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NISI MASA Script Contest 2009 - European short film Competition – A Short Scriptwriting Guide<br />

<strong>Basic</strong> <strong>Guidelines</strong> <strong>for</strong> <strong>Screenwriting</strong><br />

by Fedor Sendak<br />

Introduction<br />

Believe it or not, but there are some rules and conventions you are expected to follow when writing<br />

a script <strong>for</strong> the NISI MASA Script Contest. You may ask “Why follow any rules, if screenwriting is<br />

about creativity?” Well, there is an answer to that:<br />

When you desire to have your script read to professional people from the film industry, you best try<br />

and follow these conventions as much as possible, always and whenever you submit your writings.<br />

How clueless they might seem to you, script readers (like: commissioning editors and producers)<br />

who have a pile of scripts on their desk might most likely throw "unconventionally" <strong>for</strong>matted and<br />

styled scripts into the trashcan without even reading them. Simply because in this way they<br />

separate the newbie’s from the (may be upcoming) professionals. It saves them a lot of time. Since<br />

we want to raise the professionalism of new talent, let's start today with getting you familiar with<br />

these professional standards. At the same time, this <strong>for</strong>mat will give our jury a better opportunity to<br />

compare and read your script without any confusion in the lay out.<br />

The lay out of your script<br />

A script layout should look something like this:<br />

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Length and <strong>for</strong>mat<br />

There are certain standards in <strong>for</strong>matting who will help to gauge more or less how long a film a<br />

script will make. This is very useful <strong>for</strong> producers. With a well written script, these standards allow<br />

us to measure a script's length by saying that: "a page of script equals roughly a minute of screen<br />

time". This is a very rough guide and not to be completely trusted. For instance action films scripts<br />

often are short but take longer on screen compared to a dialogue based script.<br />

Since the NISI MASA Script Contest is a competition to write a short film, it is important to -more or<br />

less- be able to judge how many pages you write. So when you follow the standard <strong>for</strong>mat <strong>for</strong><br />

scripts, it ensures the same amount of “screen action” is covered by each page (on average). In<br />

standard <strong>for</strong>mat, a page is roughly equal to a minute of screen time. So by looking at your page<br />

numbers we should be able tell how long your film is. There<strong>for</strong>e also don’t <strong>for</strong>get to number your<br />

pages, and start at 1 on the first page with a scene on it.<br />

Standard Format Rules<br />

Here is a basic list of how your script should be <strong>for</strong>matted.<br />

Typeface: Courier size 12<br />

To achieve the standard <strong>for</strong>mat, always use Courier (or New Courier) Size 12.<br />

This is a fixed-width font.<br />

Margins<br />

Left margin should be 4 cm<br />

Right is 1.3 cm<br />

Top and Bottom<br />

Make them 2.5 cm each.<br />

Dialogue<br />

6.5 cm from the left<br />

will be about 7.5 to 9 cm wide<br />

shouldn't extend more than 15 cm from the left.<br />

Please, never make the mistake to CENTRE dialogues or character names!<br />

Character's Name<br />

at 9.5 cm and above the dialogue.<br />

Page Numbers<br />

should be located in the upper right hand corner and then double space and continue<br />

writing.<br />

See the sample script page (next page) and notice<br />

− the font used (Courier)<br />

− the size of margins all round<br />

− the number of lines on a page<br />

− the length of the lines of dialogue (always indented)<br />

− the spacing between scenes, etc.<br />

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Sample page (reduced)<br />

First Page<br />

A screenplay always begins with “FADE IN:” This has nothing to do with a fading transition on the<br />

screen, but it is an international custom <strong>for</strong> how you should start your script.<br />

Last Page<br />

At the end of your script you should type The End and centre it, or double space, to the far right of<br />

the page, and type FADE OUT. Again this “FADE OUT” has nothing to do with a fading transition<br />

on the screen, but it is just customary to end your script in this way.<br />

Scene Headings: Location<br />

INT/EXT: This refers to the location of the scene. If it is inside it is INT (<strong>for</strong> interior); if it is set<br />

outside it is EXT (<strong>for</strong> exterior). This should be followed by the location.<br />

Scene Headings: Time<br />

DAY/NIGHT: This refers to whether the scene occurs in the day or night. This follows the location.<br />

Note: There is no such thing as EVENING or MORNING. Just use DAY or... NIGHT!!<br />

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Introducing your characters<br />

The first time a character appears in your script, you write the name in CAPITALS, followed by a<br />

