldn’t imagine an entire family of adult<br />
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