'first impression'-description of the character. Please do not write only the age of this person. I<br />

mean, how can we ever see a person is 44 or... 45? Just use your screenwriting talent, and come<br />

up with something better. When you write: “JOHN a fragile, middle aged man” it is already better.<br />

Acting instruction under dialogues<br />

Avoid acting instructions under the dialogues as much as possible. The emotions should be clear<br />

from the context most of the time... don’t take the easy way by writing it under the dialogue. That<br />

will not make good cinema in the end!<br />

No numbering <strong>for</strong> scenes<br />

Avoid numbering scenes at this moment. Do not <strong>for</strong>get to number the pages though.<br />

You only number the scenes when it is a 'shooting script' which will only be seen by yourself or<br />

when actually shooting the film. Now, they make no sense, since scenes can still move within the<br />

script.<br />

Don't direct inside the script.<br />

An often seen mistake is to include camera movements in your script. Although we admit there are<br />

occasions that this can't be avoided, in 99% of the cases it shouldn’t be there. This should be the<br />

job of the director, not the writer. Directing terms includes “CUT TO”, “WIDEN SHOT”, “PAN<br />

ACROSS”. You only use these – very very rarely - when the moment will be completely<br />

misunderstood without it. In general these are terms only <strong>for</strong> the shooting script. This is why you<br />

might see them in some professional scripts. Those scripts are not meant to be read by people like<br />

from a jury. Actually it will “clog up” and distract the read. Your script should flow smoothly as a<br />

readable piece, not a series of instructions.<br />

Some <strong>for</strong>mat difficulties can be easily solved by using screenwriting software.<br />

Check out the next pages to find the right program to use <strong>for</strong> your script!<br />

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NISI MASA Script Contest 2009 - European short film Competition – A Short Scriptwriting Guide<br />

ABOUT SCREENWRITING SOFTWARE<br />

There is software available that helps you getting your script into the right <strong>for</strong>mat.<br />

Below some of the most know programs <strong>for</strong> screenwriting including their websites.<br />

Many screenwriting programs are standalone desktop applications. Others are web applications<br />

and run in a web browser, so no need to install any software. These work with a personal log in.<br />

There are also applications available as add-ins <strong>for</strong> generic word processors such as Microsoft<br />

Word. Sometimes screenwriting programs also incorporate production scheduling and budgeting<br />

capabilities or provide additional collaborative editing tools.<br />

REMARK: We haven’t tested all these programs. If you have any experience or<br />

recommendation, please let us know. Write me at fedor@meccapanza.eu and I will<br />

implement all valuable in<strong>for</strong>mation you give me.<br />

SCREENWRITING SOFTWARE FOR FREE<br />

Page 2 Stage<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows<br />

Page 2 Stage is designed expressly <strong>for</strong> people writing screenplays, scripts, and plays.<br />

The program is available in 30 languages. Page 2 Stage is now free.<br />

However, you must enter a username and password to unlock Page 2 Stage. Otherwise the<br />

scripts you create in demo mode will always be marked 'demo'.<br />

http://www.page2stage.com<br />

ScriptBuddy (free version)<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Internet application<br />

ScriptBuddy is Web-based. In order to use it, you need an account with ScriptBuddy. Your<br />

screenplays are stored in your account so no one else can access them.<br />

http://www.scriptbuddy.com<br />

ScriptTeX<br />

ScriptTeX is a free macro package <strong>for</strong> TeX to <strong>for</strong>mat screenplays and other scripts.<br />

http://www.aidtopia.com/software/scripttex<br />

Sophocles<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows<br />

A standalone word processor <strong>for</strong> writing screenplays and other dramatic scripts. It provides<br />

customizable, industry-standard support <strong>for</strong> feature film and television <strong>for</strong>mats, along with<br />

advanced, fully automated revision handling <strong>for</strong> screenplays in production. Sophocles also<br />

provides a number of unique tools to help you visualize your story’s overall structure.<br />

http://download.cnet.com/Sophocles-<strong>Screenwriting</strong>-Software/3000-2079_4-10030931.html<br />

Zhura<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Internet application<br />

Zhura is a free web-based screenwriting software application <strong>for</strong> writing and <strong>for</strong>matting screenplays<br />

to the film industry standard, as well as other <strong>for</strong>mats. Zhura allows users to collaborate on scripts<br />

in public or in private groups.<br />

http://www.zhura.com<br />

Scripped<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Internet application<br />

Scripped is an online screenplay services company offering three services: script writing, script<br />

registration, and script coverage. Scripped currently does not facilitate collaboration among<br />

screenwriters.<br />

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http://scripped.com<br />

SCREENWRITING SOFTWARE FOR SALE<br />

Script Wizard<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows<br />

Full service script writing add-on to Microsoft® Word. (PC only).<br />

Tools to write, <strong>for</strong>mat, page break, scene number, edit, proof, print and deliver scripts via fax or<br />

email. Ideal <strong>for</strong> both professionals and students working in Microsoft Office environments.<br />

Script Wizzard is not <strong>for</strong> free. Check out the website.<br />

http://www.warrenassoc.com/sw_overview.php<br />

http://www.warrenassoc.com<br />

Final Draft<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows and Mac<br />

Final Draft is a word processor specifically designed <strong>for</strong> writing movie scripts, television episodes<br />

and stage plays. It combines word processing with professional script <strong>for</strong>matting in one package.<br />

http://www.finaldraft.com<br />

Movie Magic Screenwriter<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Mac<br />

The program is designed to automate the <strong>for</strong>matting of Action, Character Name, Dialog and other<br />

elements associated with writing screenplays using Command line completion. This is done mainly<br />

via the Tab and Enter/Return keys.<br />

http://www.screenplay.com<br />

Movie Outline<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows and Mac<br />

Movie Outline was created by a produced writer to take the complexity out of the screenwriting<br />

process. Its intuitive design is based on the principle of step-outlining which allows you to plan your<br />

cinematic structure, develop characters and <strong>for</strong>mat your screenplay scene by scene.<br />

http://www.movieoutline.com<br />

Montage<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Mac<br />

Montage is screenwriting software developed <strong>for</strong> Mac OS X. Montage allows the creation, editing,<br />

and management of screenplays on Macintosh computers. Montage can import Final Draft<br />

documents. text and RTF <strong>for</strong>matted files, it includes custom, pre-<strong>for</strong>matted templates <strong>for</strong> film, TV,<br />

and theater.<br />

http://www.marinersoftware.com/sitepage.php?page=104<br />

http://www.marinersoftware.com<br />

DreamaScript<br />

Plat<strong>for</strong>m: Windows and Mac<br />

DreamaScript <strong>Screenwriting</strong> Software allows you to use templates and methods.<br />

MAC/PC<br />

http://www.dreamascript.com<br />

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GENERAL ADVICE FOR WRITERS OF SHORT SCRIPTS<br />

Short film means short story<br />

First and <strong>for</strong>emost be aware that you are writing a short film. Make sure you write a story which<br />

can be completed in a couple of minutes. That might exclude some stories you want to tell. You will<br />

have to save these <strong>for</strong> later.<br />

Keep it Simple if Possible<br />

When your script is easy to shoot from a production point of view, the better its production values<br />

will be. This because the time, energy and money can be spent on doing it well rather than to just<br />

managing to do it. So be smart! We advice you to use a maximum of 3-4 main characters (i.e.,<br />

those who and take a major part in the story). Your audience has only ten minutes to get to know<br />

and understand your characters, so the fewer you present the easier it will be <strong>for</strong> them to make an<br />

impact. Notice that it is not compulsory. We also advice to use a maximum of three locations, but<br />

of course you are free to ignore our advice in this.<br />

Dialogues<br />

The screen is first and <strong>for</strong>emost a visual medium. Find ways of telling visually what is<br />

happening or what is important. Sound-&-vision scenes in place of dialogue will move the<br />

action <strong>for</strong>ward and can cover a lot of ground quickly. Where possible, show it rather than explain it<br />

in the dialogue. With dialogue, avoid long speeches unless there is a particular reason <strong>for</strong> one -<br />

short sharp exchanges can work better than long discussions. Try to use rich and interesting ones<br />

rather than the mundane speech we might hear every day.<br />

A thing to keep emphasizing on is that scripts are the basis of the visual medium of film. Don’t say<br />

what you can show instead. If the character is upset don't have him say "I'm really upset!” just<br />

show it to us, cinematographically. E.g. have him smash a cup on the table instead.<br />

First Draft<br />

Realize your first draft can be full of mistakes and errors! Yes! It is just a sketch! Just get that story<br />

out. Put it on paper as quick as possible. No worry, it might be not visual enough. This is not a<br />

problem <strong>for</strong> the first version of your artwork. You can correct all this later. You can still improve on<br />

it until you send it. Read our tips again, and you can still then change things that appear not good<br />

enough. Writing is rewriting!<br />

Style and Visual storytelling<br />

Try to see each sentence (or sometimes paragraph) as a shot. Write down only pieces of visual<br />

in<strong>for</strong>mation... things we can actually see. Beautiful prosaic sentences don't belong here. That's <strong>for</strong><br />

a novel. You are writing a blueprint <strong>for</strong> a film at the moment. Find your style. A script should be<br />

easy to read. Images have to appear when one reads it. A dry and clear style will have the best<br />

result.<br />

Order of In<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

What you see first, you write first. Write it the way it appears on the screen. So if you have written<br />

something we cannot actually see... think it over. Try to tell the thing in a visual (or aural) way.<br />

Credibility<br />

Literally everything can happen in the universe of cinema. But when you involve people in your<br />

story, make their decisions credible. If you want your characters to do something unusual or<br />

unlikely, then give them the motivation to do it. That's all it takes to make your audience believe<br />

and go along with the story. But also remember, the imagination of people is also huge! Use it...<br />

People lose interest only when a character does something they can not imagine that someone<br />

would do ever do that. Even in a science fiction piece, characters should behave credibly within the<br />

terms of the story - i.e., “In that situation, yes, he or she would do that . . .” Anyone who knows<br />

about acting and writes should try to ask themselves: “How would it be to play this as an actor?”. It<br />

will make you write a playable and solid, credible script.<br />

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Conflict and crisis<br />

Drama is mostly about conflict and crisis – not about people wanting the same things or agreeing<br />

with each other. A scene will often work best if characters want opposite things at the same time.<br />

And a attractive script often begins with a character at an emotional crossroads, and the decision<br />

they take leads to the story most of the time. Screen your ideas and writings on this.<br />

Indirect In<strong>for</strong>mation<br />

As remarked be<strong>for</strong>e, people have a huge imagination. Also people are socially and psychologically<br />

smarter then you might think. There<strong>for</strong>e it is recommended to keep the audience busy with<br />

thinking, while they are watching your film. If not, they might get bored easily and you will loose<br />

their attention! One way to do this is to check your script on how the in<strong>for</strong>mation gets to your<br />

audience. Do they have to make their conclusions themselves, or are you making them <strong>for</strong> them. If<br />

they have to think, they will get more involved, and you will reach their heart more easily.<br />

USEFULL TIPS:<br />

� Make sure your story is a suitable story <strong>for</strong> a short film.<br />

� Write visually, since the primary quality of film is visual storytelling.<br />

� Give in<strong>for</strong>mation indirectly, to make the audience actively go along with the story.<br />

� Use dialogue imaginatively and only <strong>for</strong> what is not possible to express in images or sound.<br />

� Make your character's actions and decisions credible, so the audience can identify<br />

themselves with them, or at least imagine a person who acts like that, could exist.<br />

� Write a producible script. A script which can be shot easily and in a short time.<br />

� Preferably use a maximum of 3-4 main characters.<br />

� Preferably use a maximum of 3 locations.<br />

� Remember variety in people, places and scenes makes your film more vivid.<br />

� Rewrite your script and keep improving it.<br />

USEFULL CHECKLISTS<br />

Be<strong>for</strong>e you start<br />

These questions might be helpful to ask yourself about character be<strong>for</strong>e you start your screenplay.<br />

� Who is your story about?<br />

� What kind of trouble are my characters in?<br />

� What does your character want and what will your character do to get it?<br />

� What is your character most afraid of (his/her ghost)?<br />

� What's the big question the audience will be wondering about throughout the movie?<br />

While writing<br />

These questions might be helpful to ask yourself when you are in the middle of writing a<br />

screenplay, or when (you think) you are finished.<br />

� Is there an opening hook?<br />

� Can you put the primary conflict more up front?<br />

� Do you set the Genre and Tone of the film from the start?<br />

� Did you introduce the protagonist in a unique and interesting way?<br />

� Why does the story start at the point it starts?<br />

� What is your movie really about?<br />

Our last advice<br />

Please realise "Writing is re-writing". The first draft won’t be as good as you wish it would be. Of<br />

course it is not good! A first draft never is. It is in the refining, re-writing, re-plotting and fine-tuning<br />

that great scripts get made. So our advice: don’t think too much. To get started is important, since<br />

you will make the script by writing it, not by thinking about writing it a thousand times.<br />

A Short <strong>Screenwriting</strong> Guide © 2006-2009 by Fedor Sendak Limperg

